sad. great story
Author's Response: thank you!
Good work on a tricky assignment! But Anthony Nott does indeed make sense, in a creepy, not-quite-logical way. Love can do funny things to people. The nitpick I had was "didn't deserved" which should be "didn't deserve." Also, I'm not quite sure how Theodore IS surviving his father; even for a young wizard, this abuse sounds lethal.
Author's Response: VV! I'm flattered! *blushes* though I can't figure out whether or not you actually liked it...hm...I guess I'll know soon enough, aye? ~Sunray
Beautifully written. Though why was it all in bold?
Author's Response: Thanks! It wasn't meant to be in bold *blushes* I've fixed it now!