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Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 04/09/07 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Erm...if they were torturing her, why and how would she have her wand? That puzzled me, but otherwise, it's great.

Author's Response: i forgot to add that part in the story, but she managed to hide it...

Reviewer: Lily Roxy
Date: 04/08/07 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

It is sad, but in a comforting sort of way. The poem was simple, yet deep. I would have liked to have seen a little more description of what Avada Kedavra felt like, as oppose to just saying "it was painless" and more detail on why the Malfoys kept Misha where she was, unless it was just for entertainment? Either way, good story:).

Author's Response: entertainment, and i didn't describe it because i really didn'y see how i cold describe something that happened so quick...

Reviewer: healthyobsession7
Date: 04/08/07 10:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

It is a truly wonderful story that, while being a fanfic based in the Harry Potter world, shows just how creative you can be, my little cabbage...lol... but who could really expect any less from such a great writer as yourself? KEEP 'EM COMIN'!
-Luney... xoxo

Reviewer: loOny_lovegOod_93
Date: 04/08/07 3:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

i don't know why but i really like this story, its really weird...lol thats not a very good review is it...well i like it :) u should do more

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/07/07 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

so sad......

weep

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