Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/24/12 4:15
Chapter: The Forbidden Forest
My favorite part of this chapter was when Madame Promfrey said she was getting too old for the job and yet she is still their until the 7th book.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, she always thinks she's too old for her job. Guess she's not since she's still there when the trio are there. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/24/12 3:43
Chapter: Ends May Bring Peace
OH MY GOD, HOW SAD!!! I have to be honest though... I didn't like Remus' grandparents, but it's still sad. This story is so good, I had to take my mom's iPod so I could read it... I'm sorry I couldn't read it today, I had orientation at Arapahoe Community College and then I was busy after that...
Author's Response: I can see why you didn't like them, though they did try to redeem themselves. That's okay, college orientation is obviously more important :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/23/12 5:55
Chapter: Hogsmeade
Haha, nice!(: Do you like eggnog by the way?
Author's Response: I love eggnog. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/23/12 5:33
Chapter: The Room of Requirement
I loved how they discovered the room and started their training.(: This is exciting!(:
Author's Response: Haha yeah that was fun to write. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/23/12 5:13
Chapter: Tackling the Boggart
Professor Jones died?! Oh my gosh, what from?! I liked him... And poor Remus having to visit both hospitals for each grandparent. Remus just doesn't have any luck...
Author's Response: You find out what he dies from later on. Yeah he really doesn't have any luck. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/23/12 4:47
Chapter: Alley Wanderings and Ghost Stories
What happend to Remus and his family?! I'm nervous, but don't tell me... I love the scary story part, that was so funny especially with Willie. I completly forgot about it being summer so they couldn't use magic. I wanted them to start their animagi training, haha, but I guess I'll just have to wait...
Author's Response: You'll find that out soon. Yeah I forgot they couldn't use magic either, hence why they just research. They'll start it soon. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 18:27
Chapter: Another Year Ends
Uh-oh, new D.A.D.A. teacher....! Nice finish to the second year!(:
Author's Response: There are going to be a lot of new Defense Against the Dark Arts professors. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 18:01
Chapter: Animagi
This is by far the best chapter! I like how they come to the conclusion of becoming animagi. It was nice to see Hagrid in this chapter too. I have forgotten about him... The boys never seem to visit him. While I was reading this, I started to think anout the map they created and how they came to make it. That now reminds me of their nicknames and makes me wonder when they will get those. My other favorite part was when they were choosing their classes. I love every class offered at Hogwarts so it was cool to see what they picked. I can't wait until their third year because I have a feeling that is when a lot of extra things are going to start happening... Nice job again!(:
Author's Response: Hagrid was in this chapter? Well they're not as close with him as the trio was. Their nicknames are a while away. They won't get them until they become animagi. Hopefully you like their third year. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 17:30
Chapter: A Lupine Christmas
Haha, nice. I enjoyed the piano part.(:
Author's Response: Haha yeah that part was fun to write. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 16:53
Chapter: Dinner Parties and Bad News
Another death??! Poor Alice. Who is next on the list to suffer from someone dying? Don't answer that, haha.(: Nice chapter on the the twentieth!!!(:
Author's Response: I'm not even sure I remember who it is...but chapter twenty is a nice, cheerful chapter! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 16:30
Chapter: Remus's Tale
YAY!!!(: Nice, what's next haha. Remus needs blood and meat, or else he goes mad. I need to read the next chapter, or else I go mad!(:
Author's Response: The boys take a little while to figure out what to do, but I think chapter twenty one is where it occurs to them. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 15:12
Chapter: Abandonment
I don't like this abandonment, haha, it's sad...Soon enough they will tell and start becoming animagus's, that'll be cool to read.
Author's Response: Yeah, but it's almost over. They just needed some time to process what they found out. Animagus training does start soon, I believe, so you'll get to read that soon. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 14:48
Chapter: Discoveries
FINALLY!!!(: They figured it out!(:
I understand where you come from when it comes to writing about quidditch, it must be hard. J.K. Rowling didn't like writing about it either and I don't think I do either, but it's something I want and have to learn.
I was confused in one part and that was the Madame Jules for the librarian... I could have swarn that Madame Pince was in the "first" book. What happened to her to not come to this year. She eventually comes back...
Author's Response: Haha yes they did! Of course it's something you have to learn to write. I did write a fair bit of it in my other Vic's, but kind. Of let it go in this one, especially since a lot of the focus is on Remus and Sirius, neither of whom play. Huh... You might be right. Illhave to check to see if Madam Pince was mentioned before. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 7:59
Chapter: Research, Bad Potions, and Tryouts
Okay, I was nervous about the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher...
And how did you come up with all those names for the class?
Woot woot for James' sake on becoming Chaser! Was he always a Chaser, I forgot?
I can feel them getting closer to Remus' secret!!!(:
Author's Response: Ohno, there's nothing to worry about from Jones. I don't know, I think I just pulled names out of the air. Yeah James is a Chaser. There was an interview with JKR where she said that, but because of the movies, most think he was a Seeker. nd you're one chapter away from it! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 7:32
Chapter: Back to School
True that, sist-uh!(:
August 24th, Peter's birthday, haha.
Nice job on the sorting part. You skipped a huge gap which was cool because before long things could get boring. But your story doesn't fit the boring category, it fits the amazing category.(:
Author's Response: Haha yay, my story isn't boring! Seriously, that's one of my worst fears when writing - boring people. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 7:11
Chapter: Diagon Alley
I feel so bad for Remus again.
I completely forgot about quidditch so that will be cool to read this time.
And I just want them to figure out Remus' secret. All they need is there, they just need to put two and two together, haha.(:
P.S. What's your pottermore name, I could accept you as a friend. Mine is SpiritDawn5286.
Author's Response: Yup, there's Quidditch. I actually really hate writing it, so there's not much in terms of actual Quidditch, but it's mentioned a lot throughout the story. You're really close to them finding out his secret. I think my name on Pottermore is hexscarlett15, but I honestly don't even go on there anymore.
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/22/12 6:43
Chapter: Summer Moons
Poor Remus. I feel so bad for him. I was wondering if that was the Wolfbanes potion?
I love this story even more then I did before because I am excited to read what happens through the course of their lives at Hogwarts.
I love this story and I love reviewing it. It's great and you're probably going to recieve a review from every chapter. I hope that is okay with you...(:
Author's Response: Nope not the Wolfsbane. I think in Half Blood Prince, Slughorn said the potion was invented recently, so that was just an attempt at a cure. Hopefully you like what happens during their school years (and after). Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/21/12 21:34
Chapter: Operation Get Crane Back
P.S. Have Frank's birthday be over the summer, haha and my birthday is August 9th, haha. I don't know when Peter's birthday is in August, but I did know James' and Remus' birthdays. Maybe Peter's is close to mine...(:
Author's Response: If I never say when Frank's birthday is, feel free to think it's in the summer :p Peter's birthday... is either August 14th or August 24th, either way not too far from yours.
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/21/12 21:31
Chapter: Operation Get Crane Back
I have to admit that I was a little nervous for the prank they were going to pull on Professor Crane. I really like this so far, but my only criticism is that the second half of the year was really short and Remus never had werewolf problems. Well he did, but you never wrote about them, haha. Oh well, I just can't wait until his friends figure it out!
I was surprised that Ravenclaw won the House Cup and not Gryffindor. I myself would sort myself into Ravenclaw so that made me happy.(:
I'm also surprised that it's already the end of their first year. It's only chapter eleven and there are still so any chapters to go. I can't wait to read what's next.
I really enjoyed the "first book", you did a terrific job writing it. Now onwad to the "second book!"
Author's Response: The prank kind of freaked me out what I was writing it, in regards to what people would think of it. The second half was short because my original intention was to have each year in school be eleven chapters, but by fourth year it was shortened to nine. A lot of attention is paid to Remus's werewolf problems, but I did have to give him a rest from the torment once in a while :p That'll come back in the next chapter.
Wow, I forgot I had Ravenclaw win. Gryffindor probably wins at some point. Glad that made you happy. According to Pottermore, I'm a Hufflepuff, but I love Ravenclaw too, so making them win was something I didn't mind doing.
This stretches well past their seventh year of Hogwarts, so that's why first year is already over. Glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/21/12 21:01
Chapter: Birthdays, Preparations and Banshees
Haha, I like how all of their birthday's are close together because it was really funny! When are Peter's and Frank's birthday? They were the only ones left out... Good job yet again and onward to chapter eleven!(:
P.S. I get so confuesed when Harry talks because he reminds me of Harry Potter, haha.
Author's Response: Well James and Remus, according to canon, are only two weeks apart and since we never found out Sirius's birthday, it became April. Peter's is in August and I never really established one for Frank... Thanks for reading!
