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Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 09/24/07 19:10 · For: Missing Heads
You...you...YOU KILLED HARRY'S MUM!! jk. I want to say it was Snape, but he and Lily were BFFs until fifth year, and of course he secretly loves her!!! lol 10/10 I bet James gives her the Kiss of Life!!! Or at least tries to heal her heheh.

Author's Response: Why would I kill (or even try to kill) Harry's mum? She's my mum too! That's actually a good idea... *stores in memory files* I might use that, if you don't mind!


Name: lulovesrupe (Signed) · Date: 09/24/07 18:59 · For: Missing Heads
sectumspectra maybe? haha

lovee the story! please keep on writting!!

Author's Response: Perhaps... I won't tell! Thanks!


Name: koolio_jollymints (Anonymous) · Date: 09/24/07 18:52 · For: Prologue
I thought this was a good start to a story, however, the thing with Kirsten...Well, as you probably (and should) know, the marauders are in England, and they have english accents. My mom was born in England and lived there for most of her life, so she also has an accent. Her best friend when she moved here was named Kirsten, but it really frusterated my mom, because of her accent, she couldn't say the name. The 'Kirs' part of the name is really hard to say with a british accent, so that may be something you would want to consider. Other than that, this was a very good story! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, about Kirsten... I suppose it would sound something like 'Kesten'? Ah well. I suppose it doesn't matter that much, does it?


Name: i_hart_wheezys (Signed) · Date: 09/24/07 18:43 · For: Missing Heads
no cliffhangers are not fun! u go insane with the curiosity! or at least i do...anyways...awsome chapter! its really well written and you did a good job building up the tension :) i liked the ending(despite the cliffhanger) it really adds suspense! UPDATE SOON!!!! no i hopes actually do!ps i like ur disclaimer :)

Author's Response: I don't like cliffhangers either... They are quite annoying, but as the writer, I suppose you have to add some interest, right? Thank you! Personally, I thought my disclaimer was a little lame, but... I'm glad to know someone liked it!


Name: JakeandElwood Blues (Signed) · Date: 09/24/07 17:25 · For: Prologue
As much as I liked this, I would like to point out as the snotty, know-it-all I am that Hitler shot himseslf. He DID go to jail, but WAY before James and Lily were born. Aside from that, I loved it, espcially liked how it was from James POV, which dosn't happen as often. Sorry for the annoying historical update.

Author's Response: No, no, it's quite alright! I appreciate it! Er, I know that he died WAY before '77, but oh well. The idea hit me, and I decided that I wanted to write it, so... out it came... I know it's a little weird, but it's my little twist, and I suppose that's why they call it fanfiction, right?


Name: tisha (Signed) · Date: 09/16/07 17:24 · For: Prologue
Hey, I really liked the epilogue, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. I just wanted to let you know that Lupin and Sirius told Harry that James and Lily started going out in their 6th year. I know its your story and your plot, but I'm only mentioning it since that's what it says in your summary.

Author's Response: I think you clicked Submit twice.


Name: tisha (Signed) · Date: 09/16/07 17:23 · For: Prologue
Hey, I really liked the epilogue, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. I just wanted to let you know that Lupin and Sirius told Harry that James and Lily started going out in their 6th year. I know its your story and your plot, but I'm only mentioning it since that's what it says in your summary.

Author's Response: Thanks! Er, I think you must have read the book wrong. I just checked it, and it says seventh year.


Name: wanderingLily (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 20:05 · For: Prologue
Hey! It's a good start, I can't wait to hear your story on how they get together. The only thing that I think is sort of weird (just tiny constructive critism) is when you say that Hitler is Wormtail's uncle. That was just a little confusing to me, but other then that it was AWESOME!
~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: radcliffe4eva (Signed) · Date: 06/01/07 19:25 · For: Prologue
Well, I liked the beginning quite a bit actually. Ideas, huh? I noticed you mentioned the fact that Sirius has a girlfriend, who is James's cousin - interesting idea, actually. But, eh, it's a first to second year fic, so any of my ideas wouldn't really work... Hmm. I guess you could write about Kirsten's relationship with the Marauders (e.g. Is she with the Marauders often? What's her relationship with Lily? Her house? Odd habit of hitting Sirius 'round the head when he bugs her?) Eh, well, I tired. I hope you come up with more soon - I rather like your writing style! :-)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I love your writing too! Thanks so much for the ideas!


Name: rowenaravenclaw1 (Signed) · Date: 05/22/07 19:04 · For: Prologue
Peter was on holiday with his family in Germany, visiting his Muggle uncle in jail; some guy named Hitler or something strange like that.
I nearly fell out of my bloody chair when i read that! Must e-mail that one to Jo, joking, joking. i wish i had her email adress! I'd make her right a James/Lily!

Author's Response: Thanks, that was my favorite quote.... I wish I could email it to Jo. I'd want her to write a story on Harry's parents too, that would be cool!


Name: lunalovegood0512 (Signed) · Date: 04/27/07 15:17 · For: Prologue
nice start. I like the journal entry. and for ideas you should do some kind of, i don't know misunderstanding thing, thats always interesting.

Author's Response: That's a good idea, thanks!

Author's Response: That's a good idea, thanks!


Name: beautifulromantic (Signed) · Date: 04/16/07 19:05 · For: Prologue
I like the way you decided to put the epilogue first. It makes the story interesting. And this isn't important, but Hilter commited suicide.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, I know Hitler commited suicide, but my brother said he was in jail for a while too. I'm not sure if he was kidding, but.... does it matter?


Name: Jeeves (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 14:53 · For: Prologue
goo. pleased. pleasently surpised to say the least. -me

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was pleasantly surprised!


Name: ProufGryffindork (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 12:32 · For: Prologue
This is a really good story! Keep it going.

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: kingbobrules (Signed) · Date: 04/15/07 12:12 · For: Prologue
I liked the bit about the muggle plane and the bomb - very original - but I hope for yoursake that you've got some other gems like it up your sleeve. This is a very overdone plotline, but maybe you can give this something else. Good luck and well done on a strong start!

Author's Response: Thanks! My epilogue is actually way better than the rest of my story right now, so I have a lot of work to do.

Author's Response: Sry, I meant to say Prologue.


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