This story was achingly fluffly, but extremely sweet. And I like the fluff. :)
The tone it took on at the end was still aching, but it became achingly bittersweet, as we know they really don't have much time left.
It was a nice little picture of two characters we don't get to see very often (and one we don't get to see nice!). Nice work.
Aw, this makes me want to cry. They have no idea that their time together will be very short lived. This was an incredibly written story. Very good job, Haylee
This story is very cute. I liked it a lot. I liked the way you expressed Cho's feelings and how Cedric reacted to her facial expressions. Good job. =)