MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/14/10 11:23 · For: Life on the Moon
Well, that's gonna happen all right--Peter Pettigrew is going to be a name that no one will forget, but not for a good reason. Peter seems to be living in a dream world. He doesn't seem to understand that if he really wants something he's going to have to go after it and work for it--not just want it. He's going to have to develop some self-esteem. Again, Peter's not taking responsibility for his decisions. Remus is so sweet. I wonder how it will go with him living with Sirius. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah Peter did get what he wanted technically. He really is doing that and it's pathetic of him. He'll really be in a dream world towards the end. No he's not taking responsibility. He likes to blame everyone for things that are essentially his fault. Ooh Remus and Sirius living together was one of my favorite things to write. Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 13:18 · For: No Next Year
Geez, talk about paranoid. We all sat here and watched the other three Marauders try to talk to and help Peter but he refused and now he's blaming them for not caring about him. You made their last ride on the train sound so sad and final. It reminds me specifically of graduations--you're so excited for the end but you're sad when it's really all over. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Peter is being pretty stupid. It's just all leading up to his eventual turn to the Death Eaters. It's all a misunderstanding. It was sad, but you're right, it's like graduation, you're excited but sad at the same time. Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 12:53 · For: So Little Time
Being forever an optimist, I hoped that Peter's father would be alive. On the one hand, I understand why Peter joined the Death Eaters but on the other hand why would he joing the Death Eaters, since I'm assuming they had something to do with Peter's Dad's death. I thought for a minute that James was going to just outright pop the question:D This has got to be such a scary time. James is right--they have to worry about being grabbed on their way home from work. Great chapter.

Author's Response: It's fair to wonder that because the Death Eaters did have something to do with it. You'll see him wondering the same thing in chapter 87, I believe. The question is asked a few times, though not always referring to Peter. Ha, I guess it did look like that with James. No... he won't be popping the question for a while. It is a scary time for them, but they do have some happy times throughout, though it won't be long before it's just darkness after darkness. Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 15:30 · For: Disappearing Relations
That must be shocking to open up the newspaper and find out one of your family members is missing. I'm sure Sirius is totally mortified that his brother is a Death Eater. You can see in many ways why Peter turned to the Death Eaters. I think he felt powerless--he felt that even his friends didn't trust him and unfortunately he didn't feel very intelligent. I hope Mr. Pettigrew shows up alive. Great chapter.

Author's Response: It was really shocking for Peter to see that. Sirius is definitely mortified and it only gets worse as the story goes on. You've got a good measure of why Peter turns to the Death Eaters. He did feel very powerless and unintelligent. You'll see how that pans out in the later chapters. You'll see what happens to Mr. Pettigrew in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/11/10 14:44 · For: The Best Kind of Friends
I wish Remus had just stayed at school with the rest of the Marauders. I think it would've been a more pleasant full moon and he doesn't have that many more to spend with his friends. My favorite part was near the end when they gathered around Remus' bed so they could be with him when he woke up. I always enjoy their conversations. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Remus really should have stayed, but he can be pretty stupid when it comes to things like that, which is exactly why his friends decided to come visit him. I loved writing that bit, especially when Remus woke up and was terrified to see them all there at first. Thanks for reading!

Name: chattyswimmer (Signed) · Date: 05/10/10 17:28 · For: Epilogue
Wow. I cant believe you wrote ALL that. Actually, I cant believe i read all that! But it didn't seem too long when I was reading! EXTREMELY well done, I even teared up a bit at the end there. Outstanding! I wish there had been a bit more Lily and James, but what can you do. After this, I really really hate Peter Pettigrew....oh! And I couldn't believe it when you mentioned Teddy at the very end!! Great ending!

Author's Response: I can't believe I wrote it all either. I think I stared in amazement at the computer screen when I was done. Yeah, I really didn't mention a lot of James/Lily, but I did love writing the parts that had it. Yay! That was the intention for you to hate Peter. Teddy actually wasn't supposed to be in the end, but when DH came out, he was put in. Thanks for reading!

Name: Quite Simply (Signed) · Date: 05/10/10 14:57 · For: A Compartment For Four
Hey, last 2 ppl who wrote reviews, why? It was EXACTLY 1000! And then it was exactly 1001, which isn't as cool as 1000, but was still cool. but then you wrote another review and it was 1002! now it is completely ruined! oh well. don't ruin it again when it gets to 2000. the story is amazing, by the way.

Author's Response: Um... well we can always try for 2000! Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/10/10 13:43 · For: A Well-Deserved Date
To this day I wonder what possessed Severus to open his mouth and call Lily a mudblood. I'm sure this is the tricky part of the story and the part that lets you be creative--the year when James started dating Lily. Sirius sounds so playful but I'm sure he was a pain in the butt to deal with--always pranking people, especially Severus, taking other people's things, like Remus' chocolate, saying the wrong thing. It's hard to believe that in just a few years he goes to Azkaban. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah I've always wondered that too. He regrets it, but he knows he deserved Lily's anger I guess. This was fairly tricky. I didn't think James was the overly romantic guy, but you'll see how that pans out over the story. Sirius is playful, but he is the biggest pain in the butt imaginable. I know! I can't believe in only two or three years he'll be in prison. That was a sad thing to write about... Thanks for reading!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/10/10 13:12 · For: Furious Centaurs and Utter Rubbish
I'm baaack!!! I was reading too many stories at once so I decided to finish them one at a time. I can't believe the boys wanted to take on a herd of centaurs. Although, I agree with them--those centaurs seem kind of snooty. I don't know why they think they own the Forbidden Forest. But again, I guess they don't like werewolves. I don't blame them for not wanting to go to Madam Pomfrey. I don't like going to the doctor either. Usually no good comes of it. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yay, you're back! Oh yeah they were snooty centaurs, which is basically why the boys would want to take them on. Yeah, they really didn't want to go to her, but James is the one who caves in the end and goes running. Thanks for reading!

Name: Alluring_Twilight (Signed) · Date: 05/03/10 7:29 · For: A Compartment For Four
Great start to the story. I'm definietly sucked into reading it now.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading (and the 1000th review!)

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 04/19/10 19:59 · For: Epilogue
Great ending. Really good story. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 04/19/10 19:53 · For: Crashing Down
That would be because it wasn't Sirius who betrayed everyone.

Author's Response: Well they don't know that at the time. Thanks for reading!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 04/19/10 19:36 · For: The Traitor
James and Lily and Siriuse are all very wrong. It's usually the weak minded who prove to be the weak link.

Author's Response: That's true, but Peter's proving to be smarter than they think, considering he planted all these doubts in their heads about Remus. He wouldn't look like the obvious choice. Thanks for reading!

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 04/19/10 19:18 · For: Falling Apart
Peter needs to die now. 'Course the plot might not work right if he did, but I'd certainly feel better.

Author's Response: Yeah the plot would fall through if he did die, but it would definitely be deserved. Thanks for reading!

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 7:54 · For: Epilogue
I really shouldn't read these, they depress me so thoroughly.
This was a really well written, epic story. There were certainly parts, from the Sirius telling Snape where to find out about Remus and on, that I thought could have been handled better. But that said, this was mostly fantastic.
4.7/5 stars.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 03/26/10 12:42 · For: Epilogue
Awww, I absolutely loved this fan fic. Good luck on your next writing adventure!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just have to go find that adventure now... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 03/26/10 12:24 · For: Crashing Down
I really like how short and sweet you kept the attack of Voldemort...some stories seem to over do it. Amazing chapter and story!

Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to keep it short. Besides, JKR describes it in DH, so I just wanted to do Lily and James's final moments before they were killed. Thanks for reading!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 03/26/10 12:21 · For: The Traitor
Wow, I cannot believe that there are only a few more chapters left...:-( Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yep only a couple more. Thanks for reading!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 03/26/10 12:19 · For: Falling Apart
Ughh I really dislike Peter!! Terrible things to do to Remus...Lovely chapter though

Author's Response: Peter really was terrible, but he had to cover himself so he did it. Thanks for reading!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 03/26/10 12:11 · For: Distance
Love seeing everyone together for Christmas!! Amazing story

Author's Response: Hold that love until you read the next chapter... it may not be such a happy Christmas. Thanks for reading!

You must login (register) to review.