Reviewer: goldenniffler
Date: 07/16/08 0:40
Chapter: Gnomes

love it! =D

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 05/30/08 21:02
Chapter: Gnomes


That was so sweet! You actually managed to make me well-up with tears! And that is no joke! This ending was brilliant and the story enchantingly well-written.

The way that you characterized both Ron and Hermione is simply breath taking. You truly do have a way with characterization that no other can achieve.

I love the arguement and the way that they fell down the stairs together. It was so . . . adorable. This was my favorite part:

Hermione looked up swiftly. Her eyes met his and she realised what they were arguing about. “Krum,” she whispered in the faintest of voices.

“Pardon?” Ron demanded, this time losing his patience.

It was just so very Ron and Hermione, especially on Ron's part.

Amazing job, dear. I truly loved this piece.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/14/08 15:41
Chapter: Gnomes

This was brilliant! And you really got Ron and Hermione's characters perfect. Do you suppose they ever agree on anything?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/28/08 9:07
Chapter: Gnomes

haha. i've never read a ron/hermione fic quite like that before, but i really liked it! im tired of the same old ron-getting-up the-courage-to-ask-hermione-out.

Author's Response: I'm glad you've found something different in this fic! :) Thank you!rnrnPhily :)

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/29/08 17:29
Chapter: Gnomes

wooo brill

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Ryligh Christine
Date: 08/07/07 15:01
Chapter: Gnomes

That is soo cute. Omg wow. ha ha

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 06/11/07 21:56
Chapter: Gnomes

This was an adorable take on the challenge! The way that it happens is completely unique, and I think it's so sweet.

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you very much! :) I'm very glad you read this one; I think it was possibly the easiest to write of all my fics on here. It sort of flowed along, you know. Thanks for the review and thank you very much for taking the time to read! Phily :)

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 05/26/07 16:14
Chapter: Gnomes

nice, as you said, short and sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading (and for reading the author's note!) :D I do wonder if people read my ramblings... Hehe Phily :)

Reviewer: Lily_ Evans
Date: 05/13/07 6:47
Chapter: Gnomes

Phily, a new story! *grins* Wow, it is great! This is my favorite story of how I imagine Ronand Hermione's first kiss! I can see Dancing carrot did her job very well (she is my beta, too) and Lindsey too. So wow is all I can say. lol

Author's Response: Lol, I loved the skele-gro prompt idea for this as it made me write something that already had the basics sorted! :) Beta-ring is a tiring job as you well know ;) I thank them very much for their time! Phily :)

Reviewer: love_44
Date: 05/07/07 21:32
Chapter: Gnomes

This was such a cute story!I liked it alot!You should right another story.(=

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! Besides the other four stories on here, you mean? Exams are looming but I have plans to write all summer! :D Thanks for the review! Phily :)

Reviewer: maze
Date: 04/29/07 4:38
Chapter: Gnomes

Excellent. Enjoyed every word. Will look out for more fic from you. keep up the good work. Cheers.

Author's Response: That makes me very happy! Thank you for the kind words! If you're looking for a good one, try 'The Flaw in Perfection' or 'My belief in you' ; I think they are my personal favourite writings! Hehe. Thank you reading and for the review! Phily :)

Reviewer: hanna_Weasley
Date: 04/27/07 18:45
Chapter: Gnomes


Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D Phily :)

Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 04/26/07 18:12
Chapter: Gnomes

Aw, how cute:) lol, nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Glad you liked it! Phily :)

Reviewer: SCPGOHDad24
Date: 04/24/07 22:03
Chapter: Gnomes

it was really cute except for one thing. maby i'm being dense (it is pretty late) but i didn't get this part:
Hermione’s face flickered. What had before been understanding had now turned to disgust. “I feel the same,” she said shortly. “What I cannot agree with you on is the fact that you can’t admit you might have been mistaken in how you said those things to Ginny.” Her voice began to rise once again and the gnomes prepared themselves for another shrill outburst.

“What are you talking about now?” Ron asked with a conscious effort to keep his voice free from impatience.

Hermione looked up swiftly. Her eyes met his and she realised what they were arguing about. “Krum,” she whispered in the faintest of voices.

“Pardon?” Ron demanded, this time losing his patience
what did krum have to do with anything?

other than that great job!

Author's Response: Well, originally they were arguing over how Ron had been towards Ginny, but at this point Hermione realises that the reason they are arguing is in fact that Ron is jealous about Krum again. It's sort of when they realise their feelings, I guess? I hope that that clears it up a little! :) I'm sure it's not just you but I can't really judge because... well, I wrote it! Lol. Thanks for the review! Phily :)

Reviewer: Skipper424
Date: 04/23/07 12:22
Chapter: Gnomes

Hi there, Phily! Great Story! I liked it very much. I think you have done a very good job capturing Ron and Hermione’s character here. I think it’s pretty common to see the canon characterizations bent a little by authors in order to suit their plots. However, I think your portrayal parallels these two very well.

I also loved how you have the two of them arguing over something and they’re not even on the same page on what they are arguing about. That’s real, it happens to a lot of people (though never to me … **cough**). The way you have Hermione storm off in disgust while Ron is just sort of dumbfounded is very good too.

I also liked the spontaneous nature of the kiss at the end. In all this was a nice story. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, James! :) Well done for winning the challenge- I'm priveledged to have already read the winning entry! Hehe! I'm glad Ron and Hermione came across properly in character here as I haven't written much about them before. I see a lot of Hermione in me (hence the name...) so it was perhaps easier to write a realistic situation with her reactions. But I never storm off of course... ; ) Thank you very much for the review! It is much appreciated that you have taken the time to read and leave your comments! Phily :)

Reviewer: potters angel
Date: 04/22/07 19:00
Chapter: Gnomes

Aw! How sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Phily :)

Reviewer: potters angel
Date: 04/22/07 19:00
Chapter: Gnomes

Aw! How sweet!

Reviewer: swordfish0
Date: 04/22/07 0:37
Chapter: Gnomes

Kill me now! This was so good, i'm tired of reading stories that depart from the Ron and Hermione I definately know and love in the books. Great job connecting slight fluff with complete concrete. I loved it.

Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I did hope it wasn't too over-dramatic to the point of fluffy. I'm very glad you enjoyed! Phily :)

Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I did hope it wasn't too over-dramatic to the point of fluffy. I'm very glad you enjoyed! Phily :)

Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I did hope it wasn't too over-dramatic to the point of fluffy. I'm very glad you enjoyed! Phily :)

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 04/21/07 19:03
Chapter: Gnomes

NICE!!!!! I like it

Author's Response: First to review! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :D Phily :)

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