Reviewer: fire_whisky_padfoot
Date: 10/15/07 4:05
Chapter: Prologue: The Mind of Dolores Umbridge

i do feel kinda sorry for her but shes still twisted

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Fred the Duck
Date: 05/28/07 21:33
Chapter: Epilogue: Battles End Mindlessly

she really is loony.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Fred the Duck
Date: 05/28/07 21:27
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

that was well written, but odd. kinda scary. not a ship that i would support. but well written all the same.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! it was an odd sort of type of writing or er- plot. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 05/15/07 13:38
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Ha! That is so weird! But still kind of cool in a creepy sort of way...I like your Dumbledore, he's very amusing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoyed writing him. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 05/15/07 13:29
Chapter: Prologue: The Mind of Dolores Umbridge

it's cool that you're putting Umbridge in a better light. And it makes sense that she would have been ridiculed as a kid. Good job! It's realistic and for the first time I felt sorry for Umbridge, something I never thought I'd do.

Author's Response: *giggles* Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. It was quite a fun thing to write. This chapter was basically the only way I could make my character believable. Well, I didn't think much, lol. /rant Thanks so much! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: FlightofthePhoenix
Date: 05/14/07 1:05
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Very amusing story Lindsey. How does your mind come up with this type of story, I wonder.

"Yes, I know, Dolores, he replied harshly. Im tired of you harassing my students and staff.

Yes, well-

I wish that youd harass me, he said slyly.

This had be cracked up in uncontrolable laughter. Loved it completely Lindsey.


Author's Response: LOL, well, I was actually kind of dared to write a Dolores/DD story, and the second chapter is what I came up with in a shorter version. :) Then, I saw this challenge ABOUT Dolores, and I was like . . . yeah. It fit. *giggles* THat was my favourite part to write. Thanks, and I'm glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: leftside1234
Date: 04/12/07 19:00
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

ewwwwww, that was so weird but it made me think, is that what you were trying to do

Author's Response: LOL, sure. You can think . . . but, please, don't dwell on it. Mental image myself . . . *cringes* *giggles* Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 04/10/07 19:46
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Wow, creeoy.... it's very well written, and I loved the differences between what Umbridge said and thought, but still ... creepy ... ! :D

~Tickled Pink~

Author's Response: LOL< I totally know it was creepy, but it was quite fun to write. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Robinhood304
Date: 04/10/07 18:47
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Okay, this is good writing and all, but it REALLY grossed me out!!! I had to stop reading... you've got a good grasp of internal dialogue, though...

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so sorry that you had to stop reading . . . but I'm glad you thought it had good dialogue. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 04/10/07 16:56
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Aww, this was cute, even though I can only picture Umbridge as an old, wrinkly HAG! I have to admit, though, it was cute! =D

Author's Response: Thanks! *giggles* It was quite fun to write. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: mischeifmanaged93
Date: 04/10/07 16:55
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

An excellent story...but I think I'm scarred for life...Dumbledore and Umbridge...snogging....ew.

Author's Response: aw, I'm so sorry that you're scarred. *didn't mean to do that* but I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Jujubeejz
Date: 04/10/07 16:42
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

AHHHH that was short and sweet! Love the topic...who would have thought? I hope there's more!

Author's Response: *giggles* Of course there is more! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 04/10/07 14:32
Chapter: The Crazed Findings of a Teacher

Wow! A very odd relationship... I will never look at Dumbledore looking at Umbridge the same way again... *shudder* Very well written. I also loved the idea that Umbridge always talked to herself to convince herself out of liking the teachers... it seems like just the thing she'd do. Assuming that this isn't a one-shot, I can't wait to find out how Umbridge brings herself to sack Dumbledore.... Anyway, great job,very creative! :)

Author's Response: LOL, thank you SO much for your feedback. I know that it's kind of odd, but hey . . . I dunno. ~Lindsey :)

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