Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 06/25/09 7:00
Chapter: The Reports

Hmmmmm...who's at the fireplace...could it be a red herring pointing us in the direction of Draco?

Author's Response: Hm...good question! Guess you'll just have to keep reading! Hehehe

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 06/24/09 21:24
Chapter: The Reports

That bastard.

Author's Response: ;) Nice to hear from you again!

Reviewer: lil-miss-chatterbox7
Date: 06/23/09 23:20
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Hey, this story is awesome!

Keep up the awesome work!!

Look forward to reading the up coming chapters...


Reviewer: Becca the Bookworm
Date: 06/19/09 23:45
Chapter: Homecoming

I love this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Becca the Bookworm
Date: 06/19/09 23:13
Chapter: Desertion

I think that this story is really good! I always liked the character of Draco Malfoy, even though he is clearly a villian, it was always shown that their was good in him.And this story shows it in its advantage.

Reviewer: harryxfanaticxpotter
Date: 06/16/09 17:22
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

omg! so i just finished reading the whole story i like to do that after each new chapter..and wow! i LOVE your story! keep updating! i will Stick to this story until it ends! and i am SO glad theres a sequel! so the reason they take forever to come on is because the like "boss" has to read each one and then accept it to upload? i dont understand the whole process..haha..well anyway! u should be real proud for writing something SO good! seriously i LOVE ur writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! And I am proud of this story, in fact! It took a while to write and stressed me out a bit, but it's all worth it!

And to validate a chapter, I first read/edit it, then I send it to my beta reader so she can read/edit it. Then, she sends me back her corrections (which I make), and I submit the story to the site. Validation on the site usually takes around a week, but for some reason, my stories are special (i.e. they don't like to validate in a week...they usually take a month and get stuck somewhere in the cyberspace queue.) It's a long, arduous process, but the mods to a great job of working with me and trying to get stories out sooner than later. :)

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 06/14/09 14:04
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Fantastic chapter, once again! The description of Draco when he came out of the shower...Mmmhm ;D

I'm so torn right now. I have no idea what to think! I'm certain Draco is good, but then again, I'm not. Maybe I just want him to be good. Also, like I mentioned in my last review, what's up with Moody? I really feel like it isn't him!

I can't wait! Please update faster, if possible! I can't wait!

Also, I read in another review that you responded to that there is a sequel and that it is already completed? Ahhh! Then what are you waiting for? Man, I just wanna go over to and read it all right now :O lol

Anyways, excellent story thus far. I've stuck with it since the start, and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it and am even happier that you've been with me from the beginning. I'm relieved it's been so well-received!

And yes, there is a sequel and it's completed, but (and I know that you'll hate me for this...haha), I'm going to synchronize the updates on here and No early chapters anymore! And everything will have been beta-read, too. It should mean that the story is higher-quality, but at the same time, there will be long waits between updates on each site...Heh - a win/lose, I guess. :)

Reviewer: Firefly337
Date: 06/14/09 7:46
Chapter: Desertion

Aradion and i are of the same mind then :)
i was really amazed when i first started reading ur stuff, you do write very very well, brilliantly. especially the early chapters - i felt like it could have been J.K herself! :D
keep up the good work - and the romance was good yes :D thankyou thankyou

Reviewer: sirius_stars
Date: 06/13/09 21:37
Chapter: Desertion

looks like lucius isn't the nicest father... I like your portrayal of everyone :) I'm looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: alina290
Date: 06/12/09 23:51
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Thank you so much for this long awaited chapter. I like it that they still will practice their animagi. Good.

Author's Response: Haha, well, you know Hermione...even perfect's not good enough for her! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: josephinerose
Date: 06/10/09 20:02
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Hi, I hope there is more coming soon. This story is brilliant!!

Author's Response: Hopefully the new chapter will be approved soon!! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: josephinerose
Date: 06/09/09 19:45
Chapter: Desertion

Hi, so far I love your writing style. It has certainly pulled me in.

Reviewer: twilightfan101
Date: 06/09/09 12:10
Chapter: Soaring

awww that is so sweet

Reviewer: akb
Date: 06/08/09 13:50
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

this is excellent!...update!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will soon!

Reviewer: Firefly337
Date: 06/08/09 3:00
Chapter: Transformations

wow that was amazing.

Author's Response: My pleasure!

Reviewer: Firefly337
Date: 06/08/09 2:46
Chapter: Soaring

man i really love your stuff. i've actually been reading it for ages and waiting for the new chapters to come out!
i like the way you write.
Would appreciate more romance action with D&H :):)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll get your romance. ;)

Reviewer: alienemerald
Date: 06/07/09 16:57
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

GRRRRRR!!!! Oh my goodness, I don't think I have ever felt so much emotion as I have reading this fic.
Is Draco good or bad? At the beginning I knew he was a spy, but then when the evil CREEP came up then I decided otherwise. THEN, when I decided that the creep was just a creep, and Draco still was a spy, I got so mad that Hermione trusted him that I threw an absolute fit.
Right now, I'm kind of thinking that Draco and the creep are both spies.... For what reason, I don't know. And I have a feeling something's wrong with the Order.... But that may just be Moody's OOC-ness.
PLEASE update soon! I don't know how long I can live without reading more!

Author's Response: Haha, all in good time! Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: sf1993
Date: 05/19/09 7:36
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

i loved this story :)
cant wait for the next chapter to be up x

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully it will be soon!

Reviewer: KnowledgeableMuggle
Date: 05/15/09 15:07
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

Huh, Hermione sees Salazar and Draco sees Godric...Coincidence?
Also, is there any importance or meaning behind Hermione's choice of book at the end? I've never read it, but it just seemed interesting from the title...

Author's Response: You'll see. ;)

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 05/12/09 3:48
Chapter: The Curse of Inevitability

ok i've read your whole story on coz i just couldnt wait. I'm not going to spoil the ending for anyone but it was superb. Absolutely powerful. Please do not end it there!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for not spoiling it!! I like the chapters on here better anyway b/c they've been thoroughly proofread and looked over by my beta. I promise, though, that the story isn't over. In fact, the sequel is complete. Thanks so much for reading! :)

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