Reviews For Dear Conscience
Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 04/30/07 6:53
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

I so can't wait for the next chapter because this was awesome! Well done, 10/10 and please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try my best! ;D Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it ...

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 04/29/07 8:41
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

Ah! Poor Lily! I think her conscience needs a wake-up-call...great chapter btw!

Author's Response: Thank youuu! I was beginning to think I'd been deserted ... at least the review box still works! Poor conscience is a little rusty ... Thanks so much for reviewing! Wooooo! (Ps - vote for keith. I mean ... I'm glad you liked the chapter *shifty eyes*).

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/25/07 14:16
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

Very, very good. I loved it. There was so much description to Lily's actions and thinking. Petunia is just.....Petunia. I am really really in love with this fic, it's so good! I hope you will please update soon. I am suspecting James is the person you are talking about. Will there be more after this ficlet? Or will the next mini-fic fix everything? I hope not, cos this is really good!!!

Author's Response: I'm not going to confirm fixing anything, but at the moment, the next chapter will also be the last of the Dear Conscience types ... but I have loads of other stuff. A couple of Marauder era, quite a bit of humour, some other categories ... not that I'm shamelessly plugging my own work or anything. :D Thanks for reading! Yay!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/25/07 14:02
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I was captured into this by the summary. It was very interesting. Then, I was hooked after the first letter. The characterizationg you have with Lily is fantastic! It seems very real. James is good too, althought I didn't see much of him. I am adding this to my favorites, and count me as a new, forever reader. Great job!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I have loads of other stories, too ... glad to get you hooked ;-) I have another Marauder era story, which I will have to update next, and then you'll get the final installment of our dear Lily ... Glad you liked her, these were extra fun to write!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 04/25/07 13:59
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

Very well written, though I'm not surprised now that I know you're the one writing it.

Author's Response: Did you not realise? Oh well. Heh heh. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 04/22/07 8:44
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Ha, funny, as usual Amy. The most suprising thing is I talk to my conscience sometimes (but I don't write letters). I love how you portray Lily. You really did redefine the Lily fic. Kudos. LaLa.

Author's Response: Aw thanks ... ever since L.O.V.E (starring her mean conscience) I've sort of got really interested in the whole idea ... I don't even know I got the idea for writing letters, but it was pretty fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing, of course, as always! The second part is in the queue as we speak ... or type.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/07/07 11:38
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

James Potter and his spoon, that's my new favourite ship. I love your James. He's so delightfully weird and cute. "Me-worthy..." your James seems to have a lot in common with Emperor Kuzco. Except James is turned on by mice, apparently.

Your Lily is great, too. So many people portray her as this boring uptight Hermione-ish girl. Yours is MUCH more entertaining, and a brilliant match for James, even if she doesn't realize it yet.

The detention scene was HILARIOUS. Hootenanny, har har. And the concept of James conversing so politely with Peeves is hysterical. How DO you come up with these hilarious things that you do? You have a marvellous mind for humour.

The part about Lily feeling sorry for the villains is just like me! I always think the villains are the most interesting part of the story (hence my Voldemort obsession and my Lucius Halloween costume.)

Even though I think he was kidding, James's apology was touching and sweet. I really love that boy.

Well, this was another work of genius by you, and you'd BETTER write more, goshdarnit!

Author's Response: I have written more, I swear, it's just my other Marauder-era fic is taking ages to update, and until that's updated, I can't update this one ... stupid rules. Glad you like my Lily, she's awesome fun to write, and the same for James. I love him too. If I could, I would kidnap him and make him mine forever, but unfortunately he is a fictional character, and *sob* not even a live fictional character (any more). The part about Lily feeling sorry for villains is a nod to my best friend, because she has the hugest sympathy complex in the world ... it's even huger than mine, and that's saying something. I'm so glad you've reviewed my stuff, because I really admire yours, and it's been a pleasure hearing from you. Really! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 04/04/07 12:11
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)


Author's Response: Thankee!

Reviewer: loch_nessa
Date: 04/02/07 7:27
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

So cool, really good hmm... amazing and brill

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I'm glad you thought so! Hope you carry on reading the next chappie, too.

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 04/01/07 22:29
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Ok, are you writing another chapter on this story, or completely other ones? Either way I can't wait for more. It's great!

Author's Response: Whole other chapters, baby! Okay, I don't know why I added that "baby" in their, I apologise. I will add whole new chapters to this one, not seperate one-shots.

Author's Response: And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 04/01/07 18:03
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I might also add onto my previous comment (well, it was rather short)...

...That my conscience kicks in whenever and wherever there is the slightest opportunity. There is no such thing as "late". There is no such thing as NOT there. It's constant and exists. Why? Because I make a habit to ignore it continually so it tries and tries again.

I've gotten quite good at the ignoring part. After all, with the perpetual nuisance of a conscience, one hast to be practiced. Boyfriends are good for that. So are roller coasters. And of course watching Alfred Hitchcock thrillers...
...while eating chocolate. ALL of the afore mentioned must be accompanied by chocolate. Naturally. What an assumption to make that they would not be...the thought is quite frightening.

Well, I believe this comment might be just large enough. I forgot if you even ARE the person who enjoys chocolate as much as I do, but I do remember something about your Bio saying black hair...was that you? or am i mixing you up?
Because I have black hair too...Eurasian, that's me...
chocolate obsessed.

Author's Response: Yes, that was me, I do appear to have black hair (although, it's not naturally that way, and it is beginning to fade back to it's original brown ... but that's okay, it was fun while it lasted). Your comment made me laugh, because I have a similarly on-the-ball conscience, so I feel your pain. Damn those morals! Still, your solutions sound perfect (Mmmm ... chocolate) and so it would appear that I am the person you thought I was. Hooray! Isn't it nice finding people with the same interests (ie: how to obtain as much chocolate as possible in the shortest amount of time)?

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 04/01/07 17:52
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I humbly offer to share my chocolate coated strawberry with bits of almonds and a drop of vanilla and marzipan with you in addition to my Mousse au Chocolat (which is QUITE the sacrifice, by the way) if you hasten to add to this chapter...
But really, I'm quite selfish about the chocolate, so you must spurn yourself on before I lose my greedy-for-fanfic streak and go for greedy-for-reckless-social-life instead...
your chocolate is in danger...go fetch, dahling ; )

Author's Response: Ha ha ha! I'll try and hurry, but I want to update L.O.V.E first, and on Saturday I am going on holiday, so my internet access will be a little more limited. But I'll try my best! Anything for some Mousse au Chocolat ...

Reviewer: OOTF gurl
Date: 04/01/07 13:45
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

ooo good one :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you think so!

Reviewer: quiggler
Date: 04/01/07 13:13
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

wonderful and very funny.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's not over yet ...

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 04/01/07 11:22
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Very nice! I liked it a lot, but just a question, is Coincidence a person, or just coincedence? Itcan't be just coincedence... things like that can't talk...

Cunzzuled is me.


PS: Sorry if I spelled stuff wrong, that happens to me, frequently...

Author's Response: Coincidence? That has nothing to do with it. It's her CONSCIENCE she's writing to ... you know, the part of her brain that tells the difference between right and wrong, that makes her feel guilt? Her metaphorical Jimeny Cricket, or whatever? Completely different to coincidence (something remarkable happening completely by chance, or something). However, neither are real people. She is just writing letters to her conscience to get her angry, confused feelings out there ... you see? If you're still confused, contact me through my author's page. In the meantime, thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it, despite the whole conscience / coincidence mix up. =)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 03/31/07 21:21
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Amy, I absolutely love your summaries, they are absolutely fabulous. *grins* Now onto reading!

*puts hand over mouth in shock* Okay, so I’ve read the first entry. Wow! *is calm* You are aware that I will fangirl everything of yours that I read, right? Okay good :] I love the reference you made to James and his spoon. Stirring up trouble, evil, and just a big sign of “STAY AWAY” but you can’t stop staring. I mean really. Imagine if you saw a teenage boy will a huge spoon and cackling. You would want to run away, but you wouldn’t be able to look away. Then he would see you and you would freak out. I don’t think I have ever seen a better example of the Lily and James relationship pre- tragic love.

*facepalm* I just read the second entry! That is horrible. I wish I had a friend like Kerenza that I could get in fights with like that. It shows a certain amount of love to think that much about a friend. *sigh* Anyway, I do hope they make up. They seem like the type of girls that when they get together they just complete each other. Lily is mighty stubborn, which is a trait I am almost certain are true to what we actually know.

And stupid James! That was just flat-out mean of him. I mean, really, really mean. I have only seen a few fics where James is just plain cruel and this is one of them. I have to say I do enjoy reading about the relationship when tension is that high. I don’t like the idea of Lily’s hatred for him coming out of nowhere. I do hate it when he is never nice to her though, the attraction doesn’t make sense to me that way.

… Lily is slightly irrational and over emotional and like me. It makes me feel awkward because I act like she does. I must be horrible to be around. *shrugs and goes back to reading*

OMG! I have read the third entry. I love socks! I have a sock fetish! I love toe-socks. Do you? I use my socks as a conversation opener. I love socks! I don’t care about the weird looks I get. I love my socks! They are an awesome conversation opener.

“Do you like toe socks?”

“Do you like my socks?”

“What do you are wearing look like?”

“Have you ever worn toe socks? I love them, do you?”

*loves socks* Poor Lily and her huge temper. I have to say; this rage seems out of nowhere. Is she stressed from school? And why is her conscience so late? It makes her feel guilty after she says and does horrible things? My conscience attacks me mid bad thing.

Oh no, I have read the last entry. Oh no, oh my. This is bad, very bad. Like extremely bad! *scratches head* What is planned? It cannot be good. I am glad Kerenza and Lily made up. Once I had a friendship ending fight. It was like the ultimate act of betrayal on my friend’s part (you can email me about it if you want). After a few days of me stonily ignoring her. She wrote me a very long heart-felt letter and I reflected over it for a few days. Then one day in P.E. I walked up to her and I just started a conversation about the mile run we just did. She never spoke an apology and I never spoke an acceptance and we just sort of slipped into place. It felt like a new beginning and I thought of that w hen I read about the whole feet apology thing.

I have obviously enjoyed this fic! *hugs* Thank youuuuuuuuu.

My fic update is on my Author’s Page in case you want to know. I can’t wait to read the next chapter of this! :]

Author's Response: Ha ha, your review really did make me laugh out loud (and not just the lol thing that everybody uses, but doesn't actually mean) And then I had to go back and re-read each entry, then go back to your comments on it, because I forgot what I put in each one. You are right that Lily is completely over emotional. It was a lot of fun to write, to be honest, but also I think it's because she is just completely stressed out, half the time. And if she lives her life like that (mega arguments with her best friend, annoying teenage boys who need shooting, etc etc) then who wouldn't be stressed? As for her conscience being late ... well I thinkeveryone's kicks in at different times, you know? You said yours starts in the middle of the "bad thing", mine starts hours before, which is annoying because I never get any rule break-y type fun, and I have a friend who completely humiliates herself in public, and then spends forever appalled at herself, and apologising to everybody connected with the incident. Lily's is obviously there, quite strongly, it just kicks in far too late (as I am sure you will see in the rest of the fic ... but I'm saying no more). Anyway, thank you soooo much for the fantastic review! I really mean it, and look forward to reading your fic when it's up. I'll make sure I review!

Date: 03/31/07 18:18
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Well! This was different! I've never seen (or read) Lily written this... Angrily. SAhe's always a sweet little girly- girl who's all nice and stuff. Your's was refreshing! Very funny! I liked Peeves and James's little conversation about odd socks! Great story! How long is it going to be?


Author's Response: 3 chapters, all of similar length. Hooray, this is up! So glad you liked it, I was unsure about something so wildly different ... it looks like it paid off!

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