Reviews For Teaching the Dark
Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 09/02/12 22:47
Chapter: What To Do

Just got to a good bit and you stop writing... really????
you have to finish, i think it would be a great time if draco told hermione about his mission whilst their in the room of requirement, it just seems like the right time.... i hope this has helped you and if you feel un-inspired maybe you should re-read or re-watch the harry potter series to give you some ideas
Also, if you would be able to, i think it would be a good idea if you made your chapters slightly longer.
And again i hope you continue with your fic, it's really great and i've waited over a year for the next chapterso i'm really desperate... :(
thanks and good luck
beaflower114

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 12/02/10 17:41
Chapter: What To Do

hurry up and write the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 12/02/10 16:51
Chapter: Changes and Plans

Draco's eyes are really pretty though, good choice!

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 12/02/10 16:25
Chapter: The Surprise

its only the first chapter and i love it already!

Reviewer: Llyrfe
Date: 08/16/10 23:49
Chapter: What To Do

awwww.... what happens next??? please update soon... I really love the Dramoine pairings... and this is such a wonderful story... tnx

Reviewer: Roseanne Potter
Date: 06/21/10 0:52
Chapter: What To Do

Great story, one of my favourites here............ Its been months since you updated.....Please keep writing, there are many people waiting for an update from you on this story.

Reviewer: DeathlyHollows21
Date: 02/28/10 18:06
Chapter: What To Do

Please keep writing? I really like this fic! It's really good!

Reviewer: Storytellerdoll
Date: 02/12/10 9:00
Chapter: The Surprise

You write better as a 12 yr old than many do in their forties! The only suggestion I have is different verbs for the dialogue, something more interesting than "called" or "exclaimed." Keep writng, you're talented!

Reviewer: LittleGinny
Date: 02/03/10 5:36
Chapter: What To Do

Thanks for updating. Really good chapter. Just one thing; what did WE do to deserve such a cliffhanger?? :D

Author's Response: MWAHAHAHAH!

Reviewer: cbred13
Date: 10/15/09 19:01
Chapter: Let Go

great story so far hope more is coming really soon!

Reviewer: hijabi4life12
Date: 09/11/09 19:34
Chapter: Let Go

Ahh! update pleasee!
This is pretty goodd!
Word of advice: Try to make Malfoy seem... more malfoy-ish! Add some 'leers' and 'smirks'. maybe even some arched eyebrows haha.
All in all, awesome! lemme know when you updattee!

Reviewer: SparkzMxzXZ
Date: 09/08/09 7:21
Chapter: The Surprise

Why is neville and luna descibed as 'small'? Haha, besides that, this is a good start. (:

Reviewer: lupinandtonks4ever
Date: 08/28/09 18:24
Chapter: Let Go

omg, i love this chapter! i cant wait til the next one is up.

Reviewer: horntail_luver
Date: 07/31/09 12:17
Chapter: Forced

THANKZ 4 UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!! OMYCANNONS!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: YOU'RE WELCOME!!!! MORE TO COME BEFORE SUMMER ENDS! I PROMISE!

Reviewer: lil_sis
Date: 07/31/09 8:05
Chapter: Changes and Plans

Hey, cool story so far! Here are some corrections that came to me while I was reading.... Let me know if you don't like these kind of stuff and I'll leave you alone! ;)

"It was only when there was snow on the ground and you could sense Christmas coming did Malfoy not come to his lesson on time"
I think you would say "Only when there was...... did Malfoy not come..." or "It was only wehn ther was snow... that Malfoy didn't come"

Also"
"He looked up slightly, but all Hermione could see in his stormy eyes were confusion"
Wouldn't it be, "all Hermione couls see in his.... eyes WAS confusion"? She is seeing one thing, so it should be singular (was) not plural....

And,
"He won’t be able to conceal a murder to Dumbledore" should be "conceal a murder from"

That's all for now. I 'm supposed to be doing a million and two important stuff and instead I'm writing reviews, so I'm gonna dash! Have a great day!
lil

Author's Response: No, it's okay. Thanks for your help!

Reviewer: Slytherin good girl
Date: 07/26/09 10:49
Chapter: Friends?

You rock!!! Plz reply to me... I've never cotton an authors responce before!

Author's Response: Thanks for the love!

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 07/24/09 19:08
Chapter: Forced

ahhh crazy. im glad u updated! it was awesome despite what happened between the two. at least hermione is not giving up.

Author's Response: Just wait till the next chapter. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: horntail_luver
Date: 07/17/09 12:20
Chapter: Pain

This is my favorite Dramione fic ever!!!!!! Please write more!!!

Author's Response: YAy! Don't worry, there's more to come.

Reviewer: cbtjm
Date: 04/04/09 7:36
Chapter: The Surprise

cool

Author's Response: totally

Reviewer: shadow_dragon91
Date: 03/19/09 16:30
Chapter: Pain

wow this is awesome i cant wait for more i really hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

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