Reviewer: Twiilight HP
Date: 04/16/11 0:04
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Oh wow this is such a beautiful story! Really sweet and romantic.. I don't think I've read such a great and realistic J/L one-shot, this is the best! The descriptions were really beautiful and relevent, the emotions were heart warming and the kisses were marvellous.
Some grammatical mistakes were there, but I was so caught up in the story, they didn't faze my enjoyment at all.. I have no idea how many times I read the story. Each time I felt as though I was reading it for the first time.
I read your other fics, but I loved this the most, and I must say, you're a fantastic writer. I love your writing! Write more...
urs truly

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 17:13
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Aww, this is really cute. I love it.

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 06/27/08 18:44
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Aw... this was so sweet. I loved it! =D Great job, dear! =)

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 06/25/08 21:23
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo goooood i loved it so cute

Reviewer: SorceressSisters
Date: 02/04/08 20:32
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

AWWW! how sweet!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: hogwartsismydrug
Date: 01/14/08 19:35
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks, though have to say i've not done much in way of writing for a long time, been really busy wiv exams etc.... but thanks anyway!

Reviewer: hogwartsismydrug
Date: 01/14/08 19:33
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 11/25/07 11:29
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

AWWW...*sniff* that was beautiful and SOOO romantic!! :} I totaly can't wait until u write more! Pls upd8 soon! [gives 2 thumbs up]

Author's Response: Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it but im afraid i won't be updating any time soon as im just too busy studying for my a levels and doing a lot of other necessary stuff. thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 10/29/07 20:25
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways


Author's Response: lol thanks

Reviewer: grrl77
Date: 08/31/07 20:50
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

that was really really good. i loved it. great job.

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/09/07 7:50
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Aww. Cute one-shot!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 07/24/07 15:57
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Lovely and beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/01/07 5:19
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

I think this story is gonna be really good. There were some grammar things you may want to look at, but otherwise it was a great chapter. UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the brill review but I'm afraid this was a one-shot :S I could have sworn i mentioned it... ah well. I am planning to write some more but i'm waiting for inspiration to strike. You could read my other series involving remus. It does have a tiny bit of sirius. Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: Red and Gold
Date: 05/26/07 0:49
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

*sniffs and reaches for Kleenex*

This is such a wonderful story! I really felt Lily's conflicted emotions between her heart and her head - as James points out. I like that it took him a long time to win her and yet he felt it was worth the wait.

And what a perfect happy ending! The boy gets the girl and they kiss. It is everything the romantic in me could wish for!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, am glad you enjoyed it! It's a bit fluffy, but i have to agree with you, everything a romantic could wish for!

Reviewer: soccerprotostar
Date: 05/01/07 15:43
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

super romantic and pretty although i think you actually leading up to the kiss was more exiting than the kiss itself..

Author's Response: lol That was really hard to write... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 04/27/07 20:15
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

sweet, fav time!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 04/24/07 9:11
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

that was amazing! i really liked it! i thought i hadread it before but then i read it and i realised i hadn't. the last line was so sweet

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Helix Lily
Date: 04/17/07 2:25
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 04/16/07 18:27
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways

awww, that's soooo sweet, i LOVED it!!! your an amzing writer, the only thing i could say was that at some points it was slightly boring, but i still loved it!

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much. That's such a huge compliment! I know it was a bit boring in some parts but i felt most of it was necessary. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: LadyElyssa
Date: 04/16/07 5:21
Chapter: Let Me Count the Ways


Author's Response: Lol, thanks!

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