Reviews For Holly
Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 05/31/07 21:07
Chapter: Kidnapping And Memories

OK THATS IT WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME, ALWAYS AT THE BVEST PART TO. well other then that very good, keep going

Author's Response: So i'm guessing you didnt like the cliffhanger? Sorry, i just love writing them! Good news tho,i dont think theres a cliffhanger in the next chapter.. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 05/31/07 17:18
Chapter: Kidnapping And Memories

omg so good! i have a feeling that im going to find out a lot about holly

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter does give you some imformation about Holly's past, and something else i've hinted at before...with one particular hint in Chapter 2....haha...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: shewhoshantbenamed
Date: 05/30/07 22:12
Chapter: Kidnapping And Memories

I really dig this story...
I can't wait to find out who Holly really is, although I think I may have a hunch.

thanks for writing, update soon!

Author's Response: Im glad you like this story! Thank you for reviewing, your my 40th reviewer on this story *does a happy dance* Cool pen name btw :-) I wonder if your hunch will be correct.....

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 05/16/07 10:44
Chapter: Her Mothers Best Friends Daughter

i wonder who the kid is though. hmm, *sigh* i geuss ill just to sit here and wait. also i want to who's Jake

Author's Response: Lol, well the next chapter should answer some questions! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 05/08/07 20:01
Chapter: Her Mothers Best Friends Daughter

NOOOO YOU CANT END IT THERE. but other then that good so far (luv you adding harry and ginny) hurry and update

Author's Response: haha, im glad u liked it! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 05/08/07 5:11
Chapter: Her Mothers Best Friends Daughter

I love that this story is not predictable. It always leaves me guessing...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad u like the unpredictable part of this, i want to keep people on their toes a bit, lol. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: turkeygreen23
Date: 05/07/07 19:25
Chapter: Her Mothers Best Friends Daughter

what a cliffhanger, i feel really bad for the kid. i have a couple of theories on the plotline but ill just email them to you.
good chapter, i liked the background information and ron's plan for harry and ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, ive recently got into Cliffhangers, theyre so much fun. I'll look forward to hearing your theories! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 05/07/07 18:25
Chapter: Her Mothers Best Friends Daughter

poor little guy... what a cliffie! write more soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, i feel quite sorry for him too! The next chapter is with my Beta as i write this, so i'll update soon..But i think i'm growing quite attatched to cliffies thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/28/07 23:45
Chapter: The Morning After

i know MagEd stories are the best! i read all of them my favs are uncle fred calls him dick and when darkness did suround us v(but i also luv Chasing Secrets lol. she is good. (and about holly) i wonder if her apperence has to deal with her parents *grins* and i will be looking forward to chapter 4 (great story)

Author's Response: I agree. thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 04/28/07 15:40
Chapter: The Morning After

u a 2 put up a new chapter this is an ace story line

Author's Response: I'll update soon, thank you for the review, im glad u like the storyline!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/27/07 19:21
Chapter: The Morning After

hangover..... lol im sad that Ron would have died.... i wana find out more about holly

Author's Response: Yeah, i didnt want ron to die, but there had to be a reason for coming back at that particular time. You'll find out a bit more about Holly soon enough... Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 14T
Date: 04/27/07 16:38
Chapter: The Morning After

Love this chapter, ahaha Hermione is so nice giving them the potion! Still curious about who Holly is? What's her mission? Very quirky lines of diagolue, very good. Don't have much to critisise actually. Erm... hmmm, hope my review is useful. You're keeping holly very mysterious which is good as it keeps suspense in the whole story. What happens next? LOl, I really can't wait for the next chapter. Very good. Keep up the good work and I'll be happy to proof read any other chapters- I can see what happens next muhaha. See you at school, Tam xx

Author's Response: Oh thank you! Nothing really happened in this chater, but i think it was needed. About Holly, that will take a while. Hermiones a nice girl, she wont leave her friends in pain. Thank you for reviewing, see u mon

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/26/07 9:26
Chapter: The Morning After

well i think it could be one anybodys kid and im thinking of anybody. (but iam just saying my fav ships are h/g and R/HR) but it could be a strangers kid i dont knowi just have to keep reading. i like to give ideas lol. and advice dont know why just do. lol. great story im hooked just like im hooked to all of MagEd stories lol. and i am hard to get hokked ive read a lot of your stuff and Holly is my fav so far.

and i only have two fav authors and i had to put you on their couse i like a lot of your stuff. and im hard to please so to me its a complement lol.

Author's Response: I LOVE MagEds stories! They're the best! I'm so flattered you've put me on your fav authors list! I'll update soon, just adding some finishing touches to the next chapter!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/24/07 21:34
Chapter: The Morning After

well ithink its fake becuse she paused and she had to think a good one becuse if she said the real one it might blow her cover. (just a thought, i have other ones but i dont wanna make myself look like a fool if its wrong) lol even know i alrwady did it...again lol

Author's Response: This is the first time ive ever tried to write mystery, so i dont know how good i'll be at it. Tell me what your ideas are, i'm interested to find out what people think! :-)

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/22/07 12:02
Chapter: The Morning After

ya im the first one to comment ya and it was good. and i liked how you did the surname (thats a fake one right?).

Author's Response: Im happy u liked the chapter, sorry not much happens though, more will happen at the end of the next chapter.... Also, why do u think its a fake surname? *Grins*

Reviewer: Deathly Hallows 93
Date: 04/21/07 9:53
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

Arghhhhh!!!!! I need the next chapter!!!!! Now Jess, or I might top myself! (Only kidding), cya Mon xxx P.S I got put on the bridge on Wed :( Tell u and Tam bout it soon xxx

Author's Response: Haha, so u like this story now? Lol. Please, the whole 'top urself' really isnt funny, even though ur not being serious. Naughty girl 4 getin in the bridge..u know u still have to work ther though? u get ur work dropped off 2 u. Anyway, chapter 3 is up now and i'm writing more at a furious rate! c ya

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/14/07 23:28
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

well you know what they say 'drunken words are sober thoughts' lol im a HG and R/Hr shipper so i luv the whole giny playing with harrys hair. hehe.

Author's Response: I'm a big H/G and Hr/R shipper too, its killing me not having Harry and Ginny together. I'm trying to write as much as i can right now coz ive got my final GCSE's in a few weeks, but i'll update before then and probably during then as well. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 04/14/07 23:02
Chapter: Holly

Second time i read this chapter. (i find i often skip important things, thats why i read HBP 4 times lol) and now im waiting for chapter 3 lol. please update chapter i wanna more.

Author's Response: lol, i just read random extracts from HPB, then get annoyed over r/hr anvil-sized-hints.Im glad u enjoy this enough to re-read it.. Erm, about chapter 3, i'm just making last minute checks. The next chapter is more of a filler chapter, it should clear up a few things though. I'll update soon though.

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 04/11/07 20:40
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

I like it! Update soon pleez!

Author's Response: Thank you and i'll update soon

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 04/10/07 13:07
Chapter: Talks and Firewhiskey

Interesting story so far. I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Ive written a few chapters, the first drafts, so u shouldnt have to wait too long

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