Reviewer: SmartyPants
Date: 10/03/07 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

"Sorry I took so long to update... I promise it won't happen again."

UGH!! I don't want to see you become an addicted-to-lying liar! please update soon!!

p.s. just kidding about the lying. i doubt you could ever be a liar.

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH, did I really say that? That's actually... funny!

Wow, I'm horrible. I need e-Crucios.

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 10/03/07 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Okay heres my post for voldy:
Re: Becoming one fo your Followers! :)
Hey Voldy!! I was just reading your blog and i would like to say WOW your blog is ahmazing! Where can i sign up to be a death eater i already renewed my stalking/lisence to kill lisence!!! But i just gotta let you know im extreamly peppy and well i love PINK and smilies :) you should try some smilies sometimes it really brightens up your post and stuff!! :) Oh yeah and I LOVE YOU VOLDY!! =]
-Posted by REMi iS AWESOME (MNFF)

Yeah i finally had a chance to post this for voldys blog! Kepp writing your amazing!!

Author's Response: Hahahaha, I can't wait to write Voldy's reaction to this one, Emily!

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 10/02/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

It isn't very often that you find a fic that is cliche AND original.

Author's Response: Really? I see a lot of them! An excellent example is "Cliche Nation," or "Harry Potter, The Half-Blood Prince, and Mary Sue."

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/27/07 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Nice one!! sorry i just relised you made a sequal so kindly ignore my other review!! oh can i please be in your story!!! maybe a girl taht is in love with lord voldemort and joins his death eater ranks!! That would be amazing!! lovely story! actually extreamly harious this time!! again i fell off my chair laughing!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Well, I don't know about a girl who loves Voldemort, but you can always submit a comment for Voldemort's comments section!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 09/26/07 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Well, maybe he can become obsessed with Dear Abby one day or something... or his horoscope. Remarkably cliche, yet I've seen you make cliches so funny that I fall of chairs. ^-^

Author's Response: Hahahaha, that's a great idea... obsessed with horoscopes. I can see great ideas spawning from that!

Reviewer: GryfvenslythPUFF
Date: 09/25/07 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

I know I keep on leaving review/complaints. I know these are annoying. I know I"m annoying. I know I have band class tomorrow. But one thing I don't know (and trust me, there are a LOT of things I don't know(even though that may be a bit surprising(And I hate parenthesis!))) is what happens in chapter three!!! DID YOU SAY...berries and cream? Berries and cream, berries and cream, I'm a little lad who loves berries and cream! BERRIES AND CREAM, BERRIES AND CREAM, I'M A LITTLE LAD WHO LOVES BERRIES AND CREEEEEEEEEAMMMMMA. Gahahaha. Schmergo I still love you! Can't wait till chapter three! -runs away sobbing- NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME! Juuuust kidding. Byee!

Author's Response: YUSSS! There will be BERRIES AND CREAM! I love that man... though he looks suspiciously like Beckett from Pirates of the Caribbean. There is a short delay on Chapter 3 because my computer hard drive was completely destroyed, deleting all of my documents. :( Still, it'll definitely come out before Columbus Day.

Reviewer: Yellow_and_Dangerous
Date: 09/22/07 0:47
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Exceptionally funny. No one writes the way you do.

Can't wait for Chapter three!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! Chapter three should be coming soon.... but my harddrive completely wiped, so I'm starting over from the beginning on my dad's computer.

Reviewer: Yellow_and_Dangerous
Date: 09/22/07 0:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHOOOOOOOOOOO! Its great to be back in the world of Voldy-poo! :D

Hey, that rhymed, that did.

Author's Response: Really? I didn't notice! ;-)

Reviewer: LittleMissLovegood
Date: 09/19/07 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.


ps nagini better not alter my comment *pointed glare in no particular direction*

Author's Response: Hahahahaha, that made me laugh out loud. I do love Nagini, though... I was actually really sad when Neville killed her!

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 09/18/07 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Do you mean it!
(explodes with happiness)

Author's Response: I DOOOO MEEEANNN ITTTT! But sadly, the mods don't like this type of "nonconstructive" comment, so as much as I enjoy them, I kind of wish people wouldn't leave them... I don't want my story deleted!

Reviewer: GryfvenslythPUFF
Date: 09/16/07 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

I am spiraling into a deep pit of depression for lack of Schmergo funnyness. Here is my face- D=. Please update! I STILL LOVE YOUUUU! Ahahaha.

Author's Response: BIG NEWS! Update coming within the next two weeks! Including a reference to the LITTLE LAD from the BERRIES AND CREAM STARBURSTS COMMERCIAL!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/14/07 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Nagini!!! Stop editing the comments!!! Lol. Can't wait for the next chappie... Yo will be updating soon, of course. Or at least you better... *glares in a highly scary way that would have Volders very jealous*

Author's Response: AAAAAGH! You scare me so much I may have to!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/14/07 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!:D YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! That's exactly the kind of reaction I like!

Reviewer: witch6
Date: 09/14/07 7:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

hehehe... awesome!! plz update sooner.. cant wait..

Author's Response: Thanks! But I'm not sure how soon I'll be updating...

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 09/11/07 15:03
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

I can't wait for you to update chapter 3!!! I love your writing.
Wouldn't it be funny if Voldypoo ran an advice column in the Hogwarts paper? Haha just a random thought.

Author's Response: Hmmm... that is a good idea! It doesn't really fit the scope of *THIS* story, but it might be an interesting aside reference... fnaw fnaw fnaw...

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 08/31/07 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLESE UDPATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, I've been trying SO hard! Maybe I'll get inspired when I take my humour class on MNFF forums.

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 08/30/07 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Wow. No amount of praise can do that justice. Just . . . wow.

Author's Response: Ohhhh, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 08/29/07 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Prats R Us! funny! My dad and I came up with what OC could also stand for:
Oily character
Odd creature
Obnoxiously cool
Original creep
Old codger ect.

Author's Response: Ahaha, Old Codger! Wait a minute... Oily Character... does that make Snape an OC? Mungo Phelps certainly qualifies as "Obnoxiously Cool." How about... Orangutan Chow? (sorry...)

Reviewer: aliauthor
Date: 08/24/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Did I seriously not review this chapter? Oh dear. I thought I did, I've read it several times.

Has chapter numero three been submitted yet? I can't decide whether I want you to put up the next chapter for this or Potters Pentagon--although they are in different categories, I believe, so they could be updated at the same time. But then! What would I read first?

"I think you have too many shoes..." My friends and I have a running joke about that video. "These shoes are three hundred dollars...lets get 'em!"

Author's Response: Chapter Three... dreaded chapter three... I've tried to write it a gajillion times, but it never comes out funny enough. I have, however, updated Potter's Pentagon.

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 08/20/07 11:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Oh, wow, I love Nagini's edits... and I sure do hate Mungo Phelps, which is of course a compliment to your great writing abilities. However, I'm depressed that Johnny Depp now has no cheekbones - I have a feeling he doesn't look very good without them...

Author's Response: Poor Johnny... I didn't even think of that. I'm sure he can get prosthetics? Nagini is fun. I was so depressed when she died in DH... though she did get to be awesome and impersonate Bathilda.

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