Oh, yes, Ash, this is wonderful. I love the tempo of the words and the symmetry of the first and third sentences as he gradually moves from complete denial through anger to acceptance. It shows his strength, really, in that he's managed to get past the chasm of Sirius' death and into a place where he can use it in a more positive light.
Great stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks much, HH! I see you're someone who really knows how to appreciate poetry for what it is. :) I'm glad you liked it and thanks again for your awesome review. :D ~GG

Interesting, I've never seen one set out like this before. I think this is really great, it's simple yet deep. If that makes sense. I can really relate to his thoughts. Ok i sound like an idiot but who cares!! Great job ^_^

Dee Dee xx

Author's Response: Hehe yes it makes perfect sense. Sometimes the more simple the poem the more it's really able to cut right to the meaning. Thanks for the review, o faithful one! ~GG