I am so glad that you picked me to beta this, dear. I particularly enjoyed Fudge's and Umbridge's emotions and findigns in the end of chapter three. Amazing twist! And I love how you've incorporated Umbridge's evillness and thoughts into your fiction. Good luck in the challenge! It looks as if it's just three of us! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Lindsey. You are a wonderful and great beta, thanks for all your imput in this story.
Writing Umbridges relationship with Fudge is a unique idea. I like the rivalry between Fudge and Crouch.
Author's Response: Thanks for the rewiev! I enjoyed creating the rival and it made sense conisdering Fudge beat Crouch out for the Minister later, so who says it couldn't have started earlier?