Reviews For Holly
Reviewer: blondechild
Date: 04/09/07 18:31
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

verie verie gud yesh verie gud indeed

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: 14T
Date: 04/09/07 5:51
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

Heya! Just read story! Very good and funny (Hermione's bday) and (Hermione with her come back about Harry's bday) LOLOL. How are you? How's your easter btw? I sent you an email. KEEP WRITING. Want me to proof read any other chapters? Tam

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I dont know where the ideas for the bdays came from... If u want, i can send u the next chapter later and u can look through it if u want? Easter is great, so much better than skool!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/07/07 16:25
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

i luv how you put the story how hermione was toasted see when i had toom any shots i threw cheesbugers at my aunt lol. but i like the whole ginny and harrys hair lol but i want to know somthing about what was around hollys neck lol. hurry and update

Author's Response: Im glad u like the story so far and i love hearing stories like that! About what Holly was wearing around her neck...it was a locket she got years ago, its the only thing she brought back, apart from her wand of course. does that clear it up a bit? I'll update as soon as possible, I've just finished writing the first draft of chapter 6 right now :-)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/07/07 15:18
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

oh hurry up and tell us who olly is already!!!

Author's Response: Whoa, ur a bit impatient, lol. What is it u really want to know about Holly? :P

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/07/07 15:10
Chapter: Holly

ooooh i wanna find out about holly


Author's Response: Holly is quite mysterious, isnt she? Lol. You'll find out more about Holly as the story goes on, in bits. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 04/07/07 14:17
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

I liek this. I like where ur going with Holly, and I can't wait to find out more about her. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out more about Holly in a few chapters, but thats all i can say about that, i hope that u continue to read. Chapter 3 is with my great beta, but i should get it back soon. Love ur penname by the way...

Reviewer: 14T
Date: 04/02/07 12:20
Chapter: Holly

Hiya! I tried to submit my review but didn't work. Lets try again. I read the 1st chapter again coz it was so good and I've noticed the changes! Great (as always :D ) the great thing about our English exam is the Writing part :D Would Holly be rude/irritated? Just a suggestion. I keep wanting to call Holly, May. Have to get it out of my head!!! Anyway, keep writing. Going to read Chapter 2 and review :) hope you like my comments. Not too offensive? See you tomorrow. xx

Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, i know what you mean about the reviews, its happened to me b4, very annoying! Thanks for reading this chapter and reviewing, it wasnt offensive at all! I almost wrote May as well the other day, looking on my notes, i accidently wrote mary at one point (dnt no how that happend!) The writing exams the best! so much better than statistics and stuff! lol. chapter 2's not up yet, but hopefully it'll be up soon! :-)

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/01/07 18:19
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

hurry and update i want answers and why does this chick eyes and hair bug me so mutch. please hurry and cool im the first one to comment lol

Author's Response: Hopefully this chapter will be up soon, the hair and eye colour arent really important, well not right now anyway... If anything, this chapter will confuse you even more, but everything will be explained. thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Deathly Hallows 93
Date: 04/01/07 8:02
Chapter: Holly

Hey Jess! Another great story! When you showed me the first draft I wasn't sure I liked Holly, but now I see that she's really developed as a character (and I know who her parents are!) hehe. Cya at school luff yew xxx

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! ive spent quite a while thinking about holly, and i havent actually told you who her parents are, have i? *evil laugh*

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 03/31/07 16:37
Chapter: Holly

hurry and update its really grabbing first chapter

Author's Response: why thank you! I was thinking of updating either today or tommorow, just looking over it for the last time...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ophelia Girl
Date: 03/29/07 21:41
Chapter: Holly

This is good!
I like Holly - she sounds like Tonks!!

One thing I thought was a bit odd, though, was how Harry speaks. "This fine young lady" makes him sound - no offense meant!! - like a old(er) gentleman, not a 20-some guy.
Otherwise, very nice. :)

Author's Response: double lol, triple post!

Reviewer: Ophelia Girl
Date: 03/29/07 21:41
Chapter: Holly

This is good!
I like Holly - she sounds like Tonks!!

One thing I thought was a bit odd, though, was how Harry speaks. "This fine young lady" makes him sound - no offense meant!! - like a old(er) gentleman, not a 20-some guy.
Otherwise, very nice. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, holly is a bit like tonks, but i'm going to try and make her a bit more sarcastic and stuff. No offence taken about harry, now i look at it, it does. I'l keep an eye for that in future. More should be up soon :-)

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 03/28/07 12:16
Chapter: Holly

who is she her hair and eyes are fimilerier

Author's Response: who, Holly? Thats a bit of a mystery, if i were to tell you it would take away the suspence...Does this mean you like the story? Keep reading & you'll find out...

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/27/07 15:23
Chapter: Holly

Jessica, congratulations on being published. I'm so happy that you can share this tale with everyone. As I've told you, I really enjoy the action and adventure of this chapter, and also the introduction of an interesting new character, Holly. Good characterisation, word choice, writing style.

Amidst the writing I caught one thing that you probably missed in your deletion of my comments. (Um, here, I would put a little more arguing before and after Holly tells them that she's from the future. Why does she trust them, you know? I'd want to know a little bit about that, and I think the trio and Ginny would want to know that too. Not to mention Hermione is the type to demand answers, haha.) You might want to delete it, haha. And you can also thank me as Natasha Johnson as that is my beta name. (I like to keep my email private.)

Other than those small things, though, everything is lovely. Congratulations!



Author's Response: Oh thank you! *looking bashful* i suddenly realised i left that in late last night and just remembered about changing it. Oops. Ive also changed the Beta name on it as well...im just going through the comments in chapter 2 right now, thank you for Beta'ing it! :-)

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 03/27/07 4:35
Chapter: Holly

I'm excited. I really like the story so far.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this story, i thought starting it a bit high paced would be a bit more interesting. thank you for R&R!

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 03/26/07 22:19
Chapter: Holly

the story sounds pretty kool! plz continue writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have written a few chapters already, they just need to be Beta'ed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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