Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 05/01/07 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.


Shoes! OMG Shoes! I loveeee that video and I definitely loved the references.

This story just keeps me laughing and its great. I'm getting weird looks from my teachers again...once again, on MNFF instead of doing homework...oh well, this story is much more entertaining, and I'm a senior. The end.

Author's Response: SQUEEE! You got my 'shoes' reference! And heck, I read fanfiction instead of doing my homework, and I'm a freshman! No worries!

Reviewer: LifeAtRandom
Date: 05/01/07 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Great so-far! But I don't think you've made your OC obnoxious enough!

And I don't think Voldy would've let Mungo off so easily about the Dark Mark tattoo. Maybe you can have a running gag where Voldy keeps trying to brand Mungo at unexpected times... Just a thought.

Author's Response: LifeAtRandom, you read me like a book! Or more aptly, a fanfiction. I do, in fact, have stealth-branding plans in the works. (Have I gotten that predictable?) But yeah, I wanted Mungo to be just annoying enough to be funny without making him unlikeable, because he's the more moral/redeemable of the pair. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 05/01/07 6:06
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Ha ha, this is (once again) absolutely bloody hilarious! Hmm... I was going to write my favourite line here, but I can't's a tough choice between 'Iím about as useless as my own hairbrush' and '... he had Johnny Deppís cheekbones. In a jar.'

I'm in love with this story... :D

~Tickled Pink~

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter, as you can see. I'm glad you spotted the hairbrush line! Good eye...

Reviewer: Part Veela
Date: 05/01/07 4:45
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

oh and bye the way... reference to johnny depp's cheekbones was just gold... -sighs and drifts off into johnny depp daydreams- i think im gonna steal that jar...

Author's Response: I personally prefer his jar of dirt. ^_^

Reviewer: Part Veela
Date: 05/01/07 4:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

my family is having me shipped off to the insane asylum now because every time i read a new chapter i end up crying and rolling around on the floor and they have no idea what is wrong with me... It's all your fault!
I dont mind as long as i have a computer with which to read the rest of the story though hahaha omg i friggen love you and your fantastical stories!!! Write more or i may have to start stalking you like a freak...

Author's Response: Fwahahahaha! I will indeed write more! It makes me super happy that you like my stories, and indeed, I am doing a bizarre dance at the moment.

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 05/01/07 4:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

WOW. It was awesome!!

I liked the Kaa and Nagini bit. They must look sweet together! *shuts up as Schmergo stares incredulously*

The security guard just let Voldemort pass like that?? Uh oh...can't quite digest that...

I liked the johnny depp part! Cheekbones loL! at first i was picturizing the kinda face Mungo had, when I read "In a jar"!! Lol! How gross though.

That part about Mungo telling Nagini not to be full of someone else was really funny!!!!

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: The security guard is st00pid, actually. I'm glad you like the part about Johnny Depp. I had fun with that. And this story needed a dose of Nagini/weird fictional evil two-dimensional cartoon snake love!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 05/01/07 3:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

"...I raced past him toward the revolving door.


Oh, right. Revolving door."

"...we walked gallantly into the sunset, through the revolving door.


That was a hilarious chapter!!!

Author's Response: Yayyy, madelynn! I'm glad you liked the revolving door part. I personally had fun with it.

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 05/01/07 2:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

You seriously need to stop being so funny, my sides will split, it's happened before (Mr. Burns reference. He is SO Voldy in disguise!) Your OC is very OC-ish. I've always wanted a pair of those light-up shoes, but they stop making them after kids sizes. What are we 15-year-olds with the minds of 4-year-olds supposed to wear? Anyhoo, loved it very much.

Author's Response: You are spot-on about Mr. Burns. And what's more, JK Rowling said she loves Mr. Burns. Who here thinks that influenced her characterization? Actually, I'm fifteen, and when I went shopping last week, I saw light-up shoes in MY SIZE! I was so excited, although I didn't actually buy them. (But then again, I wear size four-and-a-half. Blah, I'm short.)

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/01/07 1:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

please tell me you do not actually use the word nifty, voldy.

and i think the plural of walrus should be walri.

Author's Response: You know, I didn't even notice the use of the word 'nifty.' I use that word way too much (my friend Aku and I think the words 'nifty' and 'spiffy' are hilarious because they sound so stupid). Hmmm, I should pay more attention to such things. As for the word 'walri...' I'll have to file that one away.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 05/01/07 0:34
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

That was awesome, as usual. Is there no limit to your geniousness? By the way, I think those light up shoes are called Bubblegummers. It's just that I was Loughing SO hARD AND MY MUM aSKED ME WHY AND i TOLD HER ABOUT TYHE SHOES AND SHE SAID tHAT i Used to where them when I waws like 3=Sammy
Ps ;Please excuse the horrible grammer/ spelling/ execcive user of CAPS/overall bizarreness of this review.

Author's Response: Bubblegummers... that's the awesomest name for a type of shoes ever. That goes on my list of words that I'd love to see Snape try to say! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 05/01/07 0:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

AHHH!!! YAY!!! Omg, Schmergo, this is absolutely hilarious!!! *busts gut laughing* I have waited SO LONG for this chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! So have I! I submitted it, like three weeks ago...

Reviewer: Scheherazade
Date: 04/29/07 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Nagini has an e-Bay problem??? Oh I'm glad I found this fic before signing off... I just read two sad fics here and needed something to cheer me up. :-)

Oh, and Voldy, can't you just conjure your own food?

Author's Response: Ahhh, yes, you are the brilliant voice of Nagini. Well, you'll be pleased to know that chapter 2 has a HUGE amount of Nagini in it, and she's just as much of a, er, sparklediva (as she calls herself) as ever.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, and he can't conjure his food because he has no magic abilities now, remember?

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 04/29/07 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Hilarious just like the last one! The parts that really made me crack a rib were (im too lazy to copy-paste them at the moment) : The parts where the trio and luna send voldy those messages (Lamey Lame. Haha), the part about the hospital food (it was totally gross when you described the food but i laughed at the kosher and scientology part.) Kosher is a funny word when you imagine it coming from voldypoo's mouth!!

*waits patiently at the que for the next chapter and gets angry at the 'access denied' page*


Author's Response: You know, you're right. For some reason, I can't imagine Volders saying the word 'Kosher.' Well, I'm glad you liked it! I had fun with the comments... the lamey lame thing reminds me of Kuzco from "The Emperor's New Groove."

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 04/28/07 12:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

So, what's the deal with Chapter 2? I don't get it...

Author's Response: I know! I submitted it AGES ago!!!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 04/26/07 13:31
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Speaking of Josh Groban, he was just on American Idol last night. I expect that dear Volders was watching with tears in his eyes, as Josh sang "You Raise Me Up"... coincidentally, that's the only song I've ever heard him sing...

Author's Response: Hahahaha, that's because that's his most popular song. It's what made him a superstar! Yep, I was watching "Idol" as well, and I saw him. I love his singing so much...

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 04/25/07 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Damn. I was right...

Ah well, I'm still looking forward to it! (Go on, make the pink power ranger an exchange student at Hogwarts...) :D

I'll review later when the chapter comes out!

~Tickled Pink~

Author's Response: Okalie dokalies!

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 04/25/07 10:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World


I was so excited when I found this up! It's brilliant - every bit as funny as The Dark Lord's Blog. I haven't clicked on 'next' yet, but I have a feeling the next chapter hasn't been moderated yet....still, I can hope!

~Tickled Pink~

Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks! Yep, the chapter hasn't been moderated, despite the fact that I submitted it forever ago.

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 04/24/07 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Happy late b-day!! Sorry for not reviewing so long. I was too busy packing for Duke Summer Camp. I leave on June 10. I'm soo excited! The bad news is, I can't go on the internet unless for homework purposes.

Author's Response: Teehee, that's okay! Have fun at summer camp! I'm going to this Institute for the Arts this summer for musical theatre, creative writing, and dance, so that should be fun for me! It's the summer of Potter AND awesome camps!

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 04/24/07 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

*does first post dance* Yay! Another chapter! I can't wait to see this one... and, just asking, but does Voldypoo still have that burning passion (ok, I stretched it a bit...) for Josh Groban? (he hasn't appeared in your "I don't own" list for a while!)

Author's Response: Ahh, Josh Groban, don't worry, he shall appear! Voldemort is definitely a fan, however much he may deny it.

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 04/22/07 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

*SQUEE* It's the sequel! I was honestly a little worried that it wouldn't be quite as good as the worries anymore, teehee. ^.^ Awesome chappie!

Author's Response: Hehee, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I submitted Chapter 2 quite awhile ago, but it still hasn't been submitted.

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