Reviews For There is Another
Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/13/08 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 3: Darkness All Around

a good name would be Lion-O, i like the twist that Snape is the father nice one, can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/13/08 16:10
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

i love the idea of this story, so far so good

Reviewer: Padfoot366
Date: 03/27/08 17:10
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

I love you're story

I can't wait to read more please hurry

Reviewer: lilly sara black
Date: 10/10/07 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 3: Darkness All Around


Author's Response: I'm sorry, my comp well, decided it didn't like me and lost the file. so i'v had to rewrite everything from scratch. im trying!!!! dont give up!!!

Reviewer: DarkJoker
Date: 10/08/07 4:27
Chapter: Chapter 3: Darkness All Around


Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 08/24/07 22:14
Chapter: Chapter 3: Darkness All Around

Dante. Or Edward or it can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: hmm... those are good. thank you. *cookies* im writing the next one now. i should have it to my beta in a few days.

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 08/14/07 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 3: Darkness All Around

Wow, It was short, but I really liked it. The intrigue is killing me! Update soon :)

Author's Response: Thats what I like to hear! I'll be updating in about two weeks. School is starting monday and I have to make sure i survive the first week.

Reviewer: edenslytherin
Date: 06/19/07 22:29
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

it was okay... but kind of slow... it has suppense though...

Author's Response: I know. it starts to move in a few chapters.

Reviewer: HedwigsChristie
Date: 06/19/07 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Curiosity and Vampires

Wow great story very mysterious can't wait for more i found a few mistakes throguh the few chapters but nothing major.
Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. it would be a great help if you would send me a message or an email or something with the mistakes. sadly, there wont be an update for about a month. im gonna be out og the country.

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 06/18/07 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: Of Curiosity and Vampires

Well, you've got my attention. Keep 'em comin'.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 06/10/07 16:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: First Impressions

So many interesting gadgets, I'm liking Kyranna already!

Author's Response: lol. Just wait.

Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 06/10/07 16:12
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

OOOOOOh! truly the mystery!
I love the entire idea so far,
of Voldy's daughter and all!

Author's Response: Thank you. I almost put it in mystery, but i felt with the way the plot will turn it belonged in AU. The part about her being Voldy's daughter will play a big part in the end.

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 06/09/07 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: First Impressions

Great chapter!
I am confused wheter Kyranna is a good or bad person!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Thats the point. Everyone will have their own thoughts till the end. as soon as my chapter gets back from by lovely beta Colores, i will put it up.

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 06/08/07 23:16
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

fab u lus, waiting for an update!

Author's Response: My next chapter is with my beta right now. i'm hoping to update one or two more times before i go out of town for a while.

Reviewer: hpotterownss5567
Date: 06/08/07 22:43
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

When I saw the story I didn't think I'd like this but I think it's gonna turn out to be a rlly good story, I like these first two chapters alot.

Author's Response: Thank you. I know it starts out slow, but it starts moving soon. i promise.

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 03/23/07 18:20
Chapter: Prologue: It has Happened

Don't know why no one has reviewed yet. Your first chapter is a really good first chapter, quick, to the point and it definitly grabbed my attention.
I hope you don't leave this story till it's done, because you can write, and you have a good imagination.
One thing though, I hope your chapters are not this short, personally, I find stories with short chapters hard to read because each scence ends quickly to change to something else which makes it a bit annoying, but its your story to do as will.
Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't plan on leaving this story. i really like it and this is the second time I started it because I lost the original final. And all the chapters are not this short. this is an attention grabber of a sort. Thank you.

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