Reviews For Parley a Future
Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 04/18/07 13:09
Chapter: Metamorphosis

I really enjoyed the story. I think you did a good job with charactorization, I could see those charactors interacting like that. I espeacially loved the way Snape and Harry interacted! I really like the twist with Harry and his lack of magic too! I can see something big happening to him in book 7. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind comments. We are all losing the magic along with Harry and I wanted to write a story to note that.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 04/14/07 21:34
Chapter: Metamorphosis

I liked your characterizations. they were spot on! great job

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 04/14/07 20:32
Chapter: Metamorphosis

I liked the story, but it seemed quite rushed. For example Harry meeting with the Weasleys right after losing the ability to do magic, and going about his day normally.

I did enjoy the interaction between Snape and Harry. I wouldv'e preferred this to be a chaptered fic, going at a slower pace.

Looking forward to future fics from you.

Author's Response: Thanks for the useful critique. I maybe should add something to imply the cathartic reflex that inspired a picnic so close on the heels of bad events (that I neglected to specify in detail because I was trying to write a one-shot and that's really tough for me).

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 04/14/07 12:51
Chapter: Metamorphosis

wow.. that was kinda confusing!! it was depressing how harry lost his magic though!

Author's Response: Getting the formatting right will undoubtedly help, and I just now figured that out. My first story posting here...

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