Reviews For Heal Over
Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/27/09 16:50
Chapter: Heal Over

Awwwwwwwww. It's so sweet. I love it. This story deserves to be posted no matter what anyone says.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 17:23
Chapter: Heal Over

This is a cute story.

Reviewer: snowey
Date: 01/28/08 18:06
Chapter: Heal Over

its cute but seriously?
5'2? thats pretty tiny
for a 7 year? im 12 and i'm 5'6, and i'm not the smallest
seriously
that hurts

Author's Response: I am fifteen and I am five feet tall. It's not that hard to believe, hun.

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 09/02/07 1:34
Chapter: Heal Over

cute :]

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 07/04/07 1:45
Chapter: Heal Over

Love it. I dunno, but I like the Lily/James fic, and this was great. good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for all the positive crit! LILY/JAMES FOREVER!!!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 06/15/07 7:32
Chapter: Heal Over

Ah, that's sweet. That was really cute and fluffy. :D Ha ha, I loved it. However, you did have some mistakes, but I'm in a hurry so I won't be able to show you. Just read through it again and you'll find that missed some words in a few places. And thanks again for reviewing my story. :D

~~Lluvia~~


Author's Response: Yeah, I knew about those mistakes, but the mods aren't letting me fix them, which makes me really mad! Thanks for telling me, the all-powerful procrastinator, to try again! Yours, Azalea

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 04/30/07 18:17
Chapter: Heal Over

no offense, but i thought this was cheesey.
a bit cliched too.

Author's Response: Any advice on how I could make it less cheesy? I'm not very good at endings as it is *sheepish grin/shrug* I'd love to hear your advice. Love, Crows

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 04/16/07 8:10
Chapter: Heal Over

i'm sorry but i didn't like that story too much, not my type of l/j, but it was still prettty sweet.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry. I'm actually working on another one. Maybe you'll like that one! Thanks for your review! Love, Crows

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/02/07 22:37
Chapter: Heal Over

Awwww!!!!
So cute
The ending could of been better thought
Keep writing

Author's Response: Thanks, dahling! I love positive criticism! Love, Crows

Reviewer: gin_an_potter
Date: 04/01/07 12:43
Chapter: Heal Over

Cute. Really absolutly cute. I really like it. I like it alot.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Love, Crows

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 03/26/07 3:21
Chapter: Heal Over

Aww, this was cute!

I like the idea of having Lily and James go on a boat ride at the end. It's a cute way to have them be together, in my opinion. :)

I don't really think that Lily would be the kind of person to be such an emotional wreck as to splutter out a complete lie as she did here. I think she would be more of the person to cry, yes, but be rational about it at the same time. Does that make sense?

Still, I thought this was really cute. Great job. :)

Author's Response: Yes, actually, that makes sense. I see.

Author's Response: Yes, actually, that makes sense. I see.

Reviewer: coolies321
Date: 03/26/07 1:14
Chapter: Heal Over

that was so fluffy its not funny and some of it didnt make sence but i still liked it go you :P

Reviewer: eowyngirl
Date: 03/25/07 17:05
Chapter: Heal Over

Nice, but too short. 6/10

Author's Response: Well, which is highest? 1 or 10? Of course, either way, I didn't score high with you.... Yours, Azalea

Reviewer: Lorien
Date: 03/25/07 15:08
Chapter: Heal Over

One of my favorite K.T. Tunstall songs. Nice fluffy one shot. luv it.

Author's Response: Thanks, it's nice to know some one else who likes KT Tunstall! No one in my pathetic town likes her at all. Thanks again for reviewing! Love, Crows

Reviewer: Elissy
Date: 03/25/07 14:45
Chapter: Heal Over

Good job. I enjoyed reading this. Everything was described very well, and everything was sweet without being overly-fluffy.

"Her face could appropriately be called the map of his world. " -- Aww, so sweet!

"James wiped his wire-rimmed spectacles off on his robes and ran his large callused hand through his unruly black hair absently. " -- Beautiful description, m'dear. Everything about this was great, and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love you all! You may throw roses if you wish! It's taken soooooo long to get this story validated, it's not even funny, so I'm glad for all the positives.

Reviewer: Elissy
Date: 03/25/07 14:43
Chapter: Heal Over

Good job. I enjoyed reading this. Everything was described very well, and everything was sweet without being overly-fluffy.

"Her face could appropriately be called the map of his world. " -- Aww, so sweet!

"He was tearing up a bit too. He felt bad; that cat had obviously meant a lot to Lily." -- Beautiful description, m'dear. Everything about this was great, and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 03/25/07 13:36
Chapter: Heal Over

That was sweet! Very nice job! Out of curiosity, who is the song by? Once again, very good job! :-)

Author's Response: It's by my fovorite singer, KT Tunstall. Thank you for my very first review! I love you!! ;) It's taken a looooooong time for my story to be validated and you have NO IDEA how happy this makes me! crows

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