...I can't describe this fanfiction for two reasons.
1. I have to get off the computer quick, since I'm not actually allowed to be here XD
2. There is no other way to describe it apart from the word AWSOME!
I always had two favourite fanfictions: The Diary, by Secret, and this other fic on another fanfiction site. But now I have a top three, and this is in it :D
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!
This. Story. is. FANTASTIC!
Honestly, it is really good. I love the different point of view. It has some actual meat to it, not just the extra cotton candy sort of stuff that most stories have. I am so excited, please hurry. Oh, and I love Lily's attitude toward James. It is perfect!
Author's Response: *Grins* Thank you so much!
Great chapter!
Aww poor James, I wonder what he's next plan will be!
Cont soon!
Author's Response: Haha, you know there will be one ;)
Ooooooh...
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
love it, love it, love it!!! I know you've just updated the story, but please submit the next chapter soon!!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll try!
Ooooooh! Someone's got a cru-sh!!! Lol, well done as always, please continue to update, even if it means ditching my story! lol 10/10. Abbi :)
Author's Response: Hehe, I wouldn't do that!
:D How the mighty have fallen... and how he deserves it! I like how this story is progressing! It's great having James see a new side to Lily. Plus, I love how you make the whole writing style of this fic seem realistic for James! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, I was hoping to show a realistic-developing story between Lily and James. I'm glad it's working!
loved the chapter....it was amazing! i really really really like this story. it is growing on me. plaes update soon. everyone is so well done, and i just can't wait for more!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
"white hot something ran through my veins. I’m just not sure it was always anger." so cute!! keep it up!
Author's Response: :D Thanks!
This really amaing. More so than I expected, which is saying something since I liked it from the start. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
oooh interesting take on James/Lily. Really can't wait to see where this is going. I think it's fantastic so far. You've moved everything along really nicely. Update soon! :]
Author's Response: Thank you!
what i LOVE about your story is the fact that james only wants to date lily for revenge! hence putting a completely different meaning into the "lake scene," where everyone else, including me, has interpreted that as james falling in love with lily. this has a very creative, original plot.
Author's Response: Thank you!
James doesn't expect this.
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Yay! She's going to say no, then ^^ I wonder how he's gonna face rejection.
And the How Bizarre song is the one by that Maori guy from New Zealand, isn't it?
I would look it up, but there's something wrong with the internet today, and a lot of pages aren't working for me.
Anyway, can't wait for it to be let through ^^
Author's Response: Haha, I think so. Good song :D
She is sooooooo going to say "NO"
Author's Response: Hehe, we'll see!
whoa, so that's how it started... I like it! Different, unique, slightly uncommon, but how they would actually act... It's awesome! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I really enjoy reading your story, and I cant wait for the update! I like this new perspective of James' feelings. It's very funny! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I will. :)
There was no doubt in my mind that Evans would date me, but did I want to spend a whole day with her and possibly more?
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I wondered how Lily would accept my invitation to Hogsmeade. Would she smile and whoop with joy, or say ‘of course’ politely? I hoped she wouldn’t be too bad on the date or that she wouldn’t nag or rant about school.
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LOL! I love how he's so cocky, already thinking Lily will accept XD I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe. I know. :D
This is AWSOME!
Officially one of my favourites now!
It's really original, too.
Author's Response: Thank you!
i love this story! it is so funny and clever. wow, i really enjoy reading this and i can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
