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Name: Kif (Signed) · Date: 11/23/09 10:02 · For: The Prophecy
Excellent chapter - really lifted my mood. It's sad to see the end of Mrs Sherman. She was such a nice character - but better to not see her than to see her getting killed by those vicious Death Easters!

Loved the scene between Sybll and Dumbledore - it was very well written.

Good job and thanks so much!

Author's Response: I know, it's sad Mrs. Sherman won't be around. She'll stop by their new house, but you won't actually see her. Sirius will just say something. It is better than her getting killed. I'm glad you liked that scene because it was really hard to write. Thanks for reading!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 11/23/09 1:04 · For: The Prophecy
Peter was the one who told the DE's where Remus and Sirius lived, they just don't know yet that he's working against them. Has Voldy already decided he's going after Harry? And if he has already decided that why did he wait until Harry was 15 mo old before attacking? Peter was the Secret Keeper, he could have told Voldy and/or the DE's anytime. Snape went to Dumbledore and warned him who Voldy was going after because he was in love with Lily. Is there something else Snape knows?

Author's Response: In a nutshell, yes Peter did let it slip, though he had no idea he was talking to a Death Eater. He hasn't turned yet, that's in the next chapter. Voldemort hasn't decided yet. Peter only became Secret Keeper a week before the Potters died. There are going to be things happening that lead up to them believing there's a spy and all that. Snape doesn't know anything other than Voldemort wants to kill Lily. Thanks for reading!

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 11/16/09 15:28 · For: Sealing Their Fate
sweet the third time they defy the dark lord

Author's Response: Yep it's downhill from there. Thanks for reading!

Name: Kif (Signed) · Date: 11/16/09 10:13 · For: Sealing Their Fate
Very nice chapter. It's sad to see the inevitable emergence of Evil Peter but you have written it very well. I simply love Lily and her caring nature as shown by her interaction with Remus in this chapter. Out of curiosity - how long till Harry gets his name if it is not top secret information? :D

Anyway - good job, look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: It is sad, but it had to be done. I always pictured Lily as a very caring person and that would only be amplified when she's pregnant. It's top secret information, but I can tell you that you'll find out in chapter 89. Thanks for reading!

Name: fightingokra4life (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 22:28 · For: Sealing Their Fate
very intense at the end! love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 21:45 · For: Sealing Their Fate
Peter is about to become his rat self for real. Suspected the Prewitt's weren't the real deal by the way they just showed up at the door. Figured this was when they had been killed. Molly will be devastated. So who showed up? Dumbledore? Sirius? Remus? All of the above? And third time's the charm.

Author's Response: Yeah, he'll be a complete rat in chapter 87. Wow, that's pretty cool you suspected that because that wasn't the initial plan. I got halfway through the chapter and decided that those were fake Prewitts. Remus definitely didn't show up because of the full moon the night before, but you've got a safe guess with the first two. Thanks for reading!

Name: stefunny2010 (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 17:03 · For: Sealing Their Fate
Dun dun dun! There it is, the prophecy is basically set in stone now. I was really surprised you updated so soon! (not that im complaining;) ) Great job!!

Author's Response: Yep, the prophecy is set in motion now. Harry just needs to be born for them to be marked for death. Yeah, I wrote about 6 chapters in the past 2 weeks so my updates will be a little more frequent and I'm anticipating finishing this during my winter break. Thanks for reading!

Name: stefunny2010 (Signed) · Date: 11/14/09 18:23 · For: Be at Peace
Aw:( That was such a sad chapter. I think everyone feels that way, about knowing death is coming and thinking they'll be prepared and then it happens and they're not. Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think anyone is prepared for it, even if they know it's coming. It's not such a slap in the face that it would be if it was sudden, but I don't think it's an easier to take. Thanks for reading!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 11/11/09 1:33 · For: A Compartment For Four
Having lost a spouse, both parents, and, unfortunately many others, I've more familiar with the grief process than I ever wanted to be.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm sorry :(

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 11/10/09 19:59 · For: Be at Peace
Beautifully done. No matter how long you've had to prepare, knowing it was coming, steeling yourself against the moment. You're never, ever really prepared. James, Lily, Sirius, Remus, and their other friends are all doing exactly what I would expect in this situation.

Author's Response: Good to know you thought it was realistic. I'm never sure about these kinds of things. James knew it was coming, but he really wasn't prepared. Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Good to know you thought it was realistic. I'm never sure about these kinds of things. James knew it was coming, but he really wasn't prepared. Thanks for reading!

Name: HBPIA (Signed) · Date: 11/10/09 17:07 · For: Be at Peace
YAY !first reviewer!
you have been updating fast latly and thats a good and a bad thing. good... because then i have something to read, but bad cause itgs getting closer to the end we all fear, and know. its sad reading over alll the old chapters again and laughing and loving these characters , when you know how it end ultimatly. i do love your story, by the way.

Author's Response: Ha, yay first reviewer! I've written about five chapters in the past week, so I was feeling particularly cheerful and updated early. I know, it is nearing the end but there's a number of chapters left before it officially ends. Thanks for reading!

Name: stefunny2010 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 19:35 · For: Worrisome and Joyous
Aw:) I think that has got to be one of, if not the, cutest chapter;) I like how you put James' parents reactions in and how his dad gave him some 'adivce'. Great job!!

Author's Response: Aww, yay! This was a fun chapter to write. I had to put in their reactions, they're so excited to have a grandchild. Thanks for reading!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 19:05 · For: Worrisome and Joyous
Really good chapter. James and Lily will indeed make wonderful parents for 15 months. Will they tell Petunia and Vernon? Sirius and Remus are two of the best friends they could have, Alice and Frank are expecting. More love in the world. Glad to see Sirius and Remus wouldn't starve.

Author's Response: They really will make wonderful parents, it's horrible they don't get to live that long to do it. Well, in SS Petunia knows the name of Harry, so they'll find out eventually. Yeah there's lots of love in the world in this chapter. After everything they've been through it's what they need. Ha, no they won't starve. Thanks for reading!

Name: bigtimer (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 9:55 · For: Worrisome and Joyous
loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 9:07 · For: Can't Always be the Hero
Haha I loved Jame's response to Lily's wonderful news!! Great chapter, well written altercation with the Death Eaters. Really hated Peter in the beginning of the chapter, he really irks me!

Author's Response: I just had to have James faint! His dillemma is that he's so young and he's going to be a dad, hence the faint (and it's the typical male reaction in television and movies). You're going to be really hating Peter at the beginning of chapter 85. He's okay for the next two because he's barely in them, but he gets a section devoted to him in 85 in which he makes his first big step towards the Death Eaters. Thanks for reading!

Name: stefunny2010 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/09 0:13 · For: Can't Always be the Hero
I like how this chapter had a different kind of layout, with all the different points of view. Hearing from Peter was a definite treat, sure he is not excused from what he will end up doing, but knowing what his thoughts could have been... And the Lily's news is the best kind ever I cant wait to see how James reactes after he wakes or how Remus and Sirius react. Great job!! :D

Author's Response: Yeah there really were a lot of different points of view. You'll be seeing more of Peter's thinking soon and his first real step towards the 'dark side.' James will pretty much be in shock, you'll see more of that in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Name: x3CherryWatermelonx3 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 20:20 · For: Lockdown
I fell in love with this chapter, as I do with every one! Absolutely incredible...

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: x3CherryWatermelonx3 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/09 20:20 · For: Lockdown
I fell in love with this chapter, as I do with every one! Absolutely incredible...

Name: x3CherryWatermelonx3 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 23:44 · For: Feeling Normal
Absolutely loved the chapter. You're an amazing writer:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: mwpp4everplusleandnt (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 22:22 · For: Can't Always be the Hero
Where to begin? I have been following this story for about 9 months now and just finally became a member of mugglenet--now I can tell you that this is my favorite story! I love the way it's written, full of things both funny and sad.
You make me really feel what the characters are feeling and thinking. I get really wrapped up in the story. You did well with Peter, I felt sorry for him but he is weak and I'll hate when he turns traitor. I love your Lily, and James has just the perfect amount of cheerfulness, luck, and goodness (and a bit of arrogance of course). And Sirius...is Sirius! Nothing more to say! Most of all though, I loved the way you wrote Remus. He's my favorite character to read about. With him especially I felt every bit of pain, humor, and happiness. Keep it up! You Want To Make a Memory is the winner of the QSQ awards in my book!

Author's Response: Wow thanks! That's something that's really important to me when I read - feeling what the characters are - so I try to put that in my writing. Ooh Peter... you do want to feel sorry for him, but trust me, in time you'll just hate him completely. I'm never sure how I write Lily and James so it's great to hear that you like them! Ha, Sirius is just Sirius and that's good enough. Remus is my favorite so he does get a lot of attention. Aww, thanks! Glad you like it!

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