Just as good as the other. I can imagine Hermione dying Lavender's hair pink. OOOH...sweet revenge.
Again, it's okay, Not as good as it could be, but you did use some good comparisons. Pretty good. :D
Author's Response: Thanks, Lluvia!
Ronald Weasley is WHAT??????????
What an evil cliffie=Sammy
Author's Response: Ronald is HOT! At least to Hermione.
These are highly amusing poems.....I really like them......
Author's Response: Thank you! I like them too!
I think she SHOULD dye LavLav's hair pink! Hm...I didn't like this as much as Ron's, but it was still good! 10/10! RON/HERMIONE 4 ALWAYS! WOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!~
Author's Response: Maybe I'll do a humor sequel... maybe
*grins* It makes me think of the yellow canaries. :-)
Anyways. Good job with this. It seemed to flow a bit like prose rather than poetry, but it is acrostic. Just saying. However it flows, though, I still like this. It's really cute and shows how Hermione feels for Ron. Good job. The last part made me smile.
My favorite lines:
A lovable slacker
Showing the emotional range of a teaspoon.
Love still makes me thinks his
Enormous freckles are cute. ...
This part really shows Hermione's true feelings, and it shows them truthfully. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I like that part too.