Reviews For Dreaming
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/22/08 16:34
Chapter: Hermione

Very good, my favourite was the second switching between harry and Ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. =]

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/05/07 0:22
Chapter: Hermione

awwwwww, H€rmion€ is so romantic.=Sammy

Author's Response: Yes, even a bookworm can be romatic. ^^

Author's Response: romantic** I meant

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/05/07 0:20
Chapter: Ginny and Harry

* still sobbing* Anoth€r b€autifull po€m. You ar€ gr€at=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/05/07 0:16
Chapter: Harry

* sobbing uncontrollably* That was th€ b€st thing I'v€ €v€r r€ad in po€try. Th€ b€st €motional on€ that is. Poor Harry, h€ r€ally d€s€rv€s a chanc€ at a normal lif€. You ar€ an €xr€m€ly tal€nt€d po€t.=Sammy

Author's Response: I really wanted to write something showing that all Harry wants is a normal, happy life, but unlike most, he can't have that. I'm glad you thought it was emotional. Thanks for the kind review.

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 04/27/07 0:55
Chapter: Hermione

these were good but i liked the first one with only harry the best. Its because, to me, the saddest and the one filled with the most...wishing, and wanting, and hope, if you know what i mean. Nice Job!

Author's Response: I know what you mean. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 04/27/07 0:55
Chapter: Hermione

these were good but i liked the first one with only harry the best. Its because, to me, the saddest and the one filled with the most...wishing, and wanting, and hope, if you know what i mean. Nice Job!

Author's Response: ...

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/25/07 21:19
Chapter: Hermione

You...you...

You are awesome at these types of poems. Awe. Some. :D ('These types of poems' meaning romance poems, sorta.) How do you do it? It's wonderful! I don't think I would change a singl line of this poem. Excellent job! I love the emotions I can feel from this.

~Kate

Author's Response: Your reviews are "Awe. Some." Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/25/07 21:18
Chapter: Ginny and Harry

Oh...my...god. You have a gift. I absolutely love this poem. Wow. Wow. Am I allowed to say that over an over?

I love the ending. "I dream of you." How sweet! Ah! I can't get over it. It is too awesome.

...okay, I am seriously gushing now. :D

One nitpick:
I dream about laughter,
I dream about cries.


'Cries' doesn't seem like the right word there. Maybe 'the cries' or 'their cries', or something?

Otherwise, I totally love this poem.

~Kate

P.S. - I can't beleive I didn't notice you had new chapters up! *headdesk*

Author's Response: Ohmigosh thank you for reviewing. No on else is... I was discourgaed and I didn't want to write any more cuz I thought maybe people didn't like them... but now I think I will write some more chapters! Thanks for all of the helpful reviews!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/14/07 9:35
Chapter: Harry

That is so...sad. I feel awful for Harry. I mean, he has to go and fight Voldy...and he sacrifices everything for it (well, except his life, so far.) I don't know if I have a favorite line in this poem. It is all so touching. I mean, most of us have all those things (happiness, love, joy, comfort, peace), and we take them as commonplace, no? But Harry doesn't have them and it is just so...sad. Wonderful job - you really made me think and feel for Harry.

~Kate

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! It is very sad. Life doesn't always go the way we want it, and a lot of people aren't grateful of what they have. It makes you feel bad for people (like Harry) who have to make sacrifices in their lives for others to be happy.

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