Reviewer: canufeelthemagictonight
Date: 03/03/12 0:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Just as good as the other. I can imagine Hermione dying Lavender's hair pink. OOOH...sweet revenge.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/22/07 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Again, it's okay, Not as good as it could be, but you did use some good comparisons. Pretty good. :D

~~Lluvia~~


Author's Response: Thanks, Lluvia!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 04/22/07 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ronald Weasley is WHAT??????????
What an evil cliffie=Sammy

Author's Response: Ronald is HOT! At least to Hermione.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 04/18/07 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

These are highly amusing poems.....I really like them......

Author's Response: Thank you! I like them too!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 04/14/07 10:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think she SHOULD dye LavLav's hair pink! Hm...I didn't like this as much as Ron's, but it was still good! 10/10! RON/HERMIONE 4 ALWAYS! WOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!~

Monty

Author's Response: Maybe I'll do a humor sequel... maybe

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/14/07 9:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

*grins* It makes me think of the yellow canaries. :-)

Anyways. Good job with this. It seemed to flow a bit like prose rather than poetry, but it is acrostic. Just saying. However it flows, though, I still like this. It's really cute and shows how Hermione feels for Ron. Good job. The last part made me smile.

My favorite lines:

A lovable slacker
Showing the emotional range of a teaspoon.
Love still makes me thinks his
Enormous freckles are cute. ...


This part really shows Hermione's true feelings, and it shows them truthfully. Great job.

~Kate

Author's Response: Thank you. I like that part too.

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