Reviews For Brighter Morning
Reviewer: thisby
Date: 06/27/07 23:02
Chapter: Diagonally

This story is great--I'm really enjoying it. Thanks!

Reviewer: kati6110
Date: 06/27/07 16:38
Chapter: Diagonally

This is a great story. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 06/27/07 13:56
Chapter: Diagonally

Another great chapter
I wonder if Arthur is jealous of Harry's magic.
Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: cgi1
Date: 06/24/07 7:43
Chapter: Diagonally

the time it takes to validate a new chapter

Author's Response: That was partly my fault. Very busy traveling right now.

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 06/19/07 11:03
Chapter: Rude Awakening

i love your story!! please update soon!! i'm dying to know what happens next!!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 05/28/07 13:20
Chapter: Impatient Hope

Love the story...look forward to reading later chapters.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 05/28/07 6:48
Chapter: Rude Awakening

I find the interaction with Harry and Snape very interesting!

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 05/14/07 10:31
Chapter: Emerald City

Oh and why is this chapter called Emerald City
Also what was Tonks on about when she said he always has to torment you or are we not meant to know yet?

Author's Response: I'm just borrowing from Oz. Emerald City is where the wizard lives. Tonks just means that all Potters (this would be the third generation of them we are referring to) must torment Snape. Some kind of cosmic family requirement.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 05/14/07 10:30
Chapter: Emerald City

bit of a slow chapter but obviously you need to get the story and info out there
my only problem was there seemed to be a few things that didn't connect, like you'd missed out a few sentences or something
But always brilliant to rwad can't wait for the update

Author's Response: thanks. I'll give it a re-read and see if I can make it flow better.

Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 05/13/07 22:50
Chapter: Impatient Hope

I love the creative premise for this story... i can't wait to see what happens. Congrats on a new plot

Reviewer: BeautifulDreamer07
Date: 05/13/07 22:43
Chapter: Emerald City

Wow...this story is amazing!

I think you've got the characterization of Snape perfect! His reactions and comebacks are exactly like they are in canon! Good job! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Thanks. I <3 Snape.

Reviewer: Liya
Date: 05/07/07 5:13
Chapter: Impatient Hope

Great story! Update soon.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 05/06/07 13:35
Chapter: Impatient Hope

I love this story can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks, more on the way.

Reviewer: ilovetheremuslupins
Date: 05/05/07 22:31
Chapter: Impatient Hope

Best fan fiction I've read so far.. you actually know the meaning of subtlety, at least more so than the rest. Is there more coming? Please please please?

Author's Response: Thanks. I've been hacking at this fanfic writing thing a looong time. Love this universe, I must say.

Reviewer: Darkness Enshrouds
Date: 05/05/07 21:55
Chapter: One Morning in Little Whinging

Poor Arthur!

It's so hard not to feel sorry for him!

This is an excellent story--one of the most original ideas I've seen in a while. I like how you brought Snape in. Hopefully he turns out to be more helpful than the toerag we all know him to be. :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it original. I've been told it is also cliché, but that only made me want to tackle it properly all the more so.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 04/29/07 6:26
Chapter: Dear Mr. Potter

A great chapter keep em coming

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 04/25/07 12:55
Chapter: One Morning in Little Whinging

This looks like it has potential
i have read so many storys about memory loss but this has a unique quality

update very soon please please please cant wait to read more

Author's Response: I submitted chapter 2, so it should be up shortly. Thanks for feeding me back!

Reviewer: BeautifulDreamer07
Date: 04/20/07 20:56
Chapter: One Morning in Little Whinging

Very good start! Update ASAP!

Author's Response: thanks. chapter 2 will be up soon.

Reviewer: nonetogood
Date: 04/20/07 20:15
Chapter: One Morning in Little Whinging

Well this is a good start and an interesting start. I have read fics with harry losing his memory but every time he sleeps is original. I like this alot please update soon

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is in the queue. Thanks for feeding me back!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 04/20/07 20:09
Chapter: One Morning in Little Whinging

I'm the first review! Yay!
Well, this looks pretty interesting. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hopefully first of many ;-)

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