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Name: A Cappella (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 16:11 · For: Relighting the Candle
I like how you used the metaphor of a candle for those who are oppressed under the regime of Voldemort--awesome and very clever! :)

Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you liked it!

Name: Ritter (Signed) · Date: 05/12/07 15:46 · For: Relighting the Candle
nice, good job!

Author's Response: thanks!

Name: _Ivy_ (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 16:30 · For: Relighting the Candle
This is a great poem! It has wonderful rhythm and lovely flow. Great job, and good luck in the contest!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 12:18 · For: Relighting the Candle
Hi! You already know what I think but I am going to leave the first review anyway! =) First of all, I think you tweaked it well. The rhythm flows smoothly and the rhythmes are all well-done. What I like best about this is your consistent use of the candle image. Mold, wax, wick, light - all of these words give the poem a sense of unity and depth. I love the turn, and the last line is great - very strong. Nice job, and good good luck in the challenge!!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Gina! You really are an angel! *huggles*

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