Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/07/08 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

I think this is my favourite chapter so far. Extra curriculars, employee satisfaction, complementary doughnuts! ... Excellent! I know a customer services lady in our local supermarket who calls everyone sunshine or sweetie pie or honey bun, it's a bit annoying, Violets a great character to force on Snape. The last line in the chapter was my favourite though, she gave me the tattoo but i won't say where. YOU ARE HILARIOUS!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/07/08 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Snape, The Laundry Boy

That was so Snape! I'm aching with laughter.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/07/08 15:03
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

This first chapter was absolutely hilarious! The text flows so well and was a very enjoyable read.

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive

*wipes reminiscent tear* that is soooo awesome!!! yay! A doorknob!!!!! thats just awesome!!! *emails all friends about it* lol!! that was cool! that was funneh! that was..... highly amusing! yay! good job! I ... I....awwe, it's over....

Author's Response: we just have to finish the last chapter don't cry

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:51
Chapter: Chapter 9: Snape, The Insomniac

ooooh i like it, though you do make your chapters a bit short
lol lol I'm soooo excited for the showdown :D:D i have abso noo idea whats going to happen :D maybe Violet will go down *gasp* noo! she's my granddaughter! *WINK* btw i dont get that, whats with the wink?? lol. snapesy and drake seem to think killing Volders will be merely watering a daisy :S lol lol I shall continue on now :D good job :D

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 01/07/08 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive

Going through some sotries, I found chapter 11 was the last chapter, and the story was finished. Is this a mistake or were you going for an anticlimax? It seemed like there would be more....As for that last review by me, what do you mean in your response? I know nothing of you other than what's in your bio and what your responses have said. Were you being sarcastic?

Author's Response: No, I haven't finished, the final chapter, had to be edited. sorry.

Author's Response: I believe my dear co-author J was joking about knowing her better. Frankly, I suspect she was offended at the idea that anyone would believe she could stoop to *making up* a spell. -M

Author's Response: Well, okay, I mean she did make it up, but it makes sense. All the spells in this story make sense if you go and look them up.

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 7: Snape, The Psychiatrist

ooooooooh i like it!!! funneh lol okay now next chappie!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:27
Chapter: Chapter 6: Draco, Seriously Harassed

hahahaha, as usual my fav author amuses me to the extreme :D it was good, but this time I am going to just .... skip to the next chapter !!! yay! lol bye now :D good job :D

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 5: Snape, The Reborn

oh that was funneh!!!! hahahahaha when I realized what was going to happen to Sssseverusssss's hair, I started wacking the keyboard laughing!!! lol its good, very very good, now I want to read the next chapter!! ta-ta, Sunshine ~~xD

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:09
Chapter: Chapter 4: Draco, Tattoo God

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! sorry, can't help it I'm very expressive LOL this story definitely belongs in the humor section! lol lol lol good job! next chapter :D

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 3: Snape, The Avenger

hahahahahahahaha "the golden trio" thats hilarious!!!!! lol I love Violet, she's so scarily and the honey thing vaguely amused me. lol. and I like the idea of the Golden Trio trying to figure out what was going on lol :D yay! next chapter!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 19:53
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

that was hilarious, good job!!!!
*catches breath* lol it was good, i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Snape, The Laundry Boy

haha nice, it was really good :D :D the happiness of violet and dumbledore is positively frighteningly funny :D :D btw who is 'a certain redheaded man'? is it that Lucius is actually redheaded not blonde? lol confuzzled lol :D it was pretty good though ,will all of them be from Sssseverussss's point of view? lol good job!!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 01/07/08 19:34
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

nice! thats really funny! good job

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 12/06/07 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Snape, The Laundry Boy

Ha ha this is interesting. I can't stop reading... at least the Dark Lord has style! :)

Author's Response: well if you don't have style, what kind of dark lord are you?

Reviewer: chocklit
Date: 12/04/07 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive

this is so awesome! i love the idea, and the writing is wonderful!

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 12/04/07 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive

(stifled laughter) BWAH HAHAHAHA!!!! Oh my goodness. . . what ever possesed you to think up this great story! Seriously, a DOORKNOB?!?!?! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Oh how humiliating for Voldermort. Plus, a doorknob is an inatimate object so there is no life in it whatsoever, so, if you want to get technical, Voldemort is "dead."

Wow . . . Violet's old . . .

I wonder what they are going to call the new group . . .

Anyway, great story and you must write more!!!

Reviewer: writer4eternity
Date: 11/30/07 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive


(sorry, bout any misspelling and the caps...i like over-using the caps button)

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/30/07 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 10: Draco, Still Alive

Voldie doorknobs!!!!! Yeah!
Great chapter. Update soon!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/30/07 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 9: Snape, The Insomniac

Great chapter! Interesting with Dumbledore being her grandson.

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