Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 01/18/08 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, I got chills, and the parts with Fred and George made me cry. Congratulations, it was truly beautiful.

Reviewer: BeautifulDreamer07
Date: 04/23/07 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow...that was amazing! Just..wow...I can't even express how utterly amazing it was! Beautiful...

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 04/16/07 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was an amazing story. I LOVEDLOVEDLOVED it. it was really really well written as well. great job! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Mizzie.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/16/07 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Bravo! Brava! How touching! Can feel the tension and fellowship of the moment. Brought tears to my eyes. Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Mizzie.

Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 04/15/07 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a BEAUTIFUL story, I really loved it, it even made me cry. Awesome job! I loved how you expressed all their feelings and how you portrayed all of the characters. Keep writing, but I was wondering about the explanation for the number thirteen? ok, well awesome story!

Author's Response: The number thirteen at the end was supposed to represent Jesus and the Deciples. It would just seem like something that Seamus (well, my Seamus) would find comforting. Thanks! Mizzie.

Reviewer: malfoy_luvr
Date: 04/15/07 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

What was up with all the religious stuff? Harry Potter is not religious, it was weird...


Author's Response: It's a style I've been playing with lately. It must be a bit weird within the confined of HP, yeah. :S Mizzie.

Reviewer: potterweaslygranger
Date: 04/15/07 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was great... but a piece of advice. If you don't want to actually write "the final battle" You should at least write an epilogue. I like your style. 9/10 (without the epilogue) Maybe you'll get a ten if you write one.

Author's Response: Ah, thanks for the advice. I did consider an epilogue, but I was having trouble with exactly how I would make it and still be able to keep the last line. Thanks again! Mizzie.

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 04/15/07 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was quite possibly more beautiful than you can imagine. And you wrote the thing. I can't say I was moved to tears, but very little I read can do that to me (eh, well, except maybe Dumbledore dying.. XD), and I would say that this came close enough. And what made this writing even better is that you did not even have to tell about the battle; the story was all right here.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm really glad you liked it. =D Mizzie.

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