This is the first story that I've reviewed and I don't usually read stories like this (centered around a love story), but I must say that I was delighted by what you've written. Keep up the great work!
I look forward to the next chapter.
I really liked how you opened the story -- great description.
Oh I get to be first. I made a vow to read at least one story everytime I log onto the forums and you got picked today. This was very good and I'm glad I saw it. You intrigued me enough to tag as a favorite so I will see when you post the next chapter. Very well thought out and it flows nicely. I have read too many stories where these two are already married and it is falling apart and such, it is refreshing to see one where they pick up again after so long. Good job.