hee heee....this is funni....plz finish!!!!!!!!!!
This is great so far! Keep up the great work!
Oh my gosh! Okay, I have one question, though. Have you read the story on fanfiction.net called Why We Fight by Zephyr Seraphim? The reason I'm asking is because your story seems almost exactly the same. If not, it's just a coincidence and if yes, then is that where you got your idea? I think that your story is really well written, however, and would love to see more. Update soon!
Author's Response: No, I haven't. Is it good? I'd love to read it. And thank you so much for the review! I love hearing what people think of my writing!
Great chapter!
Poor Draco he goes to Gryffindor!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cont soon!!
That is great! FOr a second I thought you were going to put hermione in Slytherine. I am glad they are both in Gryffindore. This shows a promising story!
I had a feeling that Draco wouldn't get sorted into Slytherin..but it as still funny when I actually read it and Draco's reaction!! haha. keep up the fantastic work and update soon please!!!
Ohhhh! What would Draco's Father think about that? Great idea. And I also agree with the teenage boys and food comment. Update really soon.
Your story captured my interest from the first chapter. I love how you wrote it so Draco was sorted into Gryffindor.
You nailed Draco's demeanor terrifically.
Keep up the amazing writing!
You are a splendid writer and you have a wonderful imagination! I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Lacey
Very interesting. I loved the interaction between the Sorting Hat and Hermoine and Draco, in particular. I can't wait to see the relationship between Draco and Hermoine develop. Update soon.
This is gettin so good..i had a feeling Malfoy will be sorted into gryffindor..guess i was right!!! :D
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oh nice!
very very good!
lol
UPDATE SOON!
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Ha ha, that was great! I liked the dialogue that they both had with the Sorting Hat; it gave it personality, and Draco's bit was particularly funny. I really liked how the Hat was like, "Well, you'd do well in Slytherin, BUT..." That was great, and it made it more believable that Draco would fit in Gryffindor.
Ooo. Very good. The sorting hat knew he was a Malfoy, very clever that one. It was kinda obvious that he was going to be placed in Gryffindor, but still very amusing and I know that you have a very good point. I liked how Hermione didn't want to be in Hufflepuff. It showed that she has too much pride (as those Gyrffies do) to be so humble all the time.
I think she would do well in Ravenclaw, but her house is her true home. Hehe. I hope they show Draco how he can chage his ways. I love this story I can't wait till the next chapter!
wow. this is pretty good..please update soon!!
ooohhhhhh...interesting
i loved it please update soon
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What an incredible way to send these unlikely two back into the past! (And, of course, you've got me wondering what Draco's Patronus is.) And the only thing I could think of when they saw James and Sirius is: I know when they are, too! *chuckles*
Oh, and great wave of suspense there at the end of the first chapter. Furthermore, I haven't seen any grammar mistakes which is always a pleasure to see. =) Of course, I didn't expect to see them since you ARE a PI-accredited beta.
I can't wait to see where you take this. Best of luck! =)
~Julia~
