Reviewer: loopyloopylupin
Date: 01/15/09 1:35
Chapter: Desertion usual! *wonders if should stamp her foot again to get the next chapter* xx

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I don't know when I'm going to send my beta the next chapter...Within a week, maybe? But stamp if you want to! ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/14/09 23:58
Chapter: A Machiavellian Beginning

I definitely don't like Draco in this any better than I did in the HP series. Less maybe.

Author's Response: Haha, I think that's the first time anyone has said that. And I'm surprised: I didn't think it was possible to write him in a worse light. So, in an odd way, thank you!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/14/09 23:48
Chapter: Reluctant Acceptance

I don't like our friend Channing, I'm thinking he's another DE who's infiltrated the Order. This is definitely going to be interesting and different.

Author's Response: Another interesting theory. Hopefully you'll like where the story goes!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/14/09 23:46
Chapter: Desertion

I'm getting the impression that Draco has been ordered to infiltrate the Order and tell Voldemort and his DE's what Harry and company are planning.

Author's Response: Interesting theory.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/14/09 23:33
Chapter: Homecoming


Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 01/14/09 21:13
Chapter: Soaring

Five more chapters?! What will I do when it's over??? Are you possibly writing more? (she asks curiously...)

This was a great chapter as always. I imagined all of the views Hermione saw and just felt very calm. It was just very pretty. And I loved the riddle! :D

Can't wait for the next chap, but at the same time I don't want it to end!!!

Author's Response: What will you do when it's over? Hm, how the sequel? ;D I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I know: posting this last bit is definitely bittersweet. But there's still plenty more story! Thanks so, so much for the review!!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 01/14/09 19:37
Chapter: Soaring

Awww they are so sweet together! The imagery you used this chappie was very good too:D Great job!

Author's Response: Aren't they, though? And thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Moonlight Goddess
Date: 01/14/09 8:25
Chapter: February

aaaah!! where did the update go? i got an email saying chpt 37 was there but it's not :( now im sad

Author's Response: To my understanding, the site is having validation issues. :( I don't know when they'll be fixed, but I hope it's soon. I'm so sorry for the inconvenience!!

Reviewer: loopyloopylupin
Date: 01/14/09 5:19
Chapter: Soaring

where's the new chapter??!!!!!! i'm getting impatient!!!!! *stamps foot* hmph! love this fic xx

Author's Response: Haha, I know, I know. I actually submitted another chapter, but there are issues with the validation - as in it's not working. I've been in contact with my mod about this and apparently it happens often, so it's a system glitch. I'm probably going to submit another one soon, so you guys might be spoiled with two at once (or, at the very least, two very near to each other!) I beg your patience for a little while longer! I promise you will be able to read the fiction! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Makailah Macbain
Date: 01/10/09 17:54
Chapter: Desertion

great intro keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will!

Reviewer: Jursica
Date: 01/10/09 16:07
Chapter: February

Oh my, you've done it again. =] I'm so glad you've kept this going, and I'm thrilled that you showed that Draco knew who she was at the ball! I was worried you had forgotten all about that, but I should've known better. You're awesome as always!! Keep updating por favor! =]

Author's Response: Nah, I'm too much of a romantic to forget about something like that! ;) I'm so glad you like it; thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: autumnmist
Date: 01/05/09 9:09
Chapter: February

This fan fiction is BRILLIANT! I read it all in a day. you HAVE to keep writing. I can't wait till it is updated.
I agree... you should write you're own book, i would certainly buy it. ;) UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!

Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad you like it! And this book idea is getting more and more support...I like it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HarryPotter317
Date: 01/02/09 2:17
Chapter: February

I am LOVING this story. Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it, and I shall certainly try! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: marionettegirl
Date: 12/31/08 14:28
Chapter: Desertion

You totally just made my New Years Eve o_o

I stayed up from like 1~4:30 am reading this awesome awesome work of yours.

you're amazing. keep it up ._.

Author's Response: Haha, wow. Three and a half hours...that's dedication!! I'm glad I could help you start your new year off on a good note! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 12/27/08 1:11
Chapter: February

awww that was sooo cute.
and im soooo glad that you decided to post this up before February!
ohhh dear that would have sucked.

update! :]

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I don't think I have it in me to be so mean. :) Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: KnowledgeableMuggle
Date: 12/22/08 19:35
Chapter: February

Gah, zeh fluff! Et es so fluffeh!

...Yeah, so thanks for keeping it uncruel and...ununusual? I think my favorite part was when they were communicating with their eyes. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked the fluff! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: KnowledgeableMuggle
Date: 12/22/08 19:09
Chapter: And the Guilty

Waaah, I JUST got the update for both this chapter and the most recent chapter! Stupid stupid stupid...Yeah, don't mind me. ^^; Anyway, I'm glad that things are smooth between the two lovebirds for the moment. More than smooth actually... >=D Now on to the next chappie!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah...Usually the e-mail updates on this site are really great. I guess sometimes things just slip through the cracks. Glad you got an update, though! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! And I think you'll like the next chapter - it's definitely one of my favorites!!

Reviewer: alina290
Date: 12/22/08 0:06
Chapter: February

Thank you for not being cruel and updating. I look forward to the next chapter. I am wondering why you have not updating on the other site you have this site posted on too, Colored Grey. I hope you will update it there too.

Author's Response: Ha, I really have no excuse for not updating at Colored Grey other than pure laziness. But a few days ago, I uploaded, like, ten chapters. I don't even know if that's allowed, but they're there anyway, waiting to be validated. I'm going to try to be more consistent with that site from now on. ;) Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: readingthosehpff
Date: 12/19/08 23:01
Chapter: February

So I have come to the conclusion that you need to write a book. You have a great voice and paint a very nice picture in the readers head. I recently read twilight and some parts were just soo.... fanfiction-y. I was like, this woman does not sound like a real writer. Although I enjoyed the book, there are people out there with more talent, people like you. You obviously have a passion for writing and I truly hope you turn it into something more.

Author's Response: First of all: THANK YOU!! It's really such a compliment to hear that I could write a book. Honestly, I have been toying with the idea for a long, long time and it gets more and more tempting with every review. I haven't been able to come up with an interesting plot or characters yet, or even determine what genre I would write. Maybe after my stint in fanfiction is over I'll devote more time to it, hahaha. At any rate, thanks again!! And oddly, I totally agree with you about Meyer. I mean, her books are perfectly tailored to her audience but sometimes, I feel like she may have forgotten about the rest of us. Some of her language, and especially her characterization, I thought, wasn't nearly as complex as it could've been. Eh, oh well. She's a major success anyway, so I guess it didn't make that much of a difference. :)

Reviewer: snaperocks
Date: 12/18/08 21:39
Chapter: February

OMG OMG OMG!ahhh i loved it loved loved was soooooooo damn frikin cuteeee my draco is such a hottie omg....he so charming n hot n sweet n still a bad wudnt want him man?...n hermione is so cute too lol..i love how she wanted to cry....omg i love th whole romanticness....n th setting n th dance....n how they finally know abt th masks or watvr ahh it was so greatt omg it was soooo so freaked out abt harry now.....channing knos...i thot draco knew channing was evil...ahhh they need to find out b4 harry dies...

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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