Write more and soon please.
Author's Response: Hehe, I willl!
Great chapter!
Wow interesting plan, well it's a interesting way to see James and Lily and see how extremely they hated each other!!
Cont soon!
Author's Response: I will!
hee hee, he's soooo in for it! Love it as much as the last chapter, keep writing! Abbi :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Ooooh. Interesting...I wonder if Lily will accept.
Great chapter!!! I can't wait for the next one!!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, what do you think?
This looks like its going to be very interesting. Update soon.
Author's Response: Hehe, yes! Thank you!
:D What an inflated ego... I think Snape was sort of right about James after all, eh? Still, he's a teenage boy, what can you expect? And that's what's great about this fic! James is realistic for a teenage kid and also completely canon with everything we know about him. And this idea is so original! I can't wait to see James trying to get Lily to go out with him... :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And no, Snape was not right!
ooooooooooooooooooooh!!!! I like it!!!!! This is so cool, Keri, it's going to my faves list! Well done and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Abbi! :D
Please update soon!!!
I'm dying to find out what happens next!!
It was an awesome beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you!
i love this new twist. its so refreshing to see james not be a little puppy dog. i can't wait to see how you get them to be freinds w/ the type of animosity you are creating between them... great work
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh please get the next chapter up!!
Author's Response: I'm trying!
hey, hurry up with the next, cox i can't wait!!!!
Author's Response: I will!
oh man, if Lily does something else to them, so help me I will...*pauses* I CAN'T THINK OF SOMETHING MEAN ENOUGH!! GRRR!!! Please, please, please update this story soon!!!
Author's Response: Hehe. Don't like Lily?
Cliffie, eh? Arrgh! :D Nice start though! This promises to be a really original story and I really like your writing. Especially of James it's very different but quite fitting. I don't really agree with Lily, though - a lot of fics have her as a pretty version of Hermione which is a bit cliché. But I'm quite sure you'll manage to make her her own self! :) After all, this looks like it'll be good! I'm definitely going to be following this fic, so please update soon! :D
Author's Response: Don't worry, Lily won't be too Hermione-ish. She's no good two-shoes. ;)
James hate Lily! I dont think I have ever read a J/L fic that started that way, but I defintely like it. 1000000/10 for originality!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
wow....it defiitley is a new outlook on the james lily story. but my problem is...is that i like norah too much now...and don't like lily. you are going to have to work on that. but overall, very good story! loved it. please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, I hope to change that. ;)
omg this fic is amazing plz update it asap im in luv with it
Author's Response: Thank you!
this story captured my attention because the summary said james hated lily. that's awesome, i like how you take a different turn at their relationship!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Cliffhanger!! I like the way the story is going. Kinda has James and Lily swithing pov. (I know spelled wrong, sue me!)
Author's Response: Thank you!
This chapter was hilarious (at the end). I think it's different from the usual *James loves Lily but Lily hates James* story (not that I have anything against them). This story's turning out very nicely. Hope you keep writing and the next chapter comes out soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
This chapter was hilarious (at the end). I think it's different from the usual *James loves Lily but Lily hates James* story (not that I have anything against them). This story's turning out very nicely. Hope you keep writing and the chapter comes out soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
