Reviews For Blame
Reviewer: solaceseeker
Date: 06/11/07 17:50
Chapter: Blame

sad. great story

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Vindictus Viridian
Date: 04/20/07 9:32
Chapter: Blame

Good work on a tricky assignment! But Anthony Nott does indeed make sense, in a creepy, not-quite-logical way. Love can do funny things to people. The nitpick I had was "didn't deserved" which should be "didn't deserve." Also, I'm not quite sure how Theodore IS surviving his father; even for a young wizard, this abuse sounds lethal.

Author's Response: VV! I'm flattered! *blushes* though I can't figure out whether or not you actually liked guess I'll know soon enough, aye? ~Sunray

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 04/07/07 17:34
Chapter: Blame

Beautifully written. Though why was it all in bold?

Author's Response: Thanks! It wasn't meant to be in bold *blushes* I've fixed it now!

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