Reviews For Mortality
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker
Date: 07/28/07 13:51
Chapter: The Stranger in the Shadows

Hmm, this new kid intrigues me, perhaps I will have to read your other story.
This one is very good, I can see the friendhips slipping into something else, it is very subtle but it is there nonetheless.

Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker
Date: 07/28/07 13:31
Chapter: Severed

Ah, teenage angst. I can only hope that Ron is being affected by some outside force and that he is not truly going to dump Hermione for Lavender.

Reviewer: slytherin_princess_9
Date: 07/19/07 23:11
Chapter: Epidemic

Aah! Cliffhanger! I love the new chapter, though, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! =]

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/16/07 11:40
Chapter: The Terrace and Its Aftermath

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT HAPPENED????????????Hurry with the next chapter!!

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/16/07 10:42
Chapter: The Stranger in the Shadows

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO not HARRY and hermione it is supposed to be RON and hermione!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: keep going keep going....this is h/hr, but i promise i won't disappoint you!!!!

Reviewer: hermylovesron
Date: 07/16/07 9:57
Chapter: Seperate

that was cool

Reviewer: grawp22
Date: 07/13/07 9:22
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

wow, really great chapter!

Reviewer: Evrikan
Date: 06/29/07 22:39
Chapter: Severed

Oh my god! What an Awesome chapter. ^_^

Reviewer: Evrikan
Date: 06/29/07 22:02
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

Incredible. It gave me a chill. Also the way the words were conveyed to the reader was very nice. O_o

Reviewer: slytherin_princess_9
Date: 06/20/07 22:02
Chapter: Severed

I love your story! It's really dark, but that's okay. I'm kinda worried about what's going to happen with Ron, though. =/ I can't wait for the next chapter! =D

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/01/07 11:18
Chapter: Seperate

Another great chapter. I just love how you've gotten first-person Harry right! *bounces around in excitement* I loved the "he can be such a girl" line. Erm - what else...? Oh! Yes, Ginny. I happen to think JK Rowling writes Ginny in a way that she comes out too good and too perfect and too wonderful - I actually think you wrote Ginny better... maybe it's the difference in circumstances in your story and JK's, but whatever it is, you did a great job!

Author's Response: thanks!!! everybody seems to think that he may be too dark, but i like the dark works!!!

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/01/07 11:11
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

Nice. I have to say that when I read a first-person fic in Harry's POV I always think Harry's slightly OOC (especially when I'm writing him :D) but you did an amazing, professional job of it. Harry sounded like... well - Harry! 10/10

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 04/30/07 21:38
Chapter: Seperate

I like your writing style. And the story is really interesting- depressing, but interesting- so far. I hope you update soon- I want to know more about the betrayal you described in your summary.

Reviewer: Aesculapius
Date: 04/27/07 16:07
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven


Reviewer: Nevica5
Date: 04/20/07 19:26
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

I like your introduction part to your story

Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 04/20/07 15:53
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

Wow. Depressing start. 1st pov is tough sometimes, too, but you didn't slip at all. I definitely look forward to more.

Reviewer: malfoy_luvr
Date: 04/15/07 18:18
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

Oh my gawd, it made me tear up. He shouldn't be alone but he probably will be and thats whats SOOOO sad. I loved it though. You need to go on with it!

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 04/15/07 17:02
Chapter: The Bell Tolls Seven

Wow, very angsty, but I love it. It seems very clean cut, though in a good way. Spectacular writing. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Harry seems a little too morbid, but I suppose it works.

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