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Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 04/21/07 14:29
Chapter: Diagon Alley

i think the first chapter was a little slow, but interesting, but i know this will turn out to be a really good story. nice plotline

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Babieblonde. This is a relationship-story rather than an action-story, but there will be development. Regards, GhV

Reviewer: carsrac
Date: 04/21/07 14:12
Chapter: Diagon Alley

Good story. Well builded up.
I hope I can read the rest of the chapters very soon.

Author's Response: Dear Carsrac, I think most of them are up now, although there has been a hitch with displaying them in the right order. Thanks for reviewing! GhV

Reviewer: BatBogeyHexes
Date: 04/21/07 14:11
Chapter: Diagon Alley

That was an excellent fic. I never thought of the fact that Ginny would probably hate Hermione before meeting her and it's a great concept. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, BatBogeyHexes. I think it was more fear than real hatred (Ginny is embarrassed about having wronged Hermione AND she feels insecure about Harry AND she is still fragiule from her Tom Riddle encounter) but Ginny would have been a saint not to feel some discomfort. Keep reading; their relationship will improve! Regards, GhV

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 04/21/07 13:40
Chapter: Diagon Alley

This was pretty good. It shows promise, anyways. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, HJPCATI. There has been a hitch with the order of publication of the chapters, but the whole story should be up soon. Regards, GhV

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