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Name: Hokey (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 18:43 · For: Chapter 1
Awww! *sniffle* I loved this fic. You've captured Luna brilliantly; the characterization is excellent and this is one of the few Luna fics I've read that actually feels canon, and believable.

I loved the first part, and all the things Luna's father said. Although we haven't met him in the books, that is exactly how I pictured him, and it explains why Luna is the crazy way she is! =) Without spelling it out, you made the love and caring between the two obvious. Brilliant!

The whole story is well thought out; it's an excellent bunny. Some plot holes weren't exactly filled - like how Luna found out about Harry's cloak, and the fact that a Threstral was still roaming around in London although it can perfectly well find its way back home. This, however, was forgotten as the whole story goes at a high and steady pace, which keeps it interesting and exciting.

I love all of this story to pieces. But especially I love your excellent characterization, the relationship you display between Luna and both her parents, and the tear-inducing ending scene. Those you've done a great job with! You should be proud! =)

~Jennifer

Author's Response: Thank you. this is by far the best review that I have ever gotten for any fic. I admit, that I am especially proud of this fic. It turned out much better than I had expected. I know what you mean about the plot holes. I tried to tie up all the loose ends as much as possible, but as you said, the story moves in such a way that the plot holes are almost un-noticable, and if they are, they are not so major that the reader has a chance to dwell on them. Thanks again for the awesome review.


Name: XPadfootxlivezxonX (Signed) · Date: 06/27/07 21:16 · For: Chapter 1
Aww that was a really good story it brought a tear to my eye! Brava.

Paige


Name: cyt_potter (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 18:22 · For: Chapter 1
Great one shot! I love Luna, and I really like how you wrote her character, and the hints towards a date! Loved it!

Author's Response: Hehe well, I was trying to find a situation where she and her father could interact in some way, and I figured that she had to have gotten the Dress she wore to Slughorn's party from somewhere. Thanx for the review.


Name: pwcapone (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 14:25 · For: Chapter 1
Interesting,liked the story, but didn't Harry and Company sneak off to follow Malfoy under the invisibility Cloak?

Anyway, good story.

Author's Response: Luna met up with Harry after they had gotten back from following Malfoy. That's why I put in that part where Ron was trying to explain to Mrs. Weasley that they were in the back room when she was looking for them. When I was writing it, I went back to HBP to check and make sure that the continuity was correct. Thanx for the review.


Name: geminiginny (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 13:48 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, deep! Very good fic, and nice references to her obsession.


Name: liquid_silver (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 13:36 · For: Chapter 1
this is very good . . . i was moved by Luna's conversation with her mother, but i don't think it was necessary to spend so much time describing Luna and her father's Crumple-Horned Snorkack hunt. the ending was really beautiful; you're a good writer!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought that I rambled a bit on that part too. Thanx for the review.


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