Reviewer: JakeandElwood Blues
Date: 09/24/07 17:25
Chapter: Prologue

As much as I liked this, I would like to point out as the snotty, know-it-all I am that Hitler shot himseslf. He DID go to jail, but WAY before James and Lily were born. Aside from that, I loved it, espcially liked how it was from James POV, which dosn't happen as often. Sorry for the annoying historical update.

Author's Response: No, no, it's quite alright! I appreciate it! Er, I know that he died WAY before '77, but oh well. The idea hit me, and I decided that I wanted to write it, so... out it came... I know it's a little weird, but it's my little twist, and I suppose that's why they call it fanfiction, right?

Reviewer: tisha
Date: 09/16/07 17:24
Chapter: Prologue

Hey, I really liked the epilogue, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. I just wanted to let you know that Lupin and Sirius told Harry that James and Lily started going out in their 6th year. I know its your story and your plot, but I'm only mentioning it since that's what it says in your summary.

Author's Response: I think you clicked Submit twice.

Reviewer: tisha
Date: 09/16/07 17:23
Chapter: Prologue

Hey, I really liked the epilogue, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. I just wanted to let you know that Lupin and Sirius told Harry that James and Lily started going out in their 6th year. I know its your story and your plot, but I'm only mentioning it since that's what it says in your summary.

Author's Response: Thanks! Er, I think you must have read the book wrong. I just checked it, and it says seventh year.

Reviewer: wanderingLily
Date: 09/03/07 20:05
Chapter: Prologue

Hey! It's a good start, I can't wait to hear your story on how they get together. The only thing that I think is sort of weird (just tiny constructive critism) is when you say that Hitler is Wormtail's uncle. That was just a little confusing to me, but other then that it was AWESOME!
~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 06/01/07 19:25
Chapter: Prologue

Well, I liked the beginning quite a bit actually. Ideas, huh? I noticed you mentioned the fact that Sirius has a girlfriend, who is James's cousin - interesting idea, actually. But, eh, it's a first to second year fic, so any of my ideas wouldn't really work... Hmm. I guess you could write about Kirsten's relationship with the Marauders (e.g. Is she with the Marauders often? What's her relationship with Lily? Her house? Odd habit of hitting Sirius 'round the head when he bugs her?) Eh, well, I tired. I hope you come up with more soon - I rather like your writing style! :-)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I love your writing too! Thanks so much for the ideas!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 05/22/07 19:04
Chapter: Prologue

Peter was on holiday with his family in Germany, visiting his Muggle uncle in jail; some guy named Hitler or something strange like that.
I nearly fell out of my bloody chair when i read that! Must e-mail that one to Jo, joking, joking. i wish i had her email adress! I'd make her right a James/Lily!

Author's Response: Thanks, that was my favorite quote.... I wish I could email it to Jo. I'd want her to write a story on Harry's parents too, that would be cool!

Reviewer: lunalovegood0512
Date: 04/27/07 15:17
Chapter: Prologue

nice start. I like the journal entry. and for ideas you should do some kind of, i don't know misunderstanding thing, thats always interesting.

Author's Response: That's a good idea, thanks!

Author's Response: That's a good idea, thanks!

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 04/16/07 19:05
Chapter: Prologue

I like the way you decided to put the epilogue first. It makes the story interesting. And this isn't important, but Hilter commited suicide.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, I know Hitler commited suicide, but my brother said he was in jail for a while too. I'm not sure if he was kidding, but.... does it matter?

Reviewer: Jeeves
Date: 04/15/07 14:53
Chapter: Prologue

goo. pleased. pleasently surpised to say the least. -me

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was pleasantly surprised!

Reviewer: ProufGryffindork
Date: 04/15/07 12:32
Chapter: Prologue

This is a really good story! Keep it going.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kingbobrules
Date: 04/15/07 12:12
Chapter: Prologue

I liked the bit about the muggle plane and the bomb - very original - but I hope for yoursake that you've got some other gems like it up your sleeve. This is a very overdone plotline, but maybe you can give this something else. Good luck and well done on a strong start!

Author's Response: Thanks! My epilogue is actually way better than the rest of my story right now, so I have a lot of work to do.

Author's Response: Sry, I meant to say Prologue.

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