fantaboulous....i still adore this story even though its been ages since the last update...thanks for lighting up my day by updating...i hope the updates come sooner now and i wish you luck :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The updates will come sooner, don't worry!
I love this story! I can really see this being James thoughts, and how you can see him changeing! AmazinG! Update soon please!
Author's Response: I'm working on it!
Lovely, just lovely!(Don't worry, I'm not being sarcastic)
Author's Response: :] Thank you!
But plz update soon though!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Sooooon, I promise.
I love the story! Its really good and it makes me wonder when he will stop dating Norah... I mean i know he would hav stopped dating her by ending of the 5th year... becoz he would ask lily out again by the lake... it just makes me wonder wat will he do in the 6th yr,.. i mean lily wont date him till the 7th yr... wow ur really a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on an update, right now, actually! Sorry for the wait!
Ooo I love this story its really really good! I've read your other stories too and your a really really talented writer! I really like how you have it where snape and lily r actually friends and james hates lily opposed to loving her from the start. This story is amazing please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next update. :D
Update quickly!
Author's Response: I'm trying...it's busy!
I am totally in love with this story. Your writing has a sort of...realness to it that most writers on MNFF can't quite grasp. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try; school's just a bit crazy!
I like this story alot. I think it's great and you should keep up the good work. Also have you heard the Brandy CD Never Say Never? I think some of the songs might fit your story. Ex.: Have You Ever, Angel In Diusgise, Almost Doesn't Count,
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I know a few of those songs and I'll definitely listen. :D!
This is really different to the way JK wrote them getting together, but I really like it. Its different to the other James/Lily fanfics. Well done for not being scared to think out of the box.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Ooooh! Potter likes Evans!
Author's Response: Maybe :)
Wow, this is a really good story. You always see stories from Lily's POV, but never from James'. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know about Lily's POV, that's why I went for James's.
This was very good! I'm not normally one for stories told in the first person, but really!
Actually, that will be the first thing I comment on: the POV of your story. What normally happens in stories told in the first person is that the author accidentally switches to third person without even realizing it, which is kind of annoying to the reader. You did a really nice job keeping it steady.
This story was also very...what's the word... plausible. So many J/L stories are so unbelievably cliched, you just don't want to read them!
I like the way you describe how James feels toward Lily. It's obvious he has no feelings for her just yet, well, none that resemble anything to love. ;) It's a nice way to start, and I'm excited to read more! Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you! The first-person thing, I definitely have to credit my Beta. I don't think I do it much, but if I do, she catches it!
UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! Or I will be agresive!!! ;)
Author's Response: lol. I will!
He's really confused, isn't he? From the symptoms, it seems that he's head-over-heels in love with Lily, but then Norah comes in. I'm starting to think that he's just with Norah out of guilt. This was a great chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will! But I wouldn't say out of guilt. And maybe not head-over-heels. :D
Eeek!!! Poor guy! And poor Norah!! I can't wait to see how everything works out! I love your characterization of James, though! He's so realistic and yet this fic is very original - I love how their friendship is building and I can't wait to see everything progress! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I will!
Interesting twist, having James like another girl, then fall for Lily.
Update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try! Thank you!
As good as ever, and that's about as high a compliment as I can give! This chapter lived right up to my high expectatins for this story, so thanks! . . . AND HURRY TO UPDATE!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll try! And, thank you!
this was a great chapter :D
can't wiat for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you!
