Oh wow this is such a beautiful story! Really sweet and romantic.. I don't think I've read such a great and realistic J/L one-shot, this is the best! The descriptions were really beautiful and relevent, the emotions were heart warming and the kisses were marvellous.
Some grammatical mistakes were there, but I was so caught up in the story, they didn't faze my enjoyment at all.. I have no idea how many times I read the story. Each time I felt as though I was reading it for the first time.
I read your other fics, but I loved this the most, and I must say, you're a fantastic writer. I love your writing! Write more...
urs truly
Athira
Aww, this is really cute. I love it.
Aw... this was so sweet. I loved it! =D Great job, dear! =)
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo goooood i loved it so cute
AWWW! how sweet!
Author's Response: thanks
Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, though have to say i've not done much in way of writing for a long time, been really busy wiv exams etc.... but thanks anyway!
Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!
AWWW...*sniff* that was beautiful and SOOO romantic!! :} I totaly can't wait until u write more! Pls upd8 soon! [gives 2 thumbs up]
Author's Response: Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it but im afraid i won't be updating any time soon as im just too busy studying for my a levels and doing a lot of other necessary stuff. thanks again for reviewing!
Aww
Author's Response: lol thanks
that was really really good. i loved it. great job.
Author's Response: Thankyou!
Aww. Cute one-shot!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Lovely and beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thankyou!
I think this story is gonna be really good. There were some grammar things you may want to look at, but otherwise it was a great chapter. UPDATE SOON!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the brill review but I'm afraid this was a one-shot :S I could have sworn i mentioned it... ah well. I am planning to write some more but i'm waiting for inspiration to strike. You could read my other series involving remus. It does have a tiny bit of sirius. Thanks again for reviewing!
*sniffs and reaches for Kleenex*
This is such a wonderful story! I really felt Lily's conflicted emotions between her heart and her head - as James points out. I like that it took him a long time to win her and yet he felt it was worth the wait.
And what a perfect happy ending! The boy gets the girl and they kiss. It is everything the romantic in me could wish for!
Well done!
~Andrea
Author's Response: Thanks, am glad you enjoyed it! It's a bit fluffy, but i have to agree with you, everything a romantic could wish for!
super romantic and pretty although i think you actually leading up to the kiss was more exiting than the kiss itself..
Author's Response: lol That was really hard to write... Thanks for reviewing!
sweet, fav time!
Author's Response: Thanks!
that was amazing! i really liked it! i thought i hadread it before but then i read it and i realised i hadn't. the last line was so sweet
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
awww, that's soooo sweet, i LOVED it!!! your an amzing writer, the only thing i could say was that at some points it was slightly boring, but i still loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thanks so much. That's such a huge compliment! I know it was a bit boring in some parts but i felt most of it was necessary. Thanks for reviewing!
Awwwwwwwwwwww!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks!
