Reviews For Rescue Me
Reviewer: hpluver365
Date: 04/04/07 14:59
Chapter: Struggle

One word...wow! This is even better than your poem! Awesome word choice, flow, and rhyming. This is definetely what I see running through Snapes head. I really love when you say "Rescue me from the chains that consume me." That is such a great line. I think you did a great job of portraying Snapes struggle through this sonnet. You should write more of these!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you very much! Yes, Snape is such a hard character to portray, which is one of the reasons why I chose him. I laughed when I read that line again, "Rescue me..." I like that line too. Maybe I will write another soon! Thanks again for your wonderful review!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 03/28/07 17:33
Chapter: Struggle

Nice job! Your use of language really adds to the overall tone of the poem, particularly the rhymes you chose to complete each line. The end is great! Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I befriended my thesaurus when I wrote this sonnet...it is good to know that some of my AP English skills are rubbing off in my writing! Thanks again for a lovely review!

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