Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 05/10/09 9:39
Chapter: Wrongly Played

oh no oh no....both of them now are outcastes! Well, at least now they're civil to each other. And what's happened to Ron? Is he under the Imperius curse or something...why would he say something like that to Hermione?....Or is he going out with Lav-Lav

Great chapter, already got me very very interested. 10/10

Reviewer: suzyfloozy
Date: 05/10/09 8:52
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Mmmmm. Interesting, but as much as I love Draco I'm not sure telling him was the best thing she did.

Reviewer: suzyfloozy
Date: 05/10/09 8:41
Chapter: Transformations

This was a great, fast paced chapter and the result was a long time coming!

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 05/10/09 7:43
Chapter: Delirium

Brilliant chapter.

Reviewer: Jursica
Date: 05/05/09 23:36
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Yay!! The new chapter is up!! I've been checking almost every day now for a week! =) Anyway, I was glad to see Salazar in this chapter, and I loved your description of him. Your writing is so impressive and inspiring. I have to admit something, though. Draco has been scaring me for quite some time now. It seems like every time something big goes on, he has to go to his room... where there is a fireplace... I really hope I'm wrong!! I love Draco too much for him to hurt Hermione like that!! I know whatever you decide to write will be amazing as usual, but I hope it's a happy ending! I'm going to be biting my nails for months over this! Haha! And it's almost over!! I'm already excited for the sequel. Update soon!! For the sake of my poor nerves!! =)

Reviewer: Aradion
Date: 05/05/09 12:39
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

That's weird, isn't it? I think this is the first time the great and noble Salazar Slytherin pays the portrait a visit...Hermione should feel honoured! Anyway, does this sudden appearance mean something? Ah, well, I doubt you'd answer that but, still, it's just stuck in my head and can't seem to find a way out of there...
Now, should I care mention how you always manage to get me impressed with your writing skills and that you're awesome and brilliant? I bet yoy know that already!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/05/09 11:15
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Interesting chapter, Cannot wait to see how the attack plays out in the next chapter :-) Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Nat Kat
Date: 05/04/09 23:24
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

i think draco is bad.. i really really do.. i just can't seem to trust him.. he's going to tell the death eaters about the attack i just know it..

prove me wrong!

Reviewer: HarryPotter317
Date: 05/04/09 20:39
Chapter: Desertion

awsome awsome chapter!! can't wait to read about the attack in the next one. dont leave us hanging too long, update soon :)

Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 05/04/09 20:24
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

AHHHH! Tense, tense chapter. I'm so glad for the update though! Wonderful, wonderful stuff.

I enjoyed Salazar the most, lol =)

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 05/04/09 0:26
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

ohhh dearr. crazy attack next!
sooo intensely good.soooo anxious on whats gonna happen during the attack.
aww yay for teh great comfort/love they have towards each other! :)

more please!

Reviewer: sc94
Date: 05/02/09 6:21
Chapter: Desertion

(: ur writing is flawless. u could stick this on to any of j.k. rowling's books and it would fit right in.

lovee the plot and the way you portray the characters. =D two thumbs up.

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 04/27/09 17:37
Chapter: Soaring

A very nice ending, indeed!

For some odd reason, I feel like Moody wasn't quite Moody. As if, it weren't really him? Hmm...

Also, I chuckled at: "Just within her own stands, Hermione almost had to break up a fight between a Gryffindor and a Ravenclaw who, to her knowledge, had no reason to be fighting in the first place." :P

Nice work, once again!

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 04/27/09 16:29
Chapter: February

I've been so busy lately that I haven't read any of the chapters since 35. But I'm gonna do my best to read all the most recent ones and give a review.

This was fantastic! As usual, beautifully written and the romance...ah! How cute! I simply adore these two.

Reviewer: accioquill
Date: 04/25/09 19:59
Chapter: Arrival

Fantastc! I'v heard that riddle before,too!

Reviewer: accioquill
Date: 04/25/09 18:53
Chapter: Summer Suspicions

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: smileyreader
Date: 04/21/09 18:59
Chapter: Transformations

I SO cannot wait for the next chapter... You are a VERY good writer!!

Reviewer: smileyreader
Date: 04/21/09 12:01
Chapter: Desertion

Very nice story. I love Dramione fictions.

Reviewer: Serena Potter
Date: 04/17/09 7:29
Chapter: Transformations

wow, this is another beautifully written chapter. The whole story is wonderful.

Reviewer: Serena Potter
Date: 04/16/09 6:55
Chapter: A Matter of Sway

Another wonderfully written chapter, poor Hermione. I'm loving the story so far.

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