Reviews For Essence of Loyalty
Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 04/23/07 16:36
Chapter: Betrayed

Hey Gonz!

I am so glad that you picked me to beta this, dear. I particularly enjoyed Fudge's and Umbridge's emotions and findigns in the end of chapter three. Amazing twist! And I love how you've incorporated Umbridge's evillness and thoughts into your fiction. Good luck in the challenge! It looks as if it's just three of us! :)

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Lindsey. You are a wonderful and great beta, thanks for all your imput in this story.

Reviewer: Nevica5
Date: 04/20/07 15:24
Chapter: A Profitable Relationship

Writing Umbridges relationship with Fudge is a unique idea. I like the rivalry between Fudge and Crouch.

Author's Response: Thanks for the rewiev! I enjoyed creating the rival and it made sense conisdering Fudge beat Crouch out for the Minister later, so who says it couldn't have started earlier?

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