awesome!i looove this story....its really well writen,and character potrayals are very good.i love the way draco is bonding with the marauders...please update fast,i cant wait to read the next 1!
awesome!really well written,i love the way youve shown the bonding of draco and the marauders,and hermione with lily and her friends....please update quickly,i cant wait to read the next 1!
Hehe Hello Olivia. I took the liberty of reading some of your work. I must say I'm hooked! LOL! Now I see why you are such an awesome beta of this genre you write it as well! hehehe!
good chapter! i really like stories with romance and humour.
please update son!!! im already into the story!!! PLEASE update soon!!!
there's so any Draco/Hermione never finished... hopefully i'll finish mine eventually too...
You guys need to finish your stories!!!!!
Author's Response: I know that sometimes updates don't come as soon as you would like them to, I can relate to that, but you also have to understand that most people don't a large amount of time to devote to writing. Writing for MNFF is something I do in my free time or whenever I can. As I believe I've said before, I have every intention of finishing this story. I just don't have much time at all right now, since I consider school and RL responsibilities to be higher on my list of priorities. I would love to be able to crank out chapters and get them up faster, but it's just not possible with my workload, I don't have the time.
oh my god... it's perfect!
please please please update soon!
I can't wait for another chapter!
waiting for you,maybe not too long
wow i love this story!!! its so creative!
wow!! i really like this story!1 keep it up, will you?
This was my favorite chapter yet! One question though, did Sirius date Lily then? You have such a way with words that I wish I was in the room with Hermione talking about the boys...those smexy boys. Anyways, great job can't wait till the update.
Okk...I think you used ferret boy at least four times so far.Yes yes..very amusing.But once is enough,really.I mean that happened in the fourth book,surely you can come up with something else out of the other six..?And he suddenly pushes her against the wall after she tells him what period they are in and she is suddenly "falling for draco".Its only been like 5 minutes into the story!And their fights aren't very interesting.Their insults remind me of second grade and those stupid "your mama" jokes.I'm just going to stop reading now...very disappointed.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and I appreciate your input. This story was the first I've ever posted on MNFF and I started this story a year and half ago. The earlier chapters are not my favorite, as I feel now that I could have done better. Since I'm still working on this story, I have been making sure that the later chapters are more substantial and less repetitive and cliche. Once again, I'm grateful that you took the time to tell me your thoughts!
This is really good! Please keep writing!
ooo just read all four chaps at once! and they were AWESOME! i looooove stories involving time travel but this is the first i've read involving hermione and draco!!! and it's so cute.. haha! keep up the good work!
well lets just say that you have an excellent tallent to keep your characters in character. i will look forward into reading your next chapters. =^.^=
loved the part where Draco and the Maauders were drunk! please update soon!!!!
wheeee!! i love it!! could you please..please.. please update soon?? heehee.. thankee!!ü ..goodluck!!
i like the whole thing! I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
I love it! Please update quickly if you can! I love your story, it's so original! Mixing old Hogwarts students with the ones from the future is such a creative idea! But wait, if Sirius dated every 7th year girl (except Lor and Michelle) did he date Lily, too? How did James take it? Oh god, this story is so good! And I can't help thinking that maybe Sirius will ask Hermione out (since his comment that she was quite a looker)! This story is really good. Probably my favourite.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it. And as for Sirius and Lily, you'll have to wait and find out! (Same with Sirius and Hermione.)