Reviewer: Scheherazade
Date: 05/31/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Can't believe I haven't left a review yet. I read it, but forgot to leave a review. *blush*

Loved the chapter. And Voldy, you must respect Nagini. Otherwise, she might write something nasty about you in her journal. ;-)

Author's Response: Oh dear! Hear that, Volders! ^_^ Thanks for your review. I thought you might enjoy the increased Nagini-ness.

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 05/30/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

You just called me brilliant! *.* OMG I'm so happy to be called brilliant by such brilliant author.

Author's Response: Awwww!

Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 05/30/07 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

not as good as its precedor

Author's Response: Not yet, it isn't... it should get interesting later!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 05/30/07 9:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Dear Mr. Riddle,
Johnny Depp here, using an account the brilliant, sophisticated, and witty(haha) owner let me use. I demand my cheekbones back, because frankly, it does nothing for my jawline. Why, in the last movie, Pirates of the Carribean 3 (go see it kids!) they had to CGI my smile! Also, I hold your teddy bear ransom and will not give it back unless you return my cheekbones. AND WE ALL KNOW YOU LOVE YOUR TEDDY BEAR!!!!
Thank you,
Jonathan Depp

P.S MARVOLO?? Isn't that the name of the washing detergent?!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA! Oh my gosh, you are brilliant, Hedwig. I may have to include that in Chapter 3!

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 05/28/07 8:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Excellent. Except that you have one sentence that ends "and pudding that" May be my computer though.

Author's Response: Oh, that was the bit where Voldemort trailed off because he noticed that his pudding was moving. I've gotten a lot of complaints about that... I should have made it clearer with an ellipsis or something.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 05/28/07 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.


Author's Response: Thank you! I always value your opinion.

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 05/26/07 18:41
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Argh, Schmergo, the pain of waiting is killing me--but alas, the final exams... maybe Volders should take one... or six...

Well, good luck on your tests! I check daily for updates! (Wow, what a life I lead...)

Author's Response: I'm sorry this is taking so very long... I should update within the week, but I'm just so ridiculously busy. On a lighter note, Pirates 3? SHAZAM.

Reviewer: Helios Sol
Date: 05/19/07 7:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

This is good already... I just saw Spamalot 2 weeks ago, kepp the Monty Python references coming!

Author's Response: Oh, I just adore Spamalot. I'll try to make lots of Monty Python references! (I hope you got the "Kneel" bit.)

Reviewer: Disappearance_26
Date: 05/14/07 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.


Oh, right. Revolving door.

A.W.E.S.O.E!!! And so is Prats R Us! :D

Yet another amazing chappie, Schmergo! When are we getting the next one? *Bambi eyes*

PS: Draco+Bambi Eyes= The cutest thing on Earth!

Author's Response: Awww, why thank you! I'm a bit delayed, ficwise, seeing as I'm really busy with the gauntlet and my upcoming school exams. But I will eventually get it up online.

Reviewer: SmartyPants
Date: 05/13/07 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

Hahaha! Very funny! Great job. XD

Poor Nagini. She really should be allowed to have a boyfriend. She deserves better than Voldemort can give her. :(

Author's Response: True that, true that.

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 05/11/07 9:06
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

I printed this and gave it to a friend, and she loved the part about the revolving doors too! YAY!

Author's Response: You seem to waste a lot of paper on my stories! I should pay you back! ^_^

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 05/10/07 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Shmergo! You rock! Again! After reading through all your reviews (it's true, I have no life) I realized that nobody mentioned the head on reference! (I think. Maybe. Well, anyway.) Best part of the chapter, in my humble opinion. It took me a second to figure it out, but then it just hit me like the door hit Voldy. The parentheses organization in chapter one was great too- although I would have liked to see more parentheses in this chapter. =) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: ^_^ You know, I don't intentionally include an overabundance of parentheses, that's just how I write, and I noticed that I had a LOT of them in "The Dark Lord's Blog," so I mentioned it in Chapter Uno. It's funny when people are sad that my writing wasn't MORE flawed! As for the head-on thing, I'm so glad you got that one. Not everyone's seen that commercial. (Nice analogy with the door, by the way!)

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 05/06/07 12:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

*huggles Nagini* The poor dear. She just wants a boyfriend. Itís not like sheís an evil lord and the whole world wants to kill her. Iím sure she can go on a date without ending up in prison.

This was a really cute chapter. Well done, as always. Iím sure it will be interesting when we get back to Hogwarts. Oh and I have to ask, will Bella be making an appearance at some point. *makes Bambi-eyes imitating Draco*

Author's Response: Thank you! It's always nice hearing from you. As a matter of fact, we will indeed be seeing Bella, although not as much as in "The Dark Lord's Blog," because she isn't evil ad therefore less interesting.

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 05/05/07 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Yay for soccer ball shaped green flightless parrots! And yes, LA teachers everywhere, that was a run-on...

Author's Response: I love run-on sentences. I like the whooshing noise they make when they run by.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 05/05/07 17:47
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Ha ha ha! Go Nagini, you tricky snake! 10/10

Author's Response: Nagini likes you. ^_^

Reviewer: lunaticbookworm
Date: 05/04/07 22:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

LOL Brilliant as always!
I loved the shoes part and the cheekbones cracked me up
Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! Those were some of my favourite parts as well. Nice username!

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 05/03/07 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Hahaaa! Loved it! ♥

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: FinalCow
Date: 05/03/07 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Go Nagini!

Author's Response: I know, she's gotten very popular on here, hasn't she?

Reviewer: blondechild
Date: 05/03/07 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

Whats with the shoes? and it is getting very interesting

Author's Response: Oh, the shoes were a reference to this highly stupid video called "Shoes." I think it's my duty to expose innocent readers to the stupidest things on the internet, like my story and the Jim Jam Jelly Song.

Reviewer: radishearrings3
Date: 05/03/07 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

*Laughs* *A lot*

That was really good! I loved BRUCE. Although, he should be a bit more Gary-Stu, if that's what your trying to make him. Although, I don't want to ruin the happy and giggly mood reading this story has put me in.

One last thing, how did BRUCE get Johnny Depp's cheekbones(. In a jar.)? Did BRUCE sever off the sides of his face while he was sleeping? Does BRUCE just have a picture of The Cheekbones in the jar? Why didn't tabloids from all over the world have a photo of Johnny Depp without cheekbones on the cover?

*Is too doing her homework right now*

*Is a member of the Cute-little-star-thingies-that-you-put-around-things that-you-are-doing Overuse Association*

Author's Response: How did I not respond to this review? *Whaps self upside the head in a suspiciously Dobby-ish manner* BRUCE stole Depp's cheekbones via MAGICAL GORGEOUSNESS. (?) I'm addicted to *asterisks* as well, by the way.

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