Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 10/10/07 21:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is so unbelievably awesome, James! Wow, I really had no iea of your awesome poetry skills until now... o_O I really love the line: "all suave all sashay" It really clicks in your mind and it contributes greatly to the feel of the poem. My favorite stanza has to be the one with the bed, and the fruit, its very *giggle* sensual. Really, awesomeness poetry skills!

Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 10/10/07 21:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is so unbelievably awesome, James! Wow, I really had no iea of your awesome poetry skills until now... o_O I really love the line: "all suave all sashay" It really clicks in your mind and it contributes greatly to the feel of the poem. My favorite stanza has to be the one with the bed, and the fruit, its very *giggle* sensual. Really, awesomeness poetry skills!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/25/07 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

aawwwwwwwwwww that was sooo sweet. It makes me feel shamefull to refer to my poem as romantic.=Sammy

Reviewer: Pixichik118
Date: 06/09/07 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this poem!
It was very interesting and refreshing, the way you're written the first two parts as more questioning and the last as more of a statement.
I'm glad I read this, it was so nice, and I absolutely adore your descritptions and use of adjectives, it's really beautiful!!
I can barely stop myself from reading it over and over! :D
-Alyssa

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Alyssa. This is a fair-enough poem which plays with parallax and juxtaposition of one object in relation to another, and I think it succeeds fairly well. Thanks for your review; also, for the encouragement. Best, James

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 05/09/07 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, James, this is just lovely! You always amaze me with your mastery of the language. I hope you're submitting your non-HP work to poetry journals!

Author's Response: NETA! I'm back now and guess what I found. A review, by you. You've made my day, so thank you. :D *hugs*

Author's Response: Oh, and yes, I do send. And ust recently an editor contact me and asked if I'd they could publish one of my poems. The issue will be out in September. :)

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