Reviews For Dear Conscience
Reviewer: One Small Fish
Date: 06/22/08 10:34
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

You're totally welcome. All of your stories kick some major fanfiction butt, and i'm totally serious.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad you think so. =D

Reviewer: One Small Fish
Date: 06/21/08 14:07
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

Oh. My. Goodness. I don't know how you write so well, and I'm starting to get very envious of your talent. No joke, you're amazing. I love reading your stories, look, I've whittled away almost six hours! Keep it up, you're fantastic! :D

Author's Response: Really? Wow, this is like the nicest review ever! Thanks so much! I basically write whatever comes into my head, but believe me, it took a long time for that to get anywhere near decent ... I'm really glad you liked my stories. Thank you.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/19/08 21:48
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

I love how in this chapter you've shown Lily to know her own mind by stating that any evidence in the marauders favour will be twisted and used against them, and not only that, she actually proved it in her indignation at their lack of pranking. Perhaps a good phrase to sum this up would be you don't know what you've got until it's gone?

Author's Response: Very much so. Lily acts crazy in this fic, but she's definitely aware of what she's doing the whole time, you're right. I think it makes it more realistic that way. Thank you very much for the reviews, I've really enjoyed them!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/19/08 21:31
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

Wow, that speach was amazing! I'd love to have seen their faces. A cloud with an alaminium lining, Petunia never having to be paranoid that Vernon will have an affair with her sister, hilarious! I found the crumble incident slightly less amusing, but only because it was a waist of a good dessert. I like how Lily refered to the Dursley's new house as ten times more self important than their childhood home, it really fits. And I cracked up at Rent-A-Sap. I'm glad she's made peace with her conscience if not with Petunia.

Author's Response: =D I was worried that the speech was a little over the top, but I guess it was okay. I think the crumble would have been funnier to actually see than just written down, but hey. Maybe I should get into screenplays ... or not. I deliberated over Rent-A-Sap for so long, I'm glad it paid off! Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/19/08 21:10
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

A very unusual approach to a fic, I loved it. I'm afraid I was not impressed by Lily's friend sending a used lipstick to her sister as a present, I mean for one thing I wouldn't have borrowed it from Lily in the first place, I don't agree with sharing such things, just like drinking out of the same can as someone. I think my absolute favourite part was James and Peeves conversation about odd socks, I can just imagine the marauders being on friendly terms with him. Shame Dumbledore missed out though, he loves socks. Oh and the feeling sorry for bad guys in movies, well I'm ashamed to admit that i sometimes do that too, I'm not sure I'd be considering becoming a psychiatrist so much as seeing one though. Great stuff.

Author's Response: Ha, I loved that last bit - about seeing one rather than being one. =D That made me laugh. I agree about the lipsticks ... you can kind of see why Lily would get annoyed like that. And I'm sure Dumbledore didn't really miss out, he was probably hiding behind a trophy or something and pretending to be invisible ... I wouldn't exactly put it past him ... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 01/01/08 20:13
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

I loved this story. It was really good and really funny. If I could I would actually propose its movie rights to hollywood. lol


Author's Response: Lol, well, I think Hollywood has better things to do ... but thanks anyway!

Reviewer: jmd_1739
Date: 10/14/07 23:02
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

ahh that made me laugh. especially the second chapter. which isnt a good thing if your supposed to be in bed. :)

Author's Response: Oops! I know that feeling ... glad you liked it though!

Reviewer: MusicShoes
Date: 10/09/07 19:07
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

Haha, that was great! I love it-from the humour to the seriousness, well, a tiny bit of it at the end, anyway. All together, it was brilliant. Maybe I should write to my conscience......Haha.
~Muse

Author's Response: Well, perhaps! You never know WHAT could happen. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! This was actually a lot of fun to write. I always enjoy writing, of course, but this one was particularly good fun. So thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 09/27/07 15:19
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I love it! The "Dear Conscience..." letters are so funny! Keep up the great wrok!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully I will!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 07/08/07 19:39
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

I really like this story! It's a little different to most of yours, but it's still heaps good. I love how Lily talks to her conscience, I do that sometimes too! I loved it!

And for the record Idiot of ravenclaw, James WAS a Head Boy. Hagrid says so in the first book.

Sorry, just had to put that in.

Author's Response: My point exactly. =D Don't worry, me and Idiot of Ravenclaw get on okay really, we just have these little debates sometimes. On another note, I'm really glad you liked this! I mutter to myeslf a lot of the time when I'm angry, but I'm not talking to my conscience, mostly I'm just muttering to myself. Thanks so much for the review! Yay!

Reviewer: fairy lights
Date: 07/05/07 20:37
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

I love the way you write. especially how you characterize lily, in all of your stories.

I love that Lily is fiery, and a little out of her mind, it makes her seem more real.


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like Lily! She's become pretty much my favourite character of the whole series, and has only actually properly appeared in one scene (book 5) ... weird, huh? I'm really glad you like my fics. =D

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/22/07 15:44
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

yes but he didn't mature until After the prefect badges were handed out and It is not cannon and no matter how funny it would be it is not true I'm sorry but Remus was prefect Lily could be prefect but James was not prefect there for he was not head boy and Dumbledoor would most likely not put James as head boy sorry


Author's Response: We should stop fighting about this here. The mods hate it when reviews get off topic. Let's just agree to disagree, yes?

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/21/07 16:34
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I really don't think so Sirius says that Remus was the good boy and I think it says somewhere
that you had to be a prefect to be head boy

Author's Response: I don't remember it saying that. And Dumbledore may have done it for one of his crazy, complex schemes that no one else understands - James was popular, he was clever, and he's a leader. It also says he matured since fifth year, remember?

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/21/07 12:37
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

okay so in order to be head boy or girl you must be a prefect first and their is only two prefects a year and in book five, the worst of Mrs. Weasley Sirius says that Remus was the good boy and that James was never a prefect, so he was not head boy. Lily very well could be head girl. Yes I know that in the first book that Hagrid said that James was head boy but maybe J.k was going to make it that way but then when book 3 came out she
changed her mind but none the less I don't think that it is cannon for James to be head boy sorry

Author's Response: You don't necesarrily have to be a prefect ... haven't you read A Conundrum? That explains my reasoning perfectly. I mean, I know it's UNLIKELY, but not impossible. Maybe Dumbledore made an exception. Sorry, but I'm pretty sure that James was Head Boy, it just seems right. Sorry.

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/21/07 0:46
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

haha that was funny

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 06/21/07 0:07
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

ahaha she is talking to herself


Author's Response: =D Kind of! I don't know WHY I have this obssession with Lily's conscience ... after all, she has a grumpy one in L.O.V.E ... Guess I just find the subject fascinating. It probably comes from me feeling immense guilt at absolutely everything ...

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 06/02/07 8:51
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

That was aweome and I wish their was more! Well done, great job :D

Author's Response: Me too, but it ran it's course I think ... thanks for reviewing! I like this one too!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 05/18/07 14:57
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

Nice ending, I liked that last sentence very much! It was really a great way to tie things up! This is a hilarious fic and yet very touching, and a teeny bit strange, but hey... ITS AMAZING!!! Great job, Amy, you deserve a cyber-cake!!!! THIS IS SO FABULOUS IM THINKING OF PROPOSING ITS MOVIE RIGHTS TO HOLLYWOOD!!!!

Author's Response: *Shocked face* Do you think they'd take me? Lol! I'm glad you liked it ... hilarious yet touching with an added twist of strange was what I hoped it would turn out to be ... Thanks for reviewing! You rock!

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 05/14/07 11:31
Chapter: Dear Conscience (Now What?)

Well good for Lily! Though I dunno how her conscience is going to cope being neglected for evermore...

Author's Response: Heh heh ... well, I'm sure she can still yell at it (in her mind, we hope, and not out loud). Or maybe, since her own is so slow, James can be her New Conscience. Like Jiminny Cricket or whatever that thing was called. Only, of course, James is less cricket shaped, and (if possible) even more annoying. Oh, poor, poor Lily.

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 05/06/07 9:52
Chapter: Dear Conscience (It's Me Again)

Another hilarious chapter. Lily's conscience should try an energy drink or something because it seems like its getting a little lazy. Just a tad :-). I loved the 'everything being on a stick" part. Very funny. You are the master of funny. Really, and I'm not just saying that because you write me great reviews for my Other Pairing fic called SORROWS MORE PEACEFUL (sorry, I'll stop the propaganda now). What was I saying? Oh yeah, you are the master of funny and I'm not just saying that because blah blah blah, I really mean it. I've never read stories as funny as yours. And I love how your Lily seems to be a bit psychologically (sp?) disturbed. YAY FOR AMY!!!!

Author's Response: Okay, I just wrote a big long reply and got signed out randomly. Now I'm mad. The gist of it was: Yay for LaLa! Thanks for the great and loyal review! And also, if anyone who isn't ForbiddenLove is reading this, then listen to her propaganda. Go read Sorrows More Peaceful. It has Bellatrix in it ... as you've NEVER SEEN HER BEFORE. Seriously. Anyway, blatant and shameless advertising aside, I'm really glad you liked this chapter! Yay for psychologically disturbed Lily! Although, if I wrote letters to MY conscience, I would probably seem scarred too. Personally, though, I blame Petunia inflicting her salmon-pink-ness on our poor heroine all the time ... anyone would go insane. Hopefully I will update this soon. Yay, Master of Funny! I should totally change my name to that ... people could worship me and everything, it would be fantastic ... ;D just kidding. Thanks for the lovely review, as always!

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