Reviewer: ronsbabiesmomma
Date: 08/17/08 23:02
Chapter: One-Shot

what did she die from? why were there scratches and such? you left a lot of things open but all in all it was a good story. very emotional and sweet at the end.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/08/08 6:56
Chapter: One-Shot

*sob* I've read this story a couple of times now and it still makes me cry. You really have a lot of potential and I think that you would be an outstanding author. This story is really toughing and it is written beautifully. I love your characterizations. You one of the best writers on this site. Congratulations on a brilliant masterpiece!

Author's Response: *blushes furiously* Thanks so very much! I really appreciate the wonderful review. :)

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 04/10/08 17:58
Chapter: One-Shot

*reads again*


Wow, just... wow. I know that I've read this before-- I'm sure of it-- but I never read it over so thoroughly that I would realize how fantastic this is.

As always, Ron and Hermione were in character the whole time. I just had one line that I'm not too sure the Healer would say:

“Dead, Mr. Weasley. Your wife is only half-alive at the moment. Would you like to see her?”

The first part was a bit shaky. I'm not certain that the Healer would straight-out tell Ron that Hermione is half alive. But that's your call! ^.^

When Ron started crying, you ripped my heart out. It was so emotional, and it was so moving.

I'm deeply sad that Hermione died, though in a way, I knew it would end up like that [in this fic]. The one sentence you had at the end was, in my opinion, more effective than you making her have a death scene. Of course, I know all about those. *winks*

Fantastic, love.


Author's Response: Ha ha, you sure do. *winks* And ew, that line is awful! I won't go back and change it, solely because it's been here for so long, but thanks so much for pointing it out. *snickers* That is pretty bad. But thank you so much, again, for all of your lovely compliments, Victoria! *squishes* ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 03/29/08 5:27
Chapter: One-Shot

awww. i read it twice now and it still makes me cry(that is really something coz i dont cry often) I think you wrote this fanfic really beatifully. your one of the best writers ever. that last sentence is really touching. it gives me the goosebumbs(in a good way)
keep writing

Author's Response: Aw, that's one of the best compliments I've received! Thank you so very much! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 03/29/08 5:24
Chapter: One-Shot

omg that was so sad. it was a great fanfic but i was practicly crying at the end. *wipes away tear drop*

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so sorry I made you cry! Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Anonymouslywritten
Date: 02/18/08 0:36
Chapter: One-Shot

Very well written. You are easily one of the best writers on this site. Honest. The way you can blend 2 characters personalities to make a wonderful masterpiece......... It's just outstanding.
I'm quite a good story reader, but not quite a good writer.... If you would like to help, can yu please e-mail, or PM me some tips?
And yet again, a wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliments! I really appreciate it. I'm afraid I don't know your email address. I'd be glad to help out with whatever questions you have. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/22/08 11:06
Chapter: One-Shot


Author's Response: Afraid so. :I

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 01/15/08 10:27
Chapter: One-Shot


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 11/20/07 6:14
Chapter: One-Shot

wow! your fic is amazing...
oh, and are there any monitors in st. mungos by any chance?? and i just made out that it had to be the wizard hospital because you had used the word 'healer' instead of 'doctor'.

Author's Response: Yes, it was St. Mungo's. There weren't any monitiors in my story though. Thanks!

Reviewer: Vicster
Date: 11/07/07 15:30
Chapter: One-Shot

i loved it. wow. soooo sad though =[

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Vicster
Date: 11/07/07 15:28
Chapter: One-Shot

i loved it. wow. soooo sad though =[

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 10/19/07 16:14
Chapter: One-Shot

Lindseyyy! It was so awesome, sad, but awesome (as always). *literally crying and gives Lindsey a huge hug*. Great job, dear. xxvictoria

Author's Response: Aw, I always seem to making you cry, don't I, dear? *hugs* Thanks so much for yet another great review. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: dumbledoreismyhero
Date: 09/15/07 21:23
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. Very sweet-- really sad.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 08/30/07 12:29
Chapter: One-Shot

...The rest of my review got deleted, so I'll finish it!

...I feel like crying!

The story was written well and everything flowed together. Nothing was cramped, and the emotions came across as realistic. I thought the characters ('specially Ron) were very canon. 10/10!~


Author's Response: Thanks so very much! I appreciate you taking the time to write it twice. :) ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 08/30/07 12:26
Chapter: One-Shot

=:::::(So SAD!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think? ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Madam Puddifoot
Date: 08/16/07 9:58
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh my God. Oh my God. OH MY GOD.

I feel like crying. I'm out of my head. Oh my God... :(

This touched my heart - it's really amazing... thank you for such a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome. I'm glad you liked it so much. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Fred the Duck
Date: 08/09/07 18:25
Chapter: One-Shot

that was so sad! but I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Fred the Duck
Date: 08/09/07 18:24
Chapter: One-Shot

that was so sad! but I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: FlightofthePhoenix
Date: 07/04/07 0:36
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow Lindsey, really emotional story you got here. So beautiful and sad, love it. Just one thing i noticed sorry, if Hermione is Ron's wife, you wrote Hermione Granger died the next day. Sorry. Oh well, loved it anyway! :) Nicole

Author's Response: Ha ha, *giggles*. My mistake! Thanks for letting me know that! I'm so glad that you liked it, Nicole! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 07/02/07 13:32
Chapter: One-Shot

OMG, that was so sad. Poor Ronald! You are such a great writer! I'm going to see your name on a best-selling novel one day, seriously!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you SO very much! You don't even know how much that comment made my day or made me smile. :) *hugs reviewer to death* Thanks so much, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. ~Lindsey :)

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