Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 06/08/07 15:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow!!! it's really really really well written! i loved it! i'm addin it to my favs :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You just made my day! :D

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 04/01/07 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I owe you this.

Loved the poem. Rhyme, as we know, is not something I even attempt, because it sounds stupid. Your rhyme schemedid not sound stupid at all. Very different, too- personifing an object most would never think of. I liked the picture of Harry being too scarred by the war to enjoy life anymore- not flying, and (I got the impression) still not married to Ginny. I'm sure I'm wrong, but... I liked it very much.

Author's Response: Thanks Quinn.... I'm honored! *blushes and giggles* I've been told that this is a very original idea, and I wrote this whole poem while I wasn't paying attention in class... thanks for being so boring, Mr. *name edited for privacy reasons* Actually, Harry is married to Ginny, hence the red hair and green eyes thing, but he is too scarred by the war to truly be able to enjoy life, you were correct on that... I really wanted him to live through the war, even if it affected him! :) Thanks for the awesome review! :D

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 03/29/07 22:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice poem. I like it. It's- interesting and...different. And it's a fun poem. Great job. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 03/25/07 12:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Squee! I'm so happy this is up!!!

Like I said before, this is an amazing poem. Your rhyme scheme is very unique yet beautiful, and the poem is both tremendously fun and deeply poingant. It was such a creative idea to get in the... errr, head?... of a Firebolt... I just love this poem! Keep up the excellent work, and I can't wait to read more poems from you!

*huggles* ~Fenn

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much Fenn!! You're making me tear here! ;) I am also so excited this is up.... "SQEEEE!!" about sums up my feelings! I got this idea one day while I was daydreaming away from my really boring teacher... I guess occasionally, not paying attention is a good thing! I will write more poems for sure, and probably some one-shots too. I can't wait either! Thanks so much, you rock! *double huggles!*

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