Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 12/17/04 14:35
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

touching....i like it!

Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 12/17/04 14:35
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

touching....i like it!

Reviewer: Lycanthropist
Date: 12/16/04 20:19
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

A very profound and extremely well written piece, Seren. I loved your portrayal of Goyle and Luna, and found them to be very much IC. Luna's persistence was almost like an investigation to figure out Goyle; she's definitely the type not to judge a book by its cover, and that perspective in itself made this story great. Goyle's struggle, I believe, outlined his Slytherin ambition for normality, and his drawings gave cunning the spotlight it needed. You have given me a new outlook on Gregory Goyle, even if it isn't canon, and have done justice to your Special Needs Project. Give yourself a pat on the back, Seren. You deserve it!

Reviewer: Jules
Date: 12/16/04 20:03
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

It's a very touching story - though I never had any problems of that kind. The message was so beautifully conveyed, that I had to get the tissue box out. Lovely, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: dracolover
Date: 12/16/04 17:37
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

that was awesome...it was full of emotion! and you handled the subject very well!!!

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 12/16/04 17:30
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

I no that waz OOC but I think the point of equalness waz very important, for disabled kidz evrywere.

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 12/16/04 17:30
Chapter: Enough For An Angel

Woah! Awesome story, to say the least. Definitely a look at Goyle I doubt the world has ever seen. Awesome discription, and of course the characterization was amazing -- Luna was perfect. A truly awesome fic, but wth one grammar error. Near the beginning -- the first tutoring session, I think, Luna says "Write you name" instead of "Write your name." Really, though, a truly awesome fic! Cheers!

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