Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 05/25/07 8:47
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

It's funny. I'm not reading your last update until the intended chapter 2 is up. I'm just wierd that way. Other than that, it's great!

Author's Response: 1-4 are correct now. sorry about the wierd chapters. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 05/21/07 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: Snape, The Laundry Boy

that was so funny!!!!!! I loved it!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! :)

Author's Response: Gee, thanks. We will most certainly try.

Reviewer: qralex
Date: 05/11/07 13:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

great chapter!
By the way, can Draco get his 'new' look back when he wants to?

Still, when'll the next chapter come out (or, the previous chapter...)

Author's Response: yes but snape's the one that knows the spell and he's definitely not telling. Sorry it's taking so long for the update.

Reviewer: _Rictusempra_
Date: 04/28/07 12:34
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

wow great idea this is really cool vant waith for the next one

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 04/27/07 12:47
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

This was great! I really laughed at this:

“Choose the one that best describes you: evil head of large corporation, corrupt leader of a nation, deranged psychopath with a gun and/or wand, secret ruler of the universe, corrupt councilor, or other.”

“Deranged psychopath with a wand?” Tom guessed wildly.

This story is really well-written! I hope you will update chapters frequently!

Author's Response: we try. Mugglenet doesn't seem to be as generous. But we can't complain.

Reviewer: Karma_k2
Date: 04/21/07 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

She gave me the tattoo. I won’t say where.
Pity.

Author's Response: Don't despair. You'll find out more about that later.

Author's Response: Don't despair. You'll find out more about that later.

Reviewer: Karma_k2
Date: 04/21/07 21:30
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

She gave me the tattoo. I won’t say where.
Pity.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/21/07 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

This is a very fresh and original portrayal of Draco. I really like the part where he's saying 'did I think it would look good on university transcripts?' or something. VERY typical teenager-y. And you definitely have his sneery snarkiness down pat.

I love your writing style so much. You're a great in the making, I can tell. I loved the description of Voldemort's laugh: "He chuckled, a sound like a snake trying to swallow a pig that’s a bit too big for it, and vanished."

Draco's interactions with Crabbe and Goyle are priceless. They're so... perfect. You manage to keep your characters wonderfully canon, just exaggerated for the purpose of humour. I wish I could do it as well as you!

The line about Draco thinking it was 'unecessary violence for a teacher-student relationship' was one of the best I've seen. And I loved his line, “Oh shut up,” I told him, which was really stupid, “I’m going to be a Dark Lord.”

I have this weird closet fan-girl complex when it comes to Draco. I won't think of myself as a Draco fan, but then I'll read something like the description of him post-makeover and just go, "Oh, Godric!" ^_^

Well, I cannot wait for more. This story is brilliant.








Author's Response: Thanks ever so. I'm so glad you like it, because The Dark Lord's Blog is one of my favorite fanfics ever :)

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 04/21/07 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

Woohoo! You updated! I've been waiting impatiently for this (even though it wasn't a very long wait).

I liked how you made Draco. He was not the least bit OOC.

But there was one thing I noticed. In the sentence 'I knelt with the rest kissed the Dark Lord’s cloak with the rest of the Death Eaters', you repeated rest twice. andyou didn't have an and between the first rest and 'kissed'. But other than that, everything looked good.

I don't want to end this on a bad note, because it was really good. Awesomeful job!

Author's Response: Yeah - sorry about that sentence; that whole paragraph got re-written and I messed up, but I'll fix it.

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 04/21/07 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 2: Draco, Heir Unapparent

awsome! :) I liked it a lot ,very funny! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! You're too sweet :)

Reviewer: quiggler
Date: 04/20/07 18:41
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

HAHA! Cool! This is a very unusual story but funny at the same time. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm getting this strange feeling of deja vu.

Reviewer: quiggler
Date: 04/20/07 18:41
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

HAHA! Cool! This is a very unusual story but funny at the same time. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: blondechild
Date: 04/13/07 19:06
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

O....KAY!?!?!?!!?!?!?

Author's Response: um, okay?

Reviewer: lily_007
Date: 04/08/07 10:51
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

IT IS WONDERFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!................EAGERLY AWAITNG THE NXT CHAPTER

Author's Response: er... Thank you. Nice 'U's by the way.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 04/07/07 11:42
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

haha! this is great! I'll put this in my favorites, NOW! :D
I hope the next chapter gets validated soon. how many chapters are you planning to write?
oh, and say hello to sweetie Voldy for me. ;P

Author's Response: I think there will be 8 parts in all. 6 chapters, a prologue and an epilogue.

Author's Response: But that could change...

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 04/06/07 10:52
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

This is sooo funny so far! I love Violet and her business...ceretainly original! Nice little questionaire, too. And "Parenting" magazine...would that be Darth Vader? Eye on top of a tower...would that be Sauron? It's so funny the way that you have this little place for all the villans and dark people to become stylish! Can't wait for the next chappie ;)

Author's Response: Because you just know that most Dark Lords have no fashion sense. :)

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/06/07 7:38
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

YUSSS! I love humour fics about Voldemort! (I like the username, by the way.)

The beginning was great, the way it started out serious, and then the business card appeared. I had to chuckle at that one!

You have great description skills, by the way!

And the description of Darth Vader-- I'm assuming that that's who the mantis-masked bloke was-- was truly inspired! Very, very funny! (Although I never imagined Vader to look like a praying mantis. The part about "Parenting" magazine just slayed me.)

The part about Tom lying about his height was great as well, very realistic. And I can just imagine him calling himself "a deranged psychopath with a wand" in a totally matter-of-fact manner.

I'm hoping there's more, because this is very promising. I like the concept of Tom with stubble...

Author's Response: Yeah, there's more. (no I'm just going to watch all you writhe in agony) I'm not that mean.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 04/06/07 6:39
Chapter: Prologue: In which Tom Riddle acquires a business card

Bizarre. Very good and funny, but bizarre. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
-Susan

Author's Response: But if you think about it, aren't we all just a little bizarre?

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