Reviews For When You Wish...
Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 01/19/08 22:09
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

I really enjoyed this evening. This was a great story. I think that you did a great job at Neville's characterization. I love your Teutonians. That was a very original, but believable creature! :) Cyns

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/06/07 23:16
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

Wow This was very creative and origional. I loved it, the way Ron was the peacemaker and I think Neville was very in character...well I must send my guantlet prompt...Great Job.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/15/07 8:48
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

A very interesting take on Neville! :D I enjoyed the little look at Hogwarts where everyone gets along! :) I'm glad Neville made the choice he did, though! A sweet fic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am trying to get out of my comfort zone of only writing about certain characters so I appreciate any imput. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 05/11/07 10:39
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

*jaw drops* Nicole, this is awesome! You've got a nice flow through the whole story, and I think it's just the right disposition and length.

Neville is such a sweet character, I love reading from his POV! The Teutonian is a very clever name and creature, I love your description of it and Arin's character! Good characterisation throughout, and the house unity scene was hilarious =D

Gosh, I don't even know what to say, I just loved it. Very nicely done, Nicole! Best of luck in the challenge, dear!

Author's Response: Hehe... why thank you! That was a very nice thing to say. It was my first forary into writing Neville and I tried so hard to keep him in Canon (my new thing... staying in Canon) but I wanted to have a little fun with him as well. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to review! *huggles* ~Nicole

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 04/17/07 11:27
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

Very nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And thank you for taking the time to review as it was muchly appreciated. ~Nicole

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 04/12/07 11:38
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

Aw, that was cute! I liked it. Neville's characterization was really good, and it seemed like something he would wish for. Clever how you came up with the name Teutonians too. :) Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Ahh, Anna... Thank you. I was worried about trying to write something with Neville as the main character because it was new territory and I will be honest when I say that I have not done a WHOLE lot of research on him prior to this. *breathes sigh of relief* I'm glad you enjoyed it. *huggles* Nicole

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 03/26/07 3:46
Chapter: Mind Your Wishes!

Well I love it! Yay! I'm the first reviewer too!! Well done and good luck!

Abbi :)

Author's Response: Yay! A review, hehe. Thanks for your help, my dear. I also appreciate your kind words. ~Nicole

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