Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 11/06/10 3:34
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

Interesting poem and rhyme scheme. I've never come across a sonnet like this one. I always felt sorry for Dobby, he was only trying to help Harry and he couldn't say much anyway, so I think you did a great job with this poem/sonnet.


Author's Response: I wrote this for either a class or a contest a long time ago. It was fun to write, and I have always liked Dobby. Thanks for another great review. :) Cyns

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 12/11/08 18:05
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

*hugs Dobby*

I like that you chose to write about an ignored character. Dobby is such a cute little guy and we really don't see him much in fanfiction. Of course, after DH....but it's not like J.K didn't raise people from the dead...

I'm going to stop rambling now. The poem itself fit Dobby very well.

Good job!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this! I had a lot of fun writing it and I always thought Dobby was a nice character to read and write! :) Cyns

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 03/29/07 17:16
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

Great job! I love how different this is from most sonnets, focusing on a character given little attention in fanfiction. The poem fits Dobby perfectly! Good job with the rhymes and good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Gina! I don't have a clue what lead to me thinking of Dobby, but it was fun to write about him. Cyns

Reviewer: binteridhwan
Date: 03/29/07 4:44
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

thank you for the help! i got into gryffindor!

Author's Response: Congrats! Thanks again... Cyns

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 03/27/07 16:25
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

Love what you did with this! Great final version! (you had one other helper! :P) Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: I'm sorry!! You are never totally forgotten! I really do appreciate the help you give me, sis!! LOL Cyns

Reviewer: binteridhwan
Date: 03/27/07 14:01
Chapter: Dobby's Affliction

nice!! umm i wanted to ask do you get into a house? like yor in slytherin yeah ? how did you get into it ? thanx

Author's Response: Thank you for your review... You go to the forums, and PM Songbook99 and ask for the quiz. Send the quiz back and they will sort you! :) Cyns

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