this is an amazing start! you have really truely held my attention and got me hooke on this story (no easy task in the first chapter) please update yesterday, so i can read more now :)
this is an awesome start. the 4th paragraph was really good i luved it. how she talks about she would choose the homework and stuff over this. i really cant wait to read more. update soon ill def read and review!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!